storyboard improvemnt final finished

Shot No.

1

The artist is sitting on her bed flicking through magazines which you can see is full of celebrities and models.

Type of shot, movement and angle.

High angle shot

midshot

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.

Low key lighting lamp on

In her bedroom

Casual, dark clothing jeans/long sleeved top

Minimal make-up

Ambient sounds

Frame duration

3 seconds

Editing notesQuick Cut

Shot No.

2

Artist will then be sitting on her bed scrolling through Instagram looking at celebrities and models.


High angle shot

Close up

Over the shoulder


Low key lighting

In the bedroom

Casual, dark clothing

Minimal make-up

Ambient sounds

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notesQuick cut

Shot No.

3

4

Artist picks up all the letters that came in the post and flicks through them until the one with her name is on it.

It will cut back to her sitting on the bed flicking through magazines which she will then slam the magazines down on her bed.

Type of shot, movement and angle.High angle

closeup

High angle shot

Midshot

Side shot

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Casual clothing

Music

Natural lighting

Low key lighting lamp on

In her bedroom

Casual, dark clothing jeans/long sleeved top

Minimal make-up

Ambient sounds

Frame duration2 seconds

2 seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

5

6

The artist will then walk over to her dressing table and sit down and look at herself.

She will open the letter which has her name on it.


Tracking

Longshot

Close up

High angle

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Low key lighting lamp on

In her bedroom

Casual, dark, clothing

Minimal make-up

Music

Music

Natural lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

7

She will then mess with her hair and get annoyed with it; looking at herself in her reflection.


Over the shoulder shot

High angle


Low key lighting Casual clothingMinimal make-upmusicFrame duration

2 seconds

Editing notesQuick Cut

Shot No.

8

Brush your hair She will then brush her hair, looking at her reflection in the mirror.


Side shot

High angle


Low key lighting

Casual clothing

Minimal make-up

Props - hair brush/mirror

music

2 seconds


Shot No.

9

She will have the letter in her hand and her hand will be shaking.


Close up

High angle


Music

Natural lighting

Casual clothing

Nail varnish

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

Shot No.

10

She will then be scrolling through Instagram again whilst sitting on her bed.


High angle shot

Midshot

Over the shoudler


Low key lighting lamp only in the bedroom Casual, dark clothing Minimal make-upmusic

Frame duration

2 seconds


Shot No.

11

She will be back sitting at the dressing table looking at her self pulling her hair through her fingers and then putting her head in her hands.



Slight high angle


Low key lighting lamp only

in the bedroom Casual, dark clothing Minimal make-upmusicFrame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

Cut

Shot No.

12

A close up of her crying (tears coming down her face) will be shown.


High angle

Closeup


Low key lighting

Minimal makeup

music

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

13

14

Artist and her friends are walking through the park to try and take her mind of the situation.

She will then be sitting on the sofa watching the TV and a beauty advert comes on.


Longshot / midshot


High angle

Midshot


High angle


Park

Music

Natural lighting

Casual clothing

Casual clothing


Minimal make up

music

Frame duration

2 seconds

2 seconds

Editing notes

Cut

Shot No.

15

Her and her friends are walking back in the park.


Straight angle

Close up


ParkMusic Natural lighting Casual clothingFrame duration

One second

Editing notes

Shot No.

16

The artist will then walk over to her wardrobe and pick out her prom dress and holds it up infront of her.


Midshot

High angle

Tracking

Side shot to over the shoulder


She will be wearing casual clothing but pick out a prom dress.

Minimal make-up

Bedroom

music

Frame duration

3 seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

17

Artist and her friends walking in the park again; laughing and encouraging her.



Midshot


casual clothing Park

Music

Natural lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes Cut

Shot No.

18

She will then throw her prom dress on the floor.

Type of shot, movement and angle.Midshot


casual clothingMinimal make-upBedroommusic

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

19

20

Artist and her friend will be chatting in the coffee shop.

She will then be sat at her dressing table and will start doing her make- up.

Type of shot, movement and angle.Side shot

Midshot


High angle

Midshot

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Caf

Casual clothing

Music

Natural lighting

Casual clothing

Make-up

Bedroom

Low-key lighting lamp only

music

Frame duration

1 second

2 seconds

Editing notes

Cut

Shot No.

21

Without falling down, down, down. When these lyrics are said, she will look up at the camera.


Close up

Straight angle


Only a little bit of make-up

Low-key lighting

Bedroom

music

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

22

23

Artist and her friends are walking through the park and they are reassuring her in a little circle.

She will walk over and step onto some scales.Type of shot, movement and angle.Slight close up

Slight High angle

Longshot


High angle

tracking

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Music

Natural lighting

Casual clothing

park

Low key lighting

Bedrrom/bathroom

Minimal make-up

Casual clothing

music

Frame duration

2 seconds

2 seconds

Editing notes

Cut

Shot No.

24

Close up of the scales so we are able to see how much she weights.


Extreme close up

High angle


Scales


Music

Bedroom / bathroom

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

25

26

Tears falling down her face.

She will be looking at herself in a long mirror and pinch her fat/stomach.

Type of shot, movement and angle.Close up

Side shot

Longshot


High angle


Low key lighting

Music

Casual clothing / vest top

Low key lighting- lamp

Bedroom

Frame duration

1 second

2seconds

Editing notes

Cut

Shot No.

27

Artist is rehearsing in her bedroom.


High angle

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Bedroom

Microphone

Casual clothing

Low key lighting

Music

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

28

She will then fall to the floor upset.


High angle

Midshot


Bedroom

Music

Low key lighting

Casual clothing

Minimal make-up

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

29

Rehearsing on the stage.


Longshot

High angle


Music

Natural lighting

casual clothing

Bedroom

Frame duration

2seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

30

Watching beauty tutorials on youtube in her bedroom.



High angle

Slight close up


Casual clothing

Music

Natural lighting

Frame duration

2seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

31

Goes back to rehearsals in her bedroom and she gets frustrated. Shes holding the lyrics in her hand.


High angle

Midshot


Music

Low key lighting

Bedroom

Casual clothing

Microphone and lyrics

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

Cut

Shot No.

32

Tears running down the artists face again.


Close up

Straight angle


Music

Low key lighting

Casual clothing

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

33

Back in the coffee shop and the artist is talking to her friends.


Side shot

midshot


Coffee shop

Casual clothing

Natural lighting

music

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

34

Rehearsing on the stage with a mic.


Close upslight high angleDialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.

Music

Low key lighting

Stage

Casual clothing

Microphone

Frame duration

2 second

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

35

She will then cut back to her doing her hair and looking at her self in the mirror with wet hair so shes just had a shower.



High angle

Midshot


Music

Low key lighting

Minimal make-up

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

36

The artist will then pick up a box of pills of her bedroom shelf.


Close up

High angle


Pills

Music

Low key lighting

Bedroom

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

37

It will cut back to the artist infront of the mirror drying her hair.


Side shot

High angle

Close up


Low key lighting

Music

Bedroom

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

Cut

Shot No.

38

The artist will be lying on the floor.


High angle

Midshot

Camera will pan from toe to head


Casual clothing

Bedroom

Music

Low key lighting

Frame duration

2 second

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

39

40

The artist will then tip the pills onto her hands.

Artist will get given a note from her friends in the coffee shop which will read youre beautiful or something like that.


Close-up High angle

Slight mid shot Straight angle


Casual clothingLow key lightingBedroom Music Water and pills

Coffee shop Casual clothing Music Natural lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

2seconds

Editing notes

Shot No. 41

42

The artist will then take the pills and she will swallow them with water.

Doing her make-up (mascara/blusher)


Close up

High angle

High angle

Close-up

Side shot


Casual clothing

Music

Low key lighting

Casual clothing

Bedroom

Low key lighting

music

Frame duration

2 seconds

2 seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

43

There will be a shot of her looking down at the floor.

Type of shot, movement and angle.Slight high angle

Close up


Casual clothing

Bedroom

Low key lighting

music


Editing notes

Shot No.

44. She will then wipe her make-up off frustrated with herself; looking at her reflection in the mirror.


Midshot

High angle


Bedroom

Casual clothing

Low key lighting lamp

Music

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

45Brushing her teeth


Side shot

Close up


Bathroom

Low key lighting

Music

Casual clothing

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

46

Shot of the note that he friends gave her.


Close up

High angle


Music

Low key lighting

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

Shot No.47

At this point she will have her gym kit on and she will be looking at her stomach.



High angle


Low key lighting

Bedroom

Music

Gym kit

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

cut

Shot No. 48

49

Artist is on the stage rehearsing again.

She will place her feet into her gym trainers which her gym bag will be placed next too and she does that a letter gets posted through the door.


High angle

midshot

high angle angle

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Stage

Music

Low key lighting

Casual clothing

Natural lighting

By house front door

Music


2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

50

51

Rehearsing in her bedroom and gets annoyed again.

She will then walk into the gym and walk over to the bike.


High angle

Longshot

Tracking

Slight low angle


Music

Low key lighting

Mic and lyrics

Gym

Natural lighting

Gym kit

Music


2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

52

It will show her all sweaty on the bike wiping her sweat of her forehead.


Close up

Straight angle


Gym

Gym kit

Music

Natural lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

Shot No.

53

She will open the letter that came in the post and it will be of her friends saying something along the lines of you can do this


High angle


Music

Natural lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

54

The artist will then run on the running track.


Longshot

Slight high angle


Natural day light

Music

Gym kit

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notesCut

Shot No.55

56

Artist rehearsing on the stage.

She will then be swimming doing frontcrawl.


Longshot

High angle

Midshot

High angle


Natural lighting

Mic

Casual clothing

Swimming costume

Natural lighting

Swimming pool

Music

Frame duration1 second

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.57

58

Back looking at magazines of models etc.

It will go back to her at the end of the running track collapsing/lying on the floor.


High angle

Close up

Close up

High angle

Pan from head to toe


Magazine

Music

Low keylighting

Casual clothing

Gym kit

Running track

Music

Natural lighting

Frame duration

1 second

2 seconds.

Editing notesCut

Shot No.59

60At the end of the swimming pool taking a swig of water.

Artist and her friends are sat on her bed.


Close up

Slight high angle

Longshot

High angle


Swimming pool

Natural lighting

Music

Water bottle

Bedroom

Music

Low key lighting

Casual clothing

Frame duration

2 seconds

2 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

61

In the changing rooms looking in the mirror at her relfection.



Straight angle


Swimming changing rooms

Music

Natural lighting

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notesCut

Shot No.

62



High angle

Mid shot


Music

Natural lighting

Casual clothing

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

Cut

Shot No.

63

64

Artist and her friends are talking on her bed; they give her a photoframe.

She will be sat at the dinner table with her family talking she will be staring at her food


Close up

High angle

Long shot

High angle


Bedroom

Music

Low key lighting

Dining table

Casual clothing

Natural lighting

music

Frame duration

2 seconds

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

65

It will then cut back to her in her bedroom sitting next to her door crying tugging her hair.


High angle

Mid shot


Music

Low key lighting

Bedroom

Casual clothing

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

66

It will then cut back to her sitting at the dining table with her food in front of her and she will then stand up and leave.


Long shot

High angle


Dining table Casual clothingNatural lightingFrame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.67

68

Shot of the photoframe

She will walk into the toilet and lean down and then will start gagging.


High angle

High angle

Mid shot


Tracking


Low keylighting

Music

Low key lighting

Casual clothing

Bathoom


2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

69

She will be crying wiping the tears away.


Close up

High angle


Minimal make-up

Music

Low key lighting

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

70

She will then brush her teeth and look up in the mirror.


Side shot

Close up


Bathroom

Music

Low key lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

Shot No.

71

Rehearsing in her bedroom again.


Midshot

High angle


Bedroom

Casual clothing

Low key lighting

Music

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

72

Brushing her hair in front of a mirror


Side shot

High angle


Bedroom

Low key lighting

Casual clothing

music

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

73

74

Sitting in the living room fed up.

Back in the bedroom with her friends talking and laughing.


Long shot

High angle

Close up

High angle


Living room

Music

Low key lighting

Bedroom

Music

Low key lighting

Frame duration

1 second

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

75

She will be crying.


Close up

High angle


Music

Low key lighting

Casual clothing

Frame duration1 second

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

76

She will then be brushing her teeth


Medium close up

high angle


Music

Low key lighting

Bathroom

Casual clothing

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.77

78


A close up of her picking the pills up of her shelf


High angle

Close up

High angle

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Stage

Music

Natural lighting

Casual clothing

Bedroom

Music

Low key lighting


1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

79

She will be sat in front of the mirror putting her make up on.


Side shot

High angle


Bedroom

Music

Low key lighting

Casual clothing

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

80

Cut back to rehearsals in her bedroom


Close up

High angle


Bedroom

Low key lighting

Music

Casual clothing

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes cut

Shot No.

81

Brushing her teeth again.


Close up

Straight angle


music

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

82

She will pick up the prom dress and will hold it up against her.



Midshot


Bedroom

Lighting is getting lighter little daylight through the blinds

Music

Casual clothing wearing

Holding up a nice dress

A little make up

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

83

Artist looking at the camera


Close up

Straight angle


Music

Bathroom

Natural lighting

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

Shot No.

84

She will look at herself in the long mirror and then will look at her side fat. Type of shot, movement and angle.

Midshot

Side shot


Bedroom

Music

Low key lighting

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

85

It will cut back to her doing her make up again but a different sort foundation.


High angle



Bedroom

Music

Lowkey lighting

Casual clothing

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

86

She will be straightening her hair.

Type of shot, movement and angle.Side shot

Slight high angle


Music

Lowkey lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

87

The artist will be lying on the floor with her hair spread out camera will go from head to toe.

Type of shot, movement and angleMidshot

Pan

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Bedroom floor

make-up

music

low key lighting


Editing notescut

Shot No.

88

Artist will look at herself in the mirror.


slight high angleOver the shoulder shot


Bedroom Music Low key lighting but little daylight

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

Shot No.

89

Rehearsing on stage and she puts her head down.


Close up

High angle


Music

Low key lighting

Stage

Casual clothing

microphone

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

90

She will be lying on her bed.


Mid shot

High angle


Bedroom

Music

Casual clothing

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

91

Shot of her with her head in her hands.


Close up

High angle


Bedroom

Music

Low key lighting

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

92

Holding the pills, her hand will be shaking and she will tip two into her hand.

Type of shot, movement and angle.Close up High angle


Music

Low key lighting

Bedroom

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

93

Rehearsing in her bedroom.


Side shot

Slight high angle

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Music Low key lighting Casual clothing Bedroom

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

94

Artist looking at the photoframe which is now on the shelf.


Mid shot

High angle

Side shot


Music

Casual clothing

Low key lighting

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

95

She will throw the pills and the pill box onto the floor.


Midshot

Slight low angle


Bedroom

Music

Slight high key lighting

Casual clothing

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.96

Artist will be backstage looking in the mirror checking her make-up.


Slight high angle

mid shot


Backstage

Music

Minimal make up

High key lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

97

She will stand on the pills and smash up the box/s.


High angle


Casual shoes

Music

High key lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notescut

Shot No.

98

Backstage and someone is zipping up her dress.

Type of shot, movement and angle. close up

Straight angle

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.High key lighting

Music

backstage


Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

99

She will pick up the magazines and rip them up and throw them around.


Longshot

Low angle


Bedroom

High key lighting

Music

Casual clothing


Editing notes

Shot No.

100

Backstage her friend finalizing her make up


mid shot

slight low angle

side shot


Music

High key lighting

Backstage

Make-up

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

101

The artist will be standing in the room with the ripped up magazines around her and will be smiling.


Longshot

Low angle


Bedroom

Music

High key lighting

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

102

Backstage the artist and her friends are talking and supporting her before she goes on.


Low angle

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene.Prom dress

Music

High key lighting

backstage

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

Shot No.

103

Artist looking at the camera smiling.


Close up

Straight angle


Music

High key lighting

Prom dress

makeup

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

104

Her friends and the artist do a group hand shake before she enters the stage.


Mid shot

Low angle

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-scene. High key lighting

Music

Make up

Prom dress

Back stage

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

105

Artist and her friends laughing in the bedroom.


Close up

Low angle


Music

No make up

High key lighting

bedroom

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notescut

Shot No.

106

Friends and the artist are having a group hug


midshot

Low angle


Music

High key lighting

Backstage

Prom dress

Make up

Frame duration

2 seconds

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

107

Artist waiting to go onstage and a friend is calming her down/laughing.


Close up

Side shot

Low angle


Music

High key lighting

Back stage

Prom dress

Make up

Frame duration

1 second

Editing notes

cut

Shot No.

108

Artist walks onto the stage and starts to sing


Mid shot turns into a longshot

Slight Low angle


Music

High key lighting

Prom dress

Make up

Stage

Frame duration

3 seconds

Editing notes

storyboard improvemnt final finished

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