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Shot description –Zoom in on rocking chair as it moves slightly.Camera movement –Zoom on chair.Figure movement – No figure movementThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – No speech or non diegetic. The sound of something falling from a shelf for the diegetic.

Slug line – INT – Day - Its set in an attic full of miscellaneous objects, cluttered and dis organised. Whilst at the end of the attic an old rocking chair is sat on its own. 5 sec

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Shot description – An object is thrown down some lowered stairs (forgotten to be replaced back up) from the attic. Camera movement – Tracks and zooms on object.Figure movement – noneEditing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - diegetic sound is the radio playing red stars by birthday massacre quietly in the background, the sound of her footsteps are over emphasised. No speech.

Slug line – INT. Hallway in a regular family home, late afternoon day time 4 sec

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Shot description – The ghost Grace who is pale and messy with tangled hair and dark circles under her eyes is now stood halfway down the steps.Camera movement – Long shot, no movement.Figure movement – No movement from Grace.Editing instruction –cutsThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - diegetic sound is the radio playing red stars by birthday massacre quietly in the background, the sound of her footsteps are over emphasised. No speech.

Slug line – INT. Hallway in a regular family home, late afternoon day time1.5 sec

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Shot description – The character grace is now shown moving down the stairs into the house from the attic.Camera movement – Tracking shotFigure movement – Walking down the steps, slowly while limping.Editing instruction –CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – diegetic sound is the radio playing red stars by birthday massacre quietly in the background, the sound of her footsteps are over emphasised. No speech.

Slug line – INT. slightly messy Hallway of family home with drawers and cupboards, late afternoon time. Time: 2 sec

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Shot description – Close up on the radio which shows the bars moving on the screen.Camera movement – close up on radioFigure movement – no figure movementEditing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Diegetic sound is the song red stars by birthday massacre playing from the radio.

Slug line – INT. large bedroom with a double bed and most surfaces covered in books or other common items. A large stereo is turned on in the corner which is shown by the lighting being turned on. 3 sec

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Shot description – Curled up on the edge of a bed is a black haired, attractive young adult, Sammie. Wearing black jeans, t-shirt and hoodie.Camera movement – long shot of SammieFigure movement – Sammie is asleep on the bed whilst Russell is asleep on the floor with his back propped up against the bedEditing instruction – FadesThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - diegetic sound is Red stars by birthday massacre

Slug line – INT. large bedroom with a double bed and most surfaces covered in books or other common items. A large stereo is turned on in the corner which is shown by the lighting being turned on. 4 sec

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Shot description – The bedroom door is shown close upCamera movement – close upFigure movement – noneEditing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Slow paced eerie childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

2 secSlug line – The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed.

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Shot description – Close up of Grace’s Face (the ghost girl)Camera movement – Close upFigure movement – face of Grace is the only figure shownEditing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

2 secSlug line – The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed.

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Shot description – Grace is shown standing in the doorway with hand on the door frame leaning slightlyCamera movement – long shotFigure movement – Grace is shown leaning slightly on the doorframeEditing instruction –cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

Slug line – INT. The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed. 2 sec

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Shot description – close up on hand on doorframeCamera movement – close up on handFigure movement – slight tightening of hand on doorframeEditing instruction –cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

Slug line – INT. The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed. 3 sec

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Shot description –close up on Grace’s eyesCamera movement – close upEditing instruction –cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Slow paced eerie childlike humming is heard over the radio playing

1 secSlug line – Slug line – INT. The bedroom is her parent’s and still shows signs of being lived in with half open books on bed side tables and clothes still waiting to be put away. In the centre of the room is a large double bed.

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Shot description – Radio shows on the screen it is no longer playing by the bars no longer movingCamera movement –Close up on the radioFigure movement –Editing instruction – CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Childlike humming is heard still but the radio no longer plays.

Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday 3 sec

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Shot description – Grace begins to move towards Russell as he moves slightly in his sleep.Camera movement – over the shoulder shotFigure movement – Grace moving towards Russell whilst he sleeps.Editing instruction – CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – The humming continues but no other sound is heard.

Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday 2sec

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Shot description – Russell is shown still sleeping through a close upCamera movement – Close upFigure movement – slight movement in sleep as if he might wake up at any moment.Editing instruction – CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Humming continues

4 secSlug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday

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Shot description – Grace’s feet (ghost girl) are shown walking across the carpetCamera movement – Tracking shot of her feetFigure movement –Grace’s Slow paced walkingEditing instruction –CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Humming is still heard.

4 secSlug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday

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Shot description – Scissors are shown being lifted high in the airCamera movement – Tracking shot of the scissors being raised in the airFigure movement – Hands are shown lifting the scissorsEditing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Humming is still heard through diegetic noise but non diegetic sound is introduced with the sound of string instruments becoming a higher pitch as the scissors are raised.

5 secSlug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday

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Shot description – Sammie is shown waking up and quickly sitting up.Camera movement – Zoom out from a mid-shot of SammieFigure movement – Sammie wakes up and quickly sits upEditing instruction – CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) –Sammie breathing heavily is heard

2 secSlug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday

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Shot description – The room is shown to be clear of anyone but Sammie and RussellCamera movement – Pans around room from Sammies POVFigure movement – No movementEditing instruction – CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) –Sammie breathing heavily is heard.

Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday 8 sec

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Shot description – Bedroom door is shown slamming shutCamera movement –close up of doorFigure movement –NoneEditing instruction – CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Looking glass by The Birthday Massacre is heard on the radio and the sound of the door slamming is heard.

Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday 1 sec

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Shot description – Mid shot of Sammie scrambling towards Russell obviously scaredCamera movement – Tracking shot of Sammie moving towards RussellFigure movement – Sammie quickly gets up and moves towards RussellEditing instruction – CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Looking Glass by The Birthday Massacre is still playing on the radio.

2 secSlug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday

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Shot description – Sammie tries to wake Russell upCamera movement – over the shoulder shot of Sammie and RussellFigure movement – Sammie tries to wake Russell up whilst grabbing him whilst Russell continues being asleepEditing instruction – CutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Quiet but panicked Sammie tells Russell to wake up, the radio continues to play.

2 secSlug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday

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Shot description – Sammie carries on shaking Russell until he wakes upShot duration –Camera movement –over the shoulder shot of Sammie looking at RussellFigure movement – Sammie is shown shaking Russell quite violently until he wakes upEditing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) - Panicked Sammie tells Russell to wake up again, the radio continues to play.

5 secSlug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday

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Shot description – Close up of Russell waking up fullyCamera movement – Close up of Russell’s faceFigure movement – Russell’s facial reactions show him as groggy stillEditing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Looking Glass is still being played on the radio.

2 secSlug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday

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Shot description – Two shot of them both jumping when Loud banging is heard from the atticCamera movement –Two shot of Sammie and RussellFigure movement – Both jump when the banging begins Editing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Looking glass is still playing from the radio. Russell yells ‘What the hell is that?!’

2 secSlug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday

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Shot description – close up of the bedroom doorCamera movement –close up of the doorFigure movement – no figure movementEditing instruction – cutThree soundtracks (Diegetic, non diegetic & speech) – Banging continues as the song finishes on the radio.

Slug line – INT. Bedroom - Midday 7 sec