sorrow creative writing dos and donts
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The Sorrow of WarCreative Response
South Island School
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'The veins bulging in the biro...'
'The fruit which once filled the room with autumnal goodness and the odour of a better
tomorrow now stared empty, rotten and accusing like the eyes of the young men
crushed brutally by the cold hand of the war machine's deadly fist of fiery vengeance...'
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'Show, don't tell...'
'I looked hard at him. He represented the past for me and I realised that he was an embodiment of all that I had lost. I was a weak person and he was strong, and in asking him to spend the night, I was trying to recreate what I had lost...'
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Here we go again...
Deafening silences? Breathless whispers? Trembling knees? Does night fall like a
shroud? Do two hearts come together as one? Is it silent except for the sounds of his beating
heart? Does she hold him like she will never let go?
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Verbal diarrohea...
'My eyes began to shed tears...'
'I experienced a strange desire to tremble uncontrollably...'
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K.I.S.S.
'I could sense goodbye, and I feared it...'
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K.I.S.S.
'On Viet's birthday, the flowers surprised both mother and son...'
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K.I.S.S.
'As we entered the house, the last rays of the sun slanted over the long grasses, now tinged
pink in the sunset.'
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K.I.S.S.
'His eyes dark with sorrow, his voice dull with regret.'
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K.I.S.S.
'Maybe I could make him my own. I asked him to stay, and he did. For that night, I had
someone.'
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Images – worth a thousand words...
'She could not look at him. His face was scarred by war...'
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Keep Control!
'The bricks of the well were starting to wear away...'
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WORK that image...
'He left only his shadow, and that quickly faded...'
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Time Traveller...
'I never wanted to let go of his hand, for it seemed I had made that mistake before...'