shot log 2
TRANSCRIPT
Shot Log 2
Production name BREAK
Director Isobel Bayliss Date Wednesday 3rd November
Camera Operator Lauren Murray & Danielle Treanor Location London Road
Scene Take
Duration
Description Quality of
video(1=good, 3= poor)
Usable (yes/no
)
Notes
5(00006)
1 6 seconds
Establishing shot of location. 1 Yes6 seconds
This is a clear establishing shot setting the scene, letting the audience aware of where the characters are. The camera movement is smooth and clear.
5(00007)
1 3 seconds
Low angle of Kelly (Danielle) shouting aggressively at Rosie (Keely).
2 Yes2 seconds
It is a clear shot with the correct dialogue; however the end seconds would need to be cut, due to the actress laughing and not following the script.
5(00008)
2 2 seconds
Low angle of Kelly (Danielle) shouting aggressively at Rosie (Keely).
2 Yes 1 second
It is a clear shot with the correct dialogue; however the end seconds would need to be cut, due to the actress laughing and not following the script.
5(00009)
3 11 seconds
Low angle of Kelly (Danielle) shouting aggressively at Rosie (Keely).
1 Yes7 – 11 seconds
The beginning will need cutting; however the last 4 seconds were perfect. It was a clear shot and followed the correct dialogue on the script.
5(00010)
1 5 seconds
High angle of Rosie (Keely) asking Kelly (Danielle) to stop.
2 No It is clear the actress is smiling; therefore it needed to be re-filmed.
5(00011)
2 2 seconds
High angle of Rosie (Keely) asking Kelly (Danielle) to stop.
1 Yes2 seconds
The dialogue is correct and the shot is clear and precise. The camera is also positioned in a nice way.
5(00012)
1 3 seconds
Wide shot of the girls fighting. 3 No The action is not realistic.
5(00013)
2 6 seconds
Wide shot of the girls fighting. 1 Yes6 seconds
The dialogue is correct and the action looks more realistic.
1(00014)
1 5 seconds
Audio of heavy breathing 1 Yes5 seconds
The audio recording worked well and was not disrupted.
5(00016)
1 15 seconds
Close up of Rosie’s (Keely) eyes opening.
1 Yes14 – 15 seconds
The whole beginning will need to be cut as it is not needed but the eyes opening was captured in great timing.
5(00017)
2 15 seconds
Close up of Rosie’s (Keely) eyes opening.
1 Yes 13 – 15 seconds
The whole beginning will need to be cut as it is not needed but the eyes opening was captured in great timing and lasts longer than the first clip.
5(00018)
1 6 seconds
Wide shot of the girls pushing Rosie (Keely) around.
2 Yes3 seconds
The first 3 seconds where successful and clear; however the end 3 seconds is not necessary.
4(00020)
1 4 seconds
Low angle of Kelly (Danielle) asking to speak to Rosie (Keely)
3 No Danielle is not in the shot, the audience will be unable to see her.
4(00022)
2 6 seconds
Low angle of Kelly (Danielle) asking to speak to Rosie (Keely)
2 Yes 6 seconds
Although her eyes are out of the shot, it is slightly effective as you can hear the anger in her voice and the movement of her lips. This is a useable shot.
4 (00029)
1 9 seconds
Low/Mid angle of Kelly (Danielle) and her Gang Stacey (Isobel) and Chantelle (Molly).
3 No The dialogue was correct but one of the characters is not clearly in the clip, meaning it is unable to be used.
4(00030)
2 7 seconds
Low/Mid angle of Kelly (Danielle) and her Gang Stacey (Isobel) and Chantelle (Molly).
1 Yes7 seconds
The dialogue was correct, with the characters positioned in a perfect format with clear footage. This was a successfully shot.
4(00031)
1 6 seconds
High angle of Rosie (Keely) and her friend Kate (Lauren) replying to Kelly (Danielle).
1 Yes6 seconds
The dialogue is correct and the shot is clear.
4(00035)
1 8 seconds
Handheld camera movement and a point of view shot od Kelly (Danielle) storming down the stairs.
3 No The mice en scene is poor as the actors are apparent in the shot, meaning it cannot be used.
4(00037)
2 9 seconds
Handheld camera movement and a point of view shot od Kelly (Danielle) storming down the stairs.
2 Yes 9 seconds
The mice en scene is now improved, meaning the shot is now useable.
2(00038)
1 6 seconds
Establishing shot of the location, the bedroom.
1 Yes6 seconds
The camera movement is smooth and the actors are in character making it feel realistic.
2(00039)
1 2 seconds
Over the shoulder shot of Kelly (Danielle) bitching about Rosie (Keely).
3 No The microphone is in the shot, meaning it cannot be used.
2(00041)
2 2 seconds
Over the shoulder shot of Kelly (Danielle) bitching about Rosie (Keely).
1 Yes2 seconds
The dialogue is now clear with no disruption in the shot, all actresses are in character.
2(00045)
1 5 seconds
Two shot of the two girls Stacey (Isobel) and Chantelle (Molly) talking to Kelly (Danielle).
3 No The shot would have been successful however a phone goes off in the background, disrupting the clip.
2(00048)
2 6 seconds
Two shot of the two girls Stacey (Isobel) and Chantelle (Molly) talking to Kelly (Danielle).
1 Yes6 seconds
The shot is clear and the dialogue is correct, making it useable.
2(00053)
1 4 seconds
Low angle of Kelly (Danielle) stating her hate for Rosie (Keely).
2 Yes4 seconds
This is a good clear shot with no disruptions however the actress is not fully in character; therefore we decided to film it again.
2(00057)
2 4 seconds
Low angle of Kelly (Danielle) stating her hate for Rosie (Keely).
1 Yes4 seconds
This is a good clear shot with no disruptions and the actress was now in good character which created a better effect.
2(00058)
1 22 seconds
Focus pull of the pills 1 Yes
There are several parts of the focus pull which could be used; therefore part of it will need cutting.
2(00059)
1 8 seconds
Mid shot and panning of Chantelle (Molly) passing Kelly’s (Danielle) pills to Stacey (Isobel)
2 Yes The start of the recording shows another actress in the background. This would need cutting.
3(00063)
1 37 seconds
Over the shoulder shot of Kelly (Danielle) experiencing a personality change.Also involves a close up of her hands.
2 Yes0-5 seconds20-21 seconds33-37 seconds
The parts which can be used are smooth and contain the correct dialogue. However there are several parts in between which will need to be cut as they are not necessary and do not follow the scrip. The camera movement in those parts is also very shaky and not consistent.
3 (00064)
1 13 seconds
Mid shot of Kelly (Danielle) experiencing a personality change.Also involves panning.
1 Yes0-3 seconds4-13 seconds
The movement (panning) is smooth and consistent; however in the 4th second of the clip you can hear the camera operator speaking in the background. This will need cutting. Apart from that the dialogue is correct.
3(00065)
1 7 seconds
High angle shot of Kelly (Danielle) feeling vulnerable with her head in her hands.
2 Yes4 seconds
After 4 seconds there is a dog bark in the background; therefore this will need to be cut.
2(00066)
1 2 seconds
Long shot of Kelly (Danielle) opening the door.
2 No The clip ends suddenly, meaning the action was not fully filmed.
2(00067)
2 3 seconds
Long shot of Kelly (Danielle) opening the door.
1 Yes3 seconds
The clip was fully filmed, now able to see Kelly entering the room.