A2 Photography Assessment: Unit 3 Coursework Portfolio

STUDENT: Shelby Hincal CANDIDATE # TEACHER(S):Mr Holden/Ms Carey

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UNIT 3 n/a n/a n/a n/a n/a Shelby you have produced some very interesting work the experiment processes involved with the different items especially the pigs head are strong. There are a number of things that you have to revisit it improve the project I have listed them below. As the project progresses you must make sure to write exactly where you are going and why at the moment there are lots of visuals but not enough written explanations. The interim final piece needs to be refined dramatically I have again listed the improvements below. You must make sure that all artists you look at have at least one image analysed in detail and then connected to your own visual practise.TasksContact sheets need to be larger to enable viewer to see you r visual thought processesDocument process of cooking headDecay artists need to be added – Sam Taylor wood (VERITAS).Refine cut out skull imagesDocument all processesJaw bone on the human head a full skull needs to be found and photographedColour flesh on face change saturationDecay Skelton hair all parts of face need to show decayP

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UNIT 3 17 17 15 16 65 BThis is a working at grade at present you don’t not have a clearly defined final piece so this is reflected in your mark