SHAKES lALALI KI SHAYRI KA

TANQIDI MUTALEA

DISSERTATION

SUBMITTED IN PARTIAL FULFILMENT OF THE REQUIREMENTS FOR THE AWARD OF THE DEGREE OF

IN

URDU

By

SHAIKH HASINA ALI MOHAMMAD

Under the Supervision of

Dr. Mehtab Haider Naqvi

DEPARTMENT OF URDU ALIGARH MUSLIM UNIVERSITY

ALIGARH-202002 ( INDIA)

2008

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This is to certify that the thesis entitled "Shakeb Jalali Ki Shayri Ka

Tanqidi Mutalea" is an original work of Mrs. Shaikh Hasina Ali

Mohd. done under my supervision and is suitable for submission for

the award of M.Phil, degree in Urdu. It is further certified that this

work has not been submitted to any other University for any other

degree.

Counter Signature

(Prof. Khurshid Ahmad) (Dr. Mehtab Haider Naqvi) Chairman Supervisor

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