Secondary Cohort: Reading and Writing Expository Texts—Writing to PersuadeMichelle Fowler-AmatoLynn MastersonHeart of Texas Writing ProjectDecember 7 & 8, 2011

Agenda

8:30 – 9:00 Feature Article & Notebook9:00 – 10:00 Reading Workshop: Editorial10:00 – 10:15 Break10:15 – 11:30 Writing Workshop: Editorial

Our purpose… Today, we will explore the genre of

editorial/op-ed (writing to persuade) by experiencing a mini-inquiry into this form of writing.We will spend time reading examples and developing criteria for the structure of editorials/op-ed pieces for the explicit purpose of learning how to write in this genre.

Revisiting Feature Articles & Notebooks

QuestionsCommentsCelebrations

Writing to PersuadePersuading readers to believe as I do—

“A form that is dedicated to civic discourse, to shaping opinions, changing minds, and effecting change” (Lattimer, 2003, p. 116). “…grab the reader by the lapel and say, ‘Listen to this; look at the evidence; you can’t deny I’m right!’ In texts that are explicitly argumentative, the voice is more urgently assertive and the structure is tightly controlled by the shape of the argument” (Bomer, 1995, p. 177).

So…What have you read that is like what you are trying to write?Possible Structures: • Clear positioning—stating a strong opinion—the writer

works hard to convince the reader of the validity of the argument

• Journey of thought ending with the important idea—less convincing; however, it is more thought provoking.

(Ray, 2006)

Thinking Through the Genre

Referring to pages 115 – 119 in Lattimer’s (2003) chapter, Editorial, share the sentence you underlined that represents an important idea in the text and your response to this idea with your table.

Reading WorkshopDeveloping Comprehension

Asking the Essential QuestionsDecoding Editorial Structure

Questioning the TextDetermining Your Position

When reading an editorial,think about what you expect before you start reading.take your time. Don’t rush.reread to make sure nothing is missed.use the essential questions to help figure out what to look for. think things through in your own words. add answers to the essential questions as you read. underline important things in the text. make notes in the margins.use the essential questions to summarize what you find at the end.wait until you are finished and understand the editorial before thinking about your own opinion.

Asking Essential Questions

Each table has an editorial or op-ed piece in the center. Please read, then have a conversation at your table that addresses the following questions:

1. What is the issue?2. What is the author’s purpose?3. What are the arguments that support this position?4. How does this editorial change how I think about

the issue?

Whole Group Share

Decoding the Editorial Structure

Students need to recognize…position statementsexplanations of an issue supporting argumentspersuasive techniques such as rhetorical questionslanguage that authors use to signal when they are making an argument, denouncing a counterargument, or revealing their position

• Using the same article, underline and label these criteria

• Share your findings at your table• Share whole group

Annotating the EditorialQuestioning the Author:

Where did you get this information? Is it reliable?How do you know that? Would all people agree?What are other ways this problem could be addressed?What will be the consequences if this does/does not happen? Who will benefit? Who will face problems?What does this word mean?This argument is confusing. What are you really saying?What about this other information [not included]? How does this fit with the argument?

Determining Your OpinionStudents reflect on their reading, questioning to determine for themselves their opinion.

What is your opinion of the editorial? What do you agree with? Disagree with? What is the editorial’s strength? Greatest weakness?Where do you stand on the issue? What questions do you still have? What additional information do you need to help you determine your own position? How do your questions help you to determine your opinion of the editorial and your position on the issue?

So…at your tables answer the following questions

What are the defining characteristics of an editorial? What must an editorial or any piece with the purpose of persuading have?What may an editorial or any piece with the purpose of persuading have?What is the purpose of a persuasive text?For whom is a persuasive text written?Why is audience so important?

Writing Workshop:Defining a persuasive text

Understanding how to craft argumentative text (editorials, commentary, op-ed)

Persuading your audience

“Passion is at the heart of inquiry. Interest and curiosity breed engagement. We must honor kids’ passion and celebrate their individuality. Exploring passions, interests and questions brings the world into focus and opens the door for the broadest interpretation of ideas.”-Stephanie Harvey

Graffiti Wall: Generating Ideas

Each poster on the wall lists one place in which you get ideas for argument notebook entries. Take 10 minutes to review the options listed. On each poster, list potential topics that come to mind.Take some time to read the ideas of your peers. Do any of these ideas speak to you?

Questions that Can Spark an Editorial…

have more than one reasonable answer

often begin with should

focus on smaller issues within the larger topic

Choosing a Topic: Turn and Talk

What issues do you feel most passionately about?What issues are most familiar or accessible?Now choose one of these issues to explore through the writing of a persuasive text.3 minute quick-write

Audience“Writers need to be pretty explicitly aware of what they intend to do to an audience with this piece of writing—their purpose for publishing. They need to decide what they want their audience to understand, know, believe, and feel, how they want to affect or change the people who will read this particular piece of writing.”

-Randy Bomer

Modeling a Mini-lesson

ConnectionTeachActivityLinkFollow-Up

Describe your audience.What do you want your audience to know, understand, believe, or feel?What do they currently know, understand, believe and feel?How will you affect or change your audience?

Mini-lesson: Activity

Modeling a Mini-lesson

Connection— “Recently, I have asked you…”

Teach— “…making decisions about your audience and your purpose…”

ActivityLink— “So when you are working…”Follow-Up— “During workshop…”

Collecting Around a Topic: The Research Cycle (McKenzie,

1995)QuestioningPlanningGatheringSorting and SiftingSynthesizingEvaluatingReporting

Gathering Evidence

Consider other positions on the issue. What might their argument be?Review your arguments and evidence.Choose the best arguments and evidence, considering your purpose and audience.

Possible Editorial Structures

IntroductionBackground InformationPositionArguments (The number used may vary.)Counter-argumentConclusion

Thinking back to Katie Wood Ray… • Clear positioning—stating a strong opinion—the writer works

hard to convince the reader of the validity of the argument• Journey of thought ending with the important idea—less

convincing; however, it is more thought provoking.

Writing Mini-lessonsTake some time to work with a partner to plan for a mini-lesson that might be used during the course of this unit.It may help to make use of the following structure for your mini-lesson:

Connection Teach Activity Link Follow-Up

Final ReflectionLet’s look back at your initial reflection in thinking through this genre. What are you thinking now?What will your students need to do in order to read and write in this genre?What will your classroom look like when students are engaged in this inquiry?What are your initial thoughts about how you might approach this study within your own classroom?

Next TimeLive a writer’s life: Collect in your notebook.Read Chapter (Empirical Inquiry into Qualities of Good Writing) in Building Adolescent Literacy in Today’s English Classrooms.

Read Katie Wood Ray’s “Practical How-to Writing,” “Informative How-to Writing,” and “Advice Writing,” as well as Huntley-Johnston et al.’s “How to do How-to Books: Real Life Writing in the Classroom”Bring in examples of that might serve as mentor texts for your students.Bring in student examples of feature articles and editorials for our celebration of student writing.