run on sentences and comma splices. run on sentence when you have two (or more) independent ideas...
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Run on Sentences and
Comma Splices
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Run on Sentence
When you have two (or more) independent ideas with no punctuation and
connecting words.
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Short Clip• https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B4-hhC_
hXyM
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Example 1
Amanda has a good job she never has to worry about money.
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Revised• Amanda has a good job, so she never has to
worry about money.
Added a CONJUNCTION: is a part of speech that connects words, sentences, or phrases
• Amanda has a good job; she never has to worry about money.
Semi colon: joins two different ideas
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Example 2
From the second story came a cry for help firefighters rushed into the burning building.
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Revised
From the second story came a cry for help, and firefighters rushed into the burning building.
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Example 3
First, we made sure the people in the accident were safe then we called the police.
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Revised
First, we made sure the people in the accident were safe, and then we called the police.
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Example 4: don’t be afraid to break
apart your sentences!
Orville and Wilbur Wright had a bicycle-making business in Ohio they loved experimenting with flying machines they built the Wright Flyer in 1903.
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Revised• Revised: Orville and Wilbur Wright had a
bicycle-making business in Ohio; they loved experimenting with flying machines. They built the Wright Flyer in 1903.
• OR Orville and Wilbur Wright had a bicycle-making business in Ohio, and they loved experimenting with flying machines. They built the Wright Flyer in 1903.
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Comma Splice
When you connect 2 independent ideas together with just a
comma.
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Short Clip 2• https://www.youtube.com/watch?
v=PLAU8LsRR6k
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Example 1
The fans in the soccer stadium pushed forward, people began to panic.
What needs to be added?A conjuction (a connecting word)]A PeriodOR a semi-colon
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Revised
The fans in the soccer stadium pushed forward, and people began to panic.
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Example 2I completed my English essay, now I must go to the library and begin research at once on my fifteen-page History term paper.
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I completed my English essay. Now I must go to the library and begin research at once on my fifteen-page History term paper.
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Example 3
The sun is high, put on some sunblock.
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Revised
The sun is high, so put on some sunblock.
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Handout
Fill in the punctuation, capitols, and connecting words where needed.