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Presentation prepared by Professor Edilberto PinedaPresentation prepared by Professor Edilberto Pineda
Writing ParagraphsWriting Paragraphs
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How to write better How to write better sentencessentences
-Use adjectives to expand your sentences-Use adjectives to expand your sentences
I have a car.I have a car.
Insert an adjective Insert an adjective herehere
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I have aI have a
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smallsmallcar.car.
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I have aI have a
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How to write specific How to write specific titlestitles
TransportationTransportation
It is too general because it does not It is too general because it does not tell you what specific information tell you what specific information you are going to develop.you are going to develop.
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TransportationTransportation
If you add an adjective If you add an adjective before “transportation” you before “transportation” you can make it can make it a little more specifica little more specific
PublicPublic
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TransportationTransportation
By adding adjectives and additional By adding adjectives and additional information, you will be able to create information, you will be able to create
better titles.better titles.
The Terrible The Terrible PublicPublic in Panamain Panama
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TransportationTransportation
This title helps you know exactly what This title helps you know exactly what ideas to develop as you write your ideas to develop as you write your
composition composition
The Terrible The Terrible PublicPublic in Panamain Panama
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In this composition you are going to In this composition you are going to prove that Public transportation is prove that Public transportation is
“Terrible”“Terrible”
The The TerribleTerrible Public Transportation Public Transportation in in Panama Panama
““Terrible”Terrible”
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““The Hook”The Hook”
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Public transportation Public transportation in Panama is in Panama is terrible because of the many situations terrible because of the many situations people have to suffer everyday.people have to suffer everyday.
The The TerribleTerrible Public Transportation Public Transportation in in Panama Panama
At this point people want to know which situations people suffer
everyday.
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Public transportation Public transportation in Panama is in Panama is terrible because of the many terrible because of the many situations situations people have to suffer everyday.people have to suffer everyday.
The The TerribleTerrible Public Transportation Public Transportation in in Panama Panama
Use the main idea in the first sentence to write your second sentence
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Public transportation Public transportation in Panama is in Panama is terrible because of the many terrible because of the many situations people have to suffer situations people have to suffer everyday. everyday. Panamanians have to get Panamanians have to get up at 4:00 a.m to try to catch a bus, up at 4:00 a.m to try to catch a bus, be patient, tolerant and perverant. be patient, tolerant and perverant. When people take a bus, they are When people take a bus, they are not sure if the bus will reach its not sure if the bus will reach its destinaton because these buses are destinaton because these buses are in terrible mechanical conditions.in terrible mechanical conditions.
The The TerribleTerrible Public Transportation Public Transportation in in Panama Panama
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I hope this presentation helps I hope this presentation helps you!you!