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PREPARING FOR THE CALIFORNIA PREPARING FOR THE CALIFORNIA HIGH SCHOOL EXIT EXAMINATIONHIGH SCHOOL EXIT EXAMINATION

CAHSEECAHSEEPlease Take NotesPlease Take Notes

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DATES TO REMEMBERDATES TO REMEMBER

March 18 MATH CAHSEE• March 19 ELA CAHSEE

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FREQUENTLY ASKED QUESTIONSFREQUENTLY ASKED QUESTIONS

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The following questions are often asked about the California High School Exit Examination (CAHSEE). If you have a question that is not answered here, email me. You can find answers to other frequently asked questions on CDE’s CAHSEE web site.

http://www.cde.ca.gov/ta/tg/hs/

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What does the CAHSEE cover?What does the CAHSEE cover?

• The CAHSEE has two parts: English-Language Arts (ELA) and Mathematics.• The ELA part of the CAHSEE tests

state content standards through grade ten.• The reading section includes

vocabulary, decoding, comprehension, and analysis of informational and literary texts.

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• The writing section covers writing strategies, applications, and the conventions of standard English (for example, grammar, spelling, and punctuation).• The mathematics part of the

CAHSEE tests state content standards in grades six and seven and Algebra I.• The exam includes statistics, data

analysis and probability, number sense, measurement and geometry, mathematical reasoning and algebra.

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• Students are also asked to demonstrate a strong foundation in computation and arithmetic, including working with decimals, fractions, and percentages.

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What kinds of questions are on What kinds of questions are on the CAHSEE?the CAHSEE?

• Most of the questions on the CAHSEE are multiple choice.• However, the ELA part of the exam

also includes one essay question (writing task).• The exam is given only in English,

and all students must pass the exam in English to receive a high school diploma.

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• Released questions from previous administrations of the CAHSEE can be found throughout this guide and on CDE’s Web Site.

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When do students first take the When do students first take the CAHSEE?CAHSEE?

• Students must take the exam for the first time in the second part of their tenth grade year.

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When (and how) do students find When (and how) do students find out whether they have passed the out whether they have passed the

CAHSEE?CAHSEE?

• School districts receive student score reports about seven weeks after the date of the exam.• One copy is to be mailed to the

student’s home and another copy is to be kept in the student’s permanent record.

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• It is important that parents or guardians keep a copy of the student report for their records.• The State of California does not

keep a copy of the scores.• All individual student scores are

confidential.• Only group scores (for entire

schools and districts) are made public.• Scores may range from 275 to 450.• Passing score is 350 or higher.

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What if a student does not pass What if a student does not pass the first time?the first time?

• Students who do not pass the exam in the tenth grade will have several opportunities to take it again during their Junior and Senior years.• Once they have passed either part

of the exam, they will not be tested again on that part.

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• By state law, students who do not pass a part of the exam must be offered extra instruction to learn what they need to know in order to pass.• It is up to each school and district to

decide how to provide this instruction.

To find out what type of help is available and when the exam will be given again at your school, contact the your teacher, Advisor, counselor, principal.

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CAHSEE Fact SheetCAHSEE Fact Sheet

• California High School Exit Exam• Everyone must pass the CAHSEE to

graduate.• The first time a student takes it is in

the 10th grade.• A passing score is 350.• A proficient score is 380.• There are 2 subjects: English and

Math.

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• English section has 79 multiple-choice questions (72 are scored) and 1 writing task.• Math section has 92 multiple-

choice. questions (only 80 are scored).• The first opportunity to take it is in

the 10th grade – March.

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English SectionEnglish Section

• There are total of 79 multiple-choice There are total of 79 multiple-choice questionsquestions(72 questions are scored; 7 (72 questions are scored; 7 questions are not scored)questions are not scored)

• 1 Essay Writing Question1 Essay Writing Question

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Breakdown of the English SectionBreakdown of the English Section

• Word Analysis (7 questions)• Reading Comprehension (18

questions)• Literary Response and Analysis (20

questions)• Writing Strategies (12 questions)• Writing conventions (15 questions)

– THIS EQUALS 72 POINTS

• Writing Applications (1 essay worth 18 points)– THIS EQUALS 90 POINTS.

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Scores for EnglishScores for Englishwww.ets.org.cahsee

• To pass this exam or get a score of 350 students need to get 66% of the questions correct.– That equals to about 59 points.

• To get PROFICIENT or score of 380– Students need to get about 70 points

• To get ADVANCED or score of 400– Students need to get about 77 points

• To get PERFECTor a score of 450– Students need to get 90 points.

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MATH SECTIONMATH SECTION

• There are total of 92 multiple-choice questions– 80 questions are scored – 12 questions are not scored.

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Breakdown of the Math SectionBreakdown of the Math Section

• Number Sense (12 questions)• Statistics, Data Analysis (12

questions)• Measurement and Geometry (17

questions)• Algebra and Functions (17

questions)• Mathematical Reasoning (8

questions)• Algebra 1 (12 questions)• Research Questions (12 questions –

not scored) 92 Questions92 Questions

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Scores for MathScores for Mathwww.ets.org/cahsee

• To pass this exam or get a score of 350– Students need to get about 45 points

• to get PROFICIENT or a score of 380– Students need to get about 57 points

• To get a score of 400– Students need to get about 67 points

• To get a PERFECT or score of 450– Students need to get 80 points.

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WRITING TASKWRITING TASKSampleSample PromptPrompt

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You belong to a science club that is very concerned about the potential connection between human activity and global warming. The club decides to address this concern by urging students to take steps to conserve energy in their daily lives.

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Write a persuasive essay for your school paper in which you convince readers of the importance of taking action to decrease energy usage. Convince your readers through the use of specific reasons and examples.

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STEP ONESTEP ONE

• ANALYZE TASKANALYZE TASK• Is it a persuasive essay, discussion,

expository, narrative?• Do you explain, argue, convince, et cetera?• This determines the type of essay and your

writing style.

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STEP TWOSTEP TWO

• BRAINSTORM BRAINSTORM – WRITE DOWN A LIST OF YOUR IDEAS RELATED TO THE TOPIC.• OUTLINE• What points do you need to

include?(This is from READING THE PROMPT)– Connection between human activity and global warming (Read first

paragraph).

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– Club decides to address this concern– Club urges students to TAKE STEPS (PERSUADE) to conserve energy

in their daily lives– **Ways to conserve energy in daily life – (suggestions….)

1. Walk to school, not drive; skate board; any eco-friendly form of transportation

2. Save paper (recycle); do not use plastic bags3. Take the bus, train4. Unplug any power outlets when not needed5. Go outside and play instead of using electronics

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– **Reasons these “ways” will help (EXPLAIN convince audience, more detail, examples)

1. Prevent pollution2. Save the environment by saving trees3. Prevent pollution4. Save electricity5. Save electricity

• CONCLUSION/SUMMARY – How will you summarize (wrap up) what you just wrote about.

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STEP THREESTEP THREE

• BEGIN TO WRITE your essay• *** YOU MAY USE THIS AS YOUR

FIRST SENTENCE:• As students, we need to take action

to decrease energy use in our country.• Three to Four Paragraphs Minimum

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Writing for AssessmentWriting for AssessmentResponding to Persuasive Responding to Persuasive

PromptsPrompts

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• Throughout your lifetime, you will have many opportunities to persuade others to agree with you.

• Perhaps you’ll try to convince a friend to see a certain movie, as a teacher to let you take a makeup exam, or persuade your parents to give you certain privileges.

• The art of persuasion can be learned.• The best arguments are carefully thought out and

well structured.• They are designed to make your audience think like

you do on an issue.

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• You may be asked to respond to a persuasive prompt on a writing test.• Within time limits, you must

structure your argument and arrange it in a logical way.• This chapter will show you how to

use the writing process to create a clear, persuasive response.• OBJECTIVESOBJECTIVES

– Apply what has been learned about persuasive writing– Practice writing for assessment

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PrewritingPrewriting★★Analyze a persuasive prompt.Analyze a persuasive prompt.

• Before you respond to a prompt, you must analyze it to be sure that your response will fit the requirements of the test.• One way to analyze a prompt is to

answer the following STRAP questions about it:

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STRAP questionsSTRAP questions

• SSUBJECTUBJECT– What topic (lockers, policy, decision, program) should I write about?

• TTYPEYPE– What form (essay, letter, editorial, article, report) of writing should I

create?

• ROLE– What position (student, son or daughter, friend, employee) should I

assume as the writer?

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• AUDIENCE– Who (teacher, principal, parents, classmates, employer) is the

intended reader?

• PURPOSE– What is the goal (persuade, respond, evaluate, explain, tell,

describe) of my writing?

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The following key words are The following key words are often found in persuasive often found in persuasive prompts: prompts: convinceconvince, , argueargue, ,

defend,defend, persuadepersuade..

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Try it!

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Analyze these prompts by Analyze these prompts by answering the STRAP questions.answering the STRAP questions.

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The school board has decided to eliminate the school art program because of budget constraints. Write a letter arguing for or against the board’s decision.

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SUBJECT

TYPE

ROLE

AUDIENCE

PURPOSE

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The principal has reduced the number of school assemblies for the year. The school newspaper editor wants you to write about the decision. Write an editorial either defending the decision or urging the principal to reconsider.

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SUBJECT

TYPE

ROLE

AUDIENCE

PURPOSE

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To promote literacy, the city library is starting a new reading program pairing teens with younger children. Write a newspaper article calling for teens to volunteer for the program.

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SUBJECT

TYPE

ROLE

AUDIENCE

PURPOSE

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Plan your responsePlan your responseOnce you have answered the Once you have answered the STRAP questions, you should STRAP questions, you should quickly plan your persuasive quickly plan your persuasive

response.response.The following graphic organizers The following graphic organizers

can help you.can help you.

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T - BarT - Bar

Pro Con

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Quick ListQuick List

1. First Point– Pro– Con

2. Second Point– Pro– Con

3. Third Point– Pro– Con

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Cluster (arguments for and against)Cluster (arguments for and against)

TopicTopicTopicTopic

ForFor

AgainstAgainst

TopicTopic

TopicTopic TopicTopic

TopicTopic

TopicTopic

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Counter an opposing point of viewCounter an opposing point of view

• Each persuasive graphic organizer includes space for both pro and con arguments.• You must consider points from both

sides of an issue to see where your strongest argument lies.• Facts usually make the strongest

arguments; however, your strong feelings about the issue can be important, too.

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• When planning your persuasive writing, make sure to counter or address at least one opposing point of view.• Presenting another opinion tells

your reader that you have carefully examines the issue.• And effectively countering the point

can actually strengthen your overall argument.

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FactFact versus versus OpinionOpinion

• A fact is a statement that can be proved by checking a reliable source.

• An opinion is a statement that expresses the beliefs of a writer (or speaker).

• An opinion cannot be proved or checked.

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CAUTION!CAUTION!

• Caution must be taken against stating an opinion as a fact, for example:• The after-school teen center

prevents teens from committing crimes.• The writer believes that the after-

school teen center will keep teens off the street and prevent them from committing petty crimes.

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• This is the writer’s opinion, stated as a fact.• Rewrite the statement as an

opinion.– I believe that the center prevents teens from committing crimes.

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WritingWritingRespond to a prompt.Respond to a prompt.

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Sample Persuasive Prompt

Your school board is considering funding an after-school student center, but some board members feel it is a waste of funds. Write a letter to the board arguing for or against the center, explaining the benefits it will provide or the problems it could create for students, parents, and the community.

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Sample Sample ResponseResponse

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Dear School Board Members:If student are not involved in after-school

activities or do not have a job, they may face long afternoons after the final bell rings. Many parents work until 5:00 or later in the evening. Students with time on their hands often look for something to do. Without guidance, they often get into trouble. At the very least, they might just go home and flop in front of the TV. An after-school teen center could create a positive environment for teens.

BEGINNINGThe beginning

paragraph states the opinion (in blue)

BEGINNINGThe beginning

paragraph states the opinion (in blue)

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A teen center provides a supervised place for students. In a teen center, adults are always available to make sure nothing inappropriate happens. Students can be with friends in a safe, supervised atmosphere.

MIDDLEEach middle paragraph

presents a main supporting point.

MIDDLEEach middle paragraph

presents a main supporting point.

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A properly equipped teen center offers a positive place for students, lots of activities, and healthy snacks. Students are encouraged to engage in physical activity. Sports are usually part of a center as well. With a few simple pieces of equipment, students can engage in activities such as table tennis, weight training, or aerobics. If the center has space outside, a basketball hoop or volleyball court encourages physical activity in good weather. An indoor gym could give students a place to be active even in bad weather.

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Some people might argue that the district can’t afford such a facility, but there are ways to make an expensive dream an affordable reality. For one thing, the center could sell snacks and juices to help with expenses. The upper-class students could volunteer to help younger students with class work, earning volunteer service hours for their efforts. Local businesspeople might be willing to mentor students in different areas, working with them at the center. Another resource might be parents. Service organizations could donate materials to help support such a worthy community project. Of course, fund-raisers could be held to support the center.

CONCESSIONCONCESSION

The writer addresses a

possible objection.

The writer addresses a

possible objection.

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I urge all the school board members to consider the importance of a teen center. The youth of today are the parents and citizens of tomorrow. Through a teen center that offers safe, supervised activities and homework tutoring, you could show us how a community can work together for the betterment of all.

Sincerely,

Alia Santos

ENDINGThe ending

offers a final plea and

summarizes the argument.

ENDINGThe ending

offers a final plea and

summarizes the argument.

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You belong to a science club that is very concerned about the potential connection between human activity and global warming. The club decides to address this concern by urging students to take steps to conserve energy in their daily lives. Write a persuasive essay for your school paper in which you convince readers of the importance of taking action to decrease energy usage. Convince your readers through the use of specific reasons and examples.

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SSUBJECT: UBJECT: What topic (lockers, policy, decision, program) should I write about?

TTYPE: YPE: What form (essay, letter, editorial, article, report) of writing should I create?

ROLE: What position (student, son or daughter, friend, employee) should I assume as the writer?

AUDIENCE: Who (teacher, principal, parents, classmates, employer) is the intended reader?

PURPOSE: What is the goal (persuade, respond, evaluate, explain, tell, describe) of my writing

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SUBJECT

TYPE

ROLE

AUDIENCE

PURPOSE

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Quick ListQuick List

1. First Point– Pro– Con

2. Second Point– Pro– Con

3. Third Point– Pro– Con

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Cluster (arguments for and against)Cluster (arguments for and against)

TopicTopicTopicTopic

ForFor

AgainstAgainst

TopicTopic

TopicTopic TopicTopic

TopicTopic

TopicTopic

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Write a persuasive essay expressing your views on whether

the technological devices in “There Will Come Soft Rains”

could improve people’s lives. Cite evidence to support your

arguments.

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TECHNOLOGY TECHNOLOGY Some people believe that computer technology is revolutionizing our lives, schools, and work. Others feel that computer technology is bothersome, full of potential problems, and even a danger to our culture. Write a persuasive essay defending a side in this debate. Address your essay to an audience of the opposition. Be sure to address the opposition’s concerns adequately.

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Revolutionizing our lives...Revolutionizing our lives...

• Changing our lives• Making our live better• Moving us forward• Making us more advanced

technologically

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Technology as bothersome...Technology as bothersome...

• Makes people fat• Makes people lazy• Makes people stupid (they don’t

study any more)• We have no more future – people

will not pay attention to the past

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SUBJECT Technology

TYPE Persuasive

ROLE Student

AUDIENCE Opposition

PURPOSE Convince the opposition

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T - BarT - Bar

Pro• Benefits

– Computer– Phone– Transportation– Communication– Education

Con• Breaks families• Mess up people’s minds

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Paragraph OneParagraph One• Begin your paragraph with one of

the following:– A question– A quotation from a famous person– Address your audience directly– Tell an amusing anecdote– Open with a startling fact or statistic

• Reveal your positions (pro or con)• End with a thesis statement.

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The Body ParagraphsThe Body ParagraphsA paragraph has A paragraph has threethree main parts. main parts.

1. The topic sentence introduces your point.

2. The body sentences support you point.

3. The closing sentence completes your point.

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Ending ParagraphEnding Paragraph

• Revisit your thesis• Reflect on the importance of your

points.