BURY CAMPUS COMING ALIVE AT DAWN…

BY GIZEM

MY 3 INITIAL IDEAS

MY FIRST INITIAL IDEA:BURY CAMPUS COMING ALIVE AT DAWN…

This idea Is about 7 students wanting to stay behind in the school building to figure out the death of their friend Emma, who dies in her campus room suspiciously.

So the 7 students make up a plan and stay in the building but no for long that they understand that they are not alone in the building.

To make the audience know that it is a horror movie at the beginning its going to be in Emma’s campus room all blood on the floor and scream noises coming from the background.

Was Emma’s death caused by the undead?

My second initial idea:SUICIDE AT MY SCHOOL!

This idea is about a very intelligent girl who dies 2 years ago. Her death is very suspicious. She throws her self from the balcony of her campus room. No on really finds out why she kills her self.

Everyone forgets about her death except her boyfriend Arvin. One day when Arvin goes past her room he hears someone laughing inside but that room was closed down after the death of Rachel. That same week another girl killed her self right across Rachel’s room. After this day something happens in the school that makes the whole school remember Rachel and the girl who died.It makes everyone think if Rachel is coming back to get her revenge!

My final initial idea:

THE PARTY WITH THE DEAD…

This idea is about some of the students from the school are from the undead. One day the families of the undead make up their mind to hold a party.

A couple of normal students find about this party. They are confused they don’t know if they should go or not.

But is the party only a trap for them?Is the undead hungry for them? Will they be up for this adventure?

My peer assessment sheet:This is my peer assessment sheet. Jade marked my work and she gave me a mark out of ten.

For my first story Jade gave me 9 out of ten. These were her comments:It is a good story line. A good place to set the story . Give more information about the characters. Overall it is very good.

For my second idea she gave me 7 out of 9. her comments were : It is a good idea lots of detail.It might be better if you use different names. Overall it is good but even better if it was a different genre.

For my third idea she gave me a 9 out of ten. Her comments were:This idea is very good sounds real. Overall it is brilliant.

My chosen idea:I chose Bury Campus Coming Alive At Dawn…I chose this idea because it was at school and we did not have to travel somewhere else which would have been an problem because we are under age to be driving.

Also because I like the whole idea of how a girl dies at school and her friends want to learn what actually is happening at school.

Problems:How are we going to be able to find a empty room and make it look like a campus room?I can over come this by asking my drama teacher and media teacher to help me with setting up a room like a campus room. A good room would be the drama studio.

How will we get good lights?Again we can use the drama lights and maybe some of the photography lights in the school.

My scriptSo I did my script for my initial idea.

I think my script turned out very well because it was set up how Ms wanted it to and I had all the stage directions and I think it was very clear.

But it could have been improved with maybe adding some directions like on what side the characters are standing.

My storyboard: I have also created 2 A3 pages of a storyboard. The reason for us to create a storyboard was that it gave us an visual idea about the start of my horror film.

My storyboard is very clear about what angle the camera’s are and the positions of the characters in my film.

The pictures could have been better because they explain most of the story.

My person list• As everyone I need a list of

people to help me out with my film.

• These jobs are:• Actors: • Rachel, Arvin, Luke, Lia, Josh,

Sarah, Nick.• Make up person• Camera man• Director • An adult to make sure every one

is safe.• Someone to do the lights &

sound.

• And I have gone round and asked people if they would like to help me with my film.

• Rachel: Gizem• Arvin: TO BE CONFIRMED• Luke: TO BE CONFIRMED• Lia: Pinar• Sarah: Yasam• Shanika: Raissa( who is actually the

murderer) • Josh: TO BE CONFIRMED • Make up and hair is done by a hair

dresser who will come to the building where the film will be taken: someone from Tiara hair and beauty

• Director: me • The adult to make sure we are safe would

be Miss Porteli I have asked her and it has been confirmed

Tech Equipment List

High definition camera.A DSLR camera.TRI PODLIGHTS

Have we got all of this equipment?We have got an DSLR camera that we can ask Mrs. Shilvock to borough which I think she would let us.We can get the Tri Pod from school as well and I think there is lights in the photography department.

Prop list

• We will need costumes for the murderer .• We will need blood, knife, gun, lighter, touch,

blankets, glasses, make up, books for the students etc.

• The other actors would wear normal clothes to show that they go to college.

Location list

• For my chosen idea we do not need to go to a lot of places. The most used location will be inside the school building.

• Then we will show a little bit from the river from the point of view of the murderer.

Health and safety risk assessment sheet…

What are the risks? What will be done to control the risks?

Action by whom?

Wires on the ground. Theft.Transport.

Make sure the wires are behind the electronics so it is not in the way.Make sure the building where the equipment is securely locked.Get on a bus all together.

I will be responsible about the health of safety of people helping me out with my film.

Budget

• For my idea we do not need to use a lot of money because everyone is going to travel to school as usual and everyone has their oyster cards. The equipment will be in the school any way so the equipment will be safe.

• Everyone would eat their dinner in school as usual.

• And for the prop we would not need too much we would be spending the most about £60-£70 .

Pitch

• I think my idea would be good to produce out because it is easy to act out and the budget is low. Also I have got everything sorted out and ready. I’ve got the permissions from the teachers and I have most of the props ready.

• Also because I can get quite a lot of people involved which would be good.

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