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Pitch Feedback I and my group pitched our ideas to our fellow class mates. We presented our ideas for our narrative for the horror trailer and we presented a few other ideas e.g. location and sub genre we picked. When we completed the pitch we received feedback on our ideas, either to improve it or to comment on the ideas they liked. One of our ideas was that in our narrative we had the father being previous possessed by this evil spirit and it was by a Jack in the box, our initial idea was to have a shed in the garden of the family and the father had the Jack in the box locked away in the shed to keep it away from him. We presented this idea to our class mates and they asked us whether it makes sense for the father who was previously possessed by this box to keep it and lock it away in the shed which is not far from him or his family. So they suggested we keep the father as being possessed before but the jack in the box to not be in the shed or near him but find a way of the box coming back or reappearing in his life again. It was also suggested that for our narrative we should towards the end when we have the son possessed and then we remove the evil spirit within him that we don’t actually see the evil spirit leave the house but stay there and the family move out as a result of the evil spirit ruining their life and then have a new family move into the home and they too experience the evil spirit. Our class liked our idea of using the jack in the box as the keeper of the evil spirit and that it possess the son, they also said they would go watch the movie if it was released in cinema which means our idea is good and is an effective horror film which scary our audience. Finally we took all the feedback into account and build upon the ideas to create a more successful and effective horror film.

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Pitch Feedback

I and my group pitched our ideas to our fellow class mates. We presented our ideas for our narrative for the horror trailer and we presented a few other ideas e.g. location and sub genre we picked.

When we completed the pitch we received feedback on our ideas, either to improve it or to comment on the ideas they liked. One of our ideas was that in our narrative we had the father being previous possessed by this evil spirit and it was by a Jack in the box, our initial idea was to have a shed in the garden of the family and the father had the Jack in the box locked away in the shed to keep it away from him. We presented this idea to our class mates and they asked us whether it makes sense for the father who was previously possessed by this box to keep it and lock it away in the shed which is not far from him or his family. So they suggested we keep the father as being possessed before but the jack in the box to not be in the shed or near him but find a way of the box coming back or reappearing in his life again.

It was also suggested that for our narrative we should towards the end when we have the son possessed and then we remove the evil spirit within him that we don’t actually see the evil spirit leave the house but stay there and the family move out as a result of the evil spirit ruining their life and then have a new family move into the home and they too experience the evil spirit.

Our class liked our idea of using the jack in the box as the keeper of the evil spirit and that it possess the son, they also said they would go watch the movie if it was released in cinema which means our idea is good and is an effective horror film which scary our audience.

Finally we took all the feedback into account and build upon the ideas to create a more successful and effective horror film.

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