personal odyssey narrative introduction (paragraph - 5 pts.) topic sentence intros. life experience...
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Personal Odyssey Narrative
Introduction (paragraph - 5 pts.)topic sentence intros. life experience as an
odyssey with a goalidentify Odysseus (epic hero of Homer's Odyssey) and his goal to reach home
identify your goal, noting the basic parallel to Odysseus's
mention the topics of the body paragraphs but not the supporting details.
Body Hindrances = noun; hinders = verb – (10 pts.)
Include people, situations, temptations, obstacles Helps (10 pts.)
Include mentors and favorable situations Personal traits (10 pts.)
Include positive traits that aid you as well as shortcomings which hamper your progress
Allusions to The Odyssey (10 pts.)
Include at least 3
Conclusion (paragraph – 5 pts.)
No new info/examplesWrap it up/tie it all togetherReflection on experience (journey v. goal)
Avoid grammar pitfalls
like/as - both introduce comparisons: like = preposition: Like Odysseus, I will face
obstacles. as = transition: As Odysseus faces temptation from
the Sirens, I face the temptation of too much texting.
Grammar pitfalls
verb tense - historical present"Odysseus has a hard time convincing his crew to go on."
punctuation – possessive Rule breakers due to pronunciation Odysseus's or Odysseus’ Cyclops’ (singular) or Cyclopes’ (plural) Plurals not ending in screw'smen's Plurals ending in sSirens’