- Good Masthead Idea- All text is similar (size, font especially)- Good Layout - Good use of Photoshop - Good story ideas

- A little bit busy- Some of the writing isn’t as clear and is slightly hard to read (colour of font)- Add cover photo and images

Positives Improvements

The class took part in a peer evaluation session, this involved us all looking at each other’s work and giving each piece constructive feedback. I have created a table above that states what the class said about my Mock Up Cover (which was created on Photoshop). I found this exercise very helpful, as I now know what people in my target age range thought of my initial product and what they think could help make it better. I got my main praise for the Masthead of my Magazine – Crowd Surf. The class felt that this was a very suitable name for the genre of music and they thought it was very effective. Most of the class also picked up on how some of the text is hard to see properly on the cover, so I know now that I need to experiment with different colours and styles to make this issue less of a problem. When I am experimenting with different factors, I will always have in mind:

- Target Audience - Music Genre- House Style

Overall, I found this very useful on the improvement front, and I am now more confident to create my final product.