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Page 1 Sugar Plum Nightmare in D minor: Mary Goes to the Nutcracker An Example Design Comic Martin Hardee

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Sugar Plum Nightmare in D minor:Mary Goes to the Nutcracker

An Example Design ComicMartin Hardee

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I love this time of year. Turkey, dressing... and

time to order tickets for the Nutcracker Ballet!

Based on a true story

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I'll just do a quick search for tickets...

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Springfield Ballet

Springfield Ballet

Here's the page. Now where's that

Nutcracker?

Ah, “buy tickets”

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Springfield Ballet

There it is...

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Springfield Ballet

The Nutcracker Springfield Production

Hmmm. I want to go next week. Is that “Peak”? Or

“Off-Peak”?

And “Sweet Seats”?

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I'll try Off Peak and hope that's next week

when I want to go.

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Springfield Ballet

OK, this actually looks like the dates I

want... Hmmm, I wonder why the price

isn't available?

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Springfield Ballet

Oh, OK, here we go... I guess it

shows price once I pick a date.

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Springfield Ballet

Springfield Ballet

Springfield Ballet

Type... Type... Type...

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Springfield Ballet

$ 0.00$ 0.00

$ 0.00

Why does it say $0.00?

Let me go back and try again...

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Springfield Ballet

Springfield Ballet

Springfield Ballet

Springfield Ballet

Yep, I typed $60 before. Hmmm...

Back

Back

Back

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Springfield Ballet

$ 0.00$ 0.00

$ 0.00

But it still says $0 when I check out.

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This sure is aggravating!

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Sigh. I guess I will have to fill out their feedback

form...

After 5 more minutes of trying...

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This is so annoying

To: Springfield Ballet

Subject: Help!

I ordered tickets but it says $0.00 for the price

even though the screen before said $60.

Will my order go through if I submit?

What do I do?

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Reply from: Springfield BalletSubject: Re: Help

There is a conflict in your cookies and cache. This is something Springfield Ballet has no control over.

If you clean your cookies and cache there will be no problem.

Huh? Clean my cookies? Cache?

2 hours later, Mary gets a reply...

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I'm not a computer wizard – I just wanna order a $%#@!# ballet

ticket!

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Maybe I should just get tickets for Radio City instead!

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Sun Confidential: Internal Only

Observations/Issues• Finding the ballet is straightforward, but...• Flow doesn't map to user's task of finding by date• Pricing not obvious until seats and dates are

selected• Bugs and browser issues create big user frustration

with no workaround

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Sun Confidential: Internal Only

Recommended Followups• Followups here

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Sun Confidential: Internal Only

Usage Notes• Feel free to experiment with this comic format

yourself and send us notes• More comics to follow that you can use• Comments to: Comics (@) hardee.net• Artwork by: ISD Group:

> http://en.isd-group.com/about/