2-8514Nby steve moore

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CHARACTER COUNT 33599

TIME SUBMITTED 15-FEB-2015 01:57AM

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article a.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

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Missing "," You may need to place a comma af ter this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Confused You have used four in this sentence. You may need to use for instead.

Wrong Form You may have used the wrong f orm of this word.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proof read the sentence to make sure the subject agrees withthe verb.

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Proofread This part of the sentence contains a grammatical error or misspelled word that makesyour meaning unclear.

Proofread This part of the sentence contains a grammatical error or misspelled word that makesyour meaning unclear.

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Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proof read your work.

Missing "," You may need to place a comma af ter this word.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize inthe sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.

Confused You have used a ‘‘ in this sentence. You may need to use an instead.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize inthe sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Missing "," You may need to place a comma af ter this word.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proof read your work.

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Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proof read your work.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article a.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Pronoun This pronoun may be incorrect.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Wrong Article You may have used the wrong article or pronoun. Proof read the sentence to makesure that the article or pronoun agrees with the word it describes.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proof read your work.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Missing "," You may need to place a comma af ter this word.

Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proof read your work.

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article a.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

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Missing "," You may need to place a comma af ter this word.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Missing "," You may need to place a comma af ter this word.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize inthe sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Frag. This sentence may be a f ragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proof read the sentence tobe sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clause with a complete subject andpredicate.

Proofread This part of the sentence contains a grammatical error or misspelled word that makesyour meaning unclear.

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize inthe sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

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P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize inthe sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Run-on This sentence may be a run-on sentence. Proof read it to see if it contains too manyindependent clauses or contains independent clauses that have been combined without conjunctions orpunctuation. Look at the "Writer's Handbook" f or advice about correcting run-on sentences.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .

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Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word.

Article Error You may need to use an article bef ore this word. Consider using the article the .