music video practical production treatment: stay awake by the house of the old boat
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Music Video Practical Production TreatmentTRANSCRIPT
Music Video – Practical Production Treatment and Plan for EditAudio: Music and Lyrics Time Images
[trumpet intro]
Stay awake‘cos its only for a momentYou will see the path beside your fadeIn a world that’s going backwardsI promise all the cheques are paidAnd she has never been as lowShe has never been as low as she is now
At night, she sings her melodyShe sings like no one’s listeningShe screams outShe screams out loud
00.00-00.11
00.11-00.43
00.43-01.03
Long shot of boy and girl sitting on bench backs both facing the camera Boy gets up to leave and we see him walk out of shot. Reverse then kicks in and you see him walk backward to the same position.Performance of singer playing guitar in front of white backdrop aloneClose up of girl crying- tear going down face- same with the guy
Extreme close up of holding hands and then drifting apart
Burning of a photo of them (different location extreme close up)
Shows previous night argument in bedroom- throwing things pushing each other general screaming (long shots, crane shot, close ups, pan)
Close ups of each other’s faces
The windows shake and all my words are failingShe came back the only way she knowsShe didn’t say you were the firstShe didn’t say you were the last one tonight
01.03-01.22 Guy storming out of girls room, down corridor and out of house
Guy surprising girlfriend by going to house- going into bedroom seeing his girlfriend with another guy- arguments and crying between them
Stay awake‘cos its only for a momentYou will see the path beside your fadeIn a world that’s going backwardsI promise all the cheques are paidAnd she has never been as low
01.22-02.04 Close up shot of phone texting girl with no reply- shot of boy waiting and not knowing what to doGirl with this new guy- being over friendly and leaving her actual boyfriend out of conversation (long shot)Performance of singer playing guitar in front of white backdrop- drum kit and trumpet being played in background
She has never been as low as she is now
At night, she sings her melodyShe sings like no one’s listeningShe screams outShe screams out loud
02.04-02.25
Texting between each other ‘ I love you’
Dancing in boyfriends bedroom/garden listening to records – really happy and in loveSinging to each otherPerformance of singer playing guitar in front of white backdrop- drum kit and trumpet being played in background
The windows shake and all my words are failingShe came back the only way she knowsShe didn’t say you were the firstShe didn’t say you were the last one tonight
02.25-02.43 Meeting in a coffee shop- laughter between the two and guy brushes hair of girls face
Run out together and maybe kiss (medium shot)
The windows shake and all my words are failingShe came back the only way she knowsShe didn’t say you were the firstShe didn’t say you were the last one tonight
02.43-03.01 Meeting at a party- go off into a separate room- lots of close up shots of holding hands and touching (POV editing)
Performance of singer playing guitar in front of white backdrop- drum kit and trumpet being played in background
The windows shake and all my words are failingShe came back the only way she knowsShe didn’t say you were the firstShe didn’t say you were the last one tonight
[guitar and drum instrumental]
[Guitar cord outro]
End
03.01-03.19
03.19-03.30
03.30-03.45
Meeting at school- classroom scene with them making eye contact for the first timePerformance of singer playing guitar in front of white backdrop- drum kit and trumpet being played in background
Montage of clips in normal order really quickly with different shots of different stages in relationshipBack to beginning clip of guy walking away- this time in forward motionArtist placing down guitar and leaving the frame in the same way as the narrative