ms4 level letter of complaint
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MS4 level: Letter of Complaint PDP Writing Guided Sheet
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MS4 level : Letter of Complaint. File One Warmer: The teacher greets his learners and welcomes them, then invites them to talk about the last séance . Brainstorming: The teacher invites the learners to think about the topic of the lesson through pictures showing the topic. The teacher invites the learners to discuss the topic and reports on the board all the learners’ suggestions. The teacher introduces the Situation of Integration through :
Authentic photos showing real life situations Set of instructions Problem Solving situation
The Situation of Integration:
Planning Stage: The teacher invites the learners to plan their ideas in a table to make them elicit all the ideas about the problem exposed . Format Problem Causes Complaint to Expressions Grammar The layout of a complaint letter
Step 1: Clearly state the facts of your complaint.
Step 2: discuss why you are so unhappy/upset. Step 3: suggest solutions to the problem.
Food Waste Pollution
‐Man’s behavior
‐local authorities ‐ new papers ‐ media ‐school head master
Opening paragraph ‐I am writing to complain about… ‐I am dissatisfied with… ‐Middle paragraph ‐ I was shocked/ surprised… ‐ To my surprise.. closing paragraph: ‐I demand immediate action…. ‐Thanking you in advance..
‐ simple present ‐ would ‐ imperative ‐ time sequencers
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Function: Complaining (Letter of complaint) Language form : Simple present, would ( polite request), imperative , time sequencers. Vocabulary : Vocabulary related to food waste garbage. Visual aids: Pictures and flashcards showing garbage and dirty cities. Aim: By the end of this lesson the learners will be able to write a letter of complaint
Each morning you see your local streets dirty and full of garbage. You want to react to such problem. Write a letter of complaint to your local authorities talking about
this problem. Write about:
The problem (food waste) The causes:
Inhabitants’ behaviour. Lack of food cans Food trucks
The solutions: campaign to clean streets and cities information day about food waste impose fines on persons who pollute .
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Drafting: (writing the first draft)by looking at the plans, the students st
art writing their essays. they may change the order of their main supports, or rearrange their minor supports if there is always a mistake either in the organization or in the grammar or the choice/form of the vocabulary. This leads the learners to editing.
Editing : Teacher invites to learners to check their mistakes ‐Editing steps : *Grammar and spelling : ‐check their spelling ‐check their grammar. ‐read their letter again *Style and organization : ‐Make sure their letter has an introduction. ‐Check that you have a opening sentence that identifies the main idea of the letter . ‐ check that all their paragraphs follow the paragraph format ‐See if their letter is interesting. ‐ Publishing : The learners are invited to present their letters to the whole class, then reports on the board the best one.
Suggested letter:
‐ The learners read the corrected letter then copy down.
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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about food waste pollution. Every morning, I see our streets and city full of garbage thrown everywhere . To my surprise I see people throwing garbage at any time, and not in garbage cans. The garbage trucks have no specific time. I would demand immediate actions to stop this. I suggest a campaign to clean streets and cities make an information day about food waste and set fines on person who pollute our environment . Thanking you in advance Yours Sincerely