Audience feedback

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Questions askedDo you understand the preferred reading? (the child in the beach scene is meant to be the same person as the male in the loft) !!Does the video evoke emotion in you?!!!what would you give the video out of 10?!!!How would I improve this score?!!!Do you think the artist is in it too much?!!!Is there any editing or shots that stood out to you as not fitting in?!!!Do you feel it looks like an amateur video?!!!In your opinion does this video subvert rap conventions?!!!If you were to edit this video what would you do differently?!!!Any other comments?!!