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Making Essays Easy!
Planning & OrganizingEffective Papers
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Where Do I Begin?
Before beginning your paper, ask yourselfseveral questions
o What is my topic?o What are the assignment requirements?
o Who is my audience?
o How much can I assume they know?o What tone should I use?
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Basic Essay Structure
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Basic Essay Structure
The introduction starts with a broad focus and quicklynarrows down to the thesis.
The thesis is the most important sentence in thepaper. It clearly states the argument, and all evidencein the paper should directly or indirectly support it.
Each paragraph in the body of the paper is about adifferent argument and each needs to start with a topicsentence that tells what the paragraph is about.
The conclusion can branch out from the narrow focus
of the paper to discuss the broader implications of thetopic.
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Introductions
Effective Introductions Should:
o Introduce the topic
o Explicitly state your thesiso Contain approximately 4-10 sentences
o Capture the readers attention
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Strategies for Introductions
Background: May include historical or chronologicalinformation.
Definition: If the paper focuses on an abstractsubject, such as honor, love, courage, freedom, etc.,define the term.
Question: Make the reader contemplate the topic.
The body of the paper must thoroughly answer thequestion.
Quotation: Discuss its significance immediately
afterward.
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Writing a Thesis Statement
An effective thesis should:
o Be a central idea that requires supporting
evidenceo Be of adequate scope for an essay of the
assigned length
o Be sharply focusedo Not have an immediately obvious answer
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Good and Bad Thesis Statements
o Bad: The first polygraph was developed by Dr. John A. Larson in1921. (Too factual)
o Good: Because the Polygraph has not been proven reliable, evenunder the most controlled conditions, its use by private employers
should be banned.
o Bad: Mapping the human genome has many implications forhealth and science. (Too broad)
o Bad: A person who carries a genetic mutation linked to a particulardisease might or might not develop that disease. (Too narrow)
o Good: Although scientists can now detect genetic predisposition tospecific diseases, not everyone should be tested for these
diseases.
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Suggestions for Writing ThesisStatements
To craft a complex thesis that contains several ideas,sentence paradigms can be helpful.
Examples:
o Although ________, ________.
o Because ________, ________.
o By [doing something], Carl Cadet does[something else].
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Body Paragraphs
Body paragraphs develop the major points ofthe thesis.
Each paragraph is like a miniature paper witha thesis, facts to support the thesis, and aconclusion.
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Body Paragraphs Continued
Begin with a topic sentence (the thesis of theparagraph) that transitions smoothly from previousparagraph and states the point the paragraph will
develop. Offer examples, facts, expert opinions, quotations
and other evidence to support the main idea.
Make sure to analyze this information andshow clearly why it supports your thesis!
End with concluding sentence to wrap up theparagraph.
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Conclusions
A conclusion should remind readers whatyour thesis is without repeating exactly what
you already said. Drive home your point and perhaps leave
the reader with something broader to
consider. Leave readers with a sense of closure.
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Strategies for Conclusions
Summarize the essays key points.
Propose a course of action
Discuss the topics wider significance. Askyourself, So what?
Use an example, image, anecdote etc. thatrelates to the introduction, so readers comefull circle.
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Try to Avoid
Re-wording thesis
Incorporating language such as, in
conclusion, to summarize, or in closing Oversimplifying
Introducing new, unrelated ideas
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Writing an Outline
Outlines come in all forms, from simple and informal todetailed and formal.
One of the simplest kinds of outlines is the thesisfollowed by a list of ideas:
Thesis: Television advertising should be regulated to helpprevent childhood obesity.
Children watch more television than ever.
Snacks marketed to children are often unhealthy andfattening.
Childhood obesity can cause diabetes and other healthproblems.
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More Outlines
A more detailed outline can include the thesis, followed bytopic sentences and supporting evidence for eachparagraph.
Thesis: Although various methods for limiting or disposing of nuclearwastes have been proposed, each has serious drawbacks.
A. The process of limiting nuclear waste through partitioning and
transmutation has several negative aspects. The process is complex and costly. Workers exposure to radiation would increase.
B. Antarctic ice sheet disposal is a problem for scientific and legal
reasonsA. Understanding of ice sheet behavior is limited.B. International treaty prohibits it.
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Note on Outlines
Writing something in an outline does not set itin stone.
Actually, outlining can help highlightweaknesses in your argument that need tobe changed.
Happy Writing!
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