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February 2010ris Paz Q. Ortega

AAegal Writing

1. I am planning a retirement luncheon for Taylor Toyauski, and recommend that the luncheon beheld before he leaves the company.I am planning to hold a retirement luncheon for Taylor Toyauski before he leaves the company.

2. We have confirmed reservations in your name, and your room charges have been prepaid by usalso.We have confirmed the reservations in your name and we have also paid your room charges.

3. We have compiled Manpower and the Monkey to give you the necessary information, and itwas edited and updated as we have experienced a quantum leap of energy.We have compiled, edited and updated Manpower and Monkey to give you the necessary information.

4. Managers should comment on writing skills in performance appraisals and you should alsorecommended self-study texts for improvements.Managers should comment on writing skills in performance appraisals. They should also

recommend self-study texts for improvements.5. All of the expenses that go on forms for reimbursement should be approved by department

heads or their designated representatives. Please review these for accuracy. All of the expenses that go on forms for reimbursements should be reviewed and approved by the department heads or their representatives for accuracy.

6. This system makes it easy for you to boost payments on long-standing accounts. Users will alsohave an invaluable checklist of ten ways to spot a company in financial trouble.This system makes it easy for users to boost payments on long-standing accounts. It also givesthem an invaluable checklist on how to spot a company in financial trouble.

7. This situation seems to have slipped out of hand, and i would suggest that we call in a consultant

immediately to see if we can dismiss the whole crew and start over.This situation seems to have slipped out of our hands. I suggest we call in a consultant immediately to see if we can dismiss the whole crew and start over.

8. The instructor must provide a recommend reading list by August; the tuition will be paid in fullby September.The instructor must provide a recommended reading list by August; the students must pay their tuition fees in full by September.

9. Please sign here and you should pay me now.Please sign here and pay now.

10. The managers gathered at his retirement dinner, and great eagerness to say goodbye wasexpressed.The managers gathered at his retirement dinner and expressed great eagerness to say goodbye.