A2 Photography Assessment: Unit 3 Coursework Portfolio

STUDENT: Issey Tulip-Parkin CANDIDATE # TEACHER(S):Mr Holden/Ms Carey

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UNIT 3 n/a n/a n/a n/a n/a Issey there is some interesting work here the projection work towards the end of the project are particularly interesting. However as the project moves on I feel you are losing your meaning a little and are not as interesting. The bold colour work of Bill Armstrong gives the photographs a focal point and I feel your work needs to have this. As the project progresses you must make sure to write exactly where you are going and why at the moment there are lots of visuals but not enough written explanations. You must make sure that all artists you look at have at least one image analysed in detail and then connected to your own visual practise.TasksContact sheets need to be larger to enable viewer to see you r visual thought processesDocument all processesMore focus on faces portraits (Possible path forward)Blur person not background (Possible path forward)Link work back to Armstrong using colour and projection of images on the figureYou must write up everything and explain what you are doing contextually and practicallyAnalyses all artists looked at in full detailP

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UNIT 3 13 13 12 14 52 C -This is a working at grade at present you don’t not have a clearly defined final piece so this is reflected in your mark