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Revision Assistant Improving student writing through better automated, formative feedback.

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Page 1: Introducing Revision Assistant

Revision Assistant

Improving student writing through better automated, formative feedback.

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Students Control the Writing Process

With Revision Assistant

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Writers receive feedback immediately, at the click of a button.

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Writers receive feedback immediately, at the click of a button.

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Targeted, constructive comments appear in context in student work.

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Signal Checks show students how well they’re performing on their writing tasks.

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Wi-fi-like visual cues tell students how well their entire essay performs on Common Core aligned rubric traits.

Holistic Scores

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Blue and orange highlighting shows students their stronger and weaker sentences for each trait.

Sentence Level Evaluation

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Comments associated with each highlighted sentence explain the strength or weakness and offer steps to building a better essay.

Revision Advice

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Emphasize revision and reflection as a process by capturing previous drafts.

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Teachers Gain Support in the Classroom

With Revision Assistant

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See every draft and gain insight into each student’s process, effort, and progress.

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“I feel like I’m neglecting them. With this I can say, did you get your signal check? What did it say?” —High School English Teacher

Drive deeper, more meaningful conversations, structured around feedback and revision.

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supports the whole writing process.

provides Common Core prompts

supports class management.

‣ Revision Assistant provides prompts that are already aligned to Common Core Standards.

‣ The Library includes persuasive, narrative, and expository prompt.

‣ Students submit assignments to teachers through Revision Assistant.

‣ Teachers may review final submissions, drafts, and related signal checks in the application.

‣ Teachers may send comments through Revision Assistant.

Focus on guiding student learning and spend less time on administrative tasks.

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Teachers and Students are Changing the Conversation

With Revision Assistant

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“I loved being able to get help revising before submitting it.” —Student

What Students are Saying

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“It did not give me answers. It made me think for myself.” —Student

What Students are Saying

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“It gives me constant feedback on my essay.” —Student

What Students are Saying

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“It was able to point out some weak points that you had, but also encourages you by showing what you did right.” —Student

What Students are Saying

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What Teachers are Saying

“They tend to see me as the adversary. When they started working on Revision Assistant, that dynamic changed….

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What Teachers are Saying

…They were more open to suggestions…it really changed the conversation.” —High School Teacher

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What Teachers are Saying

“With a Signal Check, it’s the student initiating a really targeted conversation, which really didn’t happen much before with some of the weaker students…”—High School Teacher

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What Teachers are Saying

“That weaker, more marginal student who might give up a lot easier is the one where, they’ll write a paragraph, click the signal check, and try to make it better.”—High School Teacher

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Revision Assistant

Improving student writing through better automated, formative feedback.