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Michael Sanders
Professor Jan Rieman
English 1102
Date: April 4, 2012
Self-assessment
I think that this paper was really well written compared to past papers. This has to be
the first time I feel like I did an actual research paper. After I had finished my first draft I really
did not think it would need as much revision as I did. After I fully read through my paper I
noticed many errors that were so obvious. The peer workshop helped me find many of these
errors and suggested many things that helped enhance my paper. Overall I find that my peer
workshops really helped and I was able to revise and edit many things. This has to most thought
I have put into revising a paper but I have to say that it feels like it really paid off.
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Michael Sanders
Professor Jan Rieman
English 1102
Date: April 4, 2012
Identity Theft: Why do they do it and what are its affects?
In the past Identity Theft was not considered a major crime even though it was
happening to thousands of people. Identity theft has grown a lot over the years and now
people are more aware than ever. Identity theft is a major crime that involves someone stealing
someone elses identity. This crime can literally destroy the victims life. What would you do if
all of you lifes hard work and hard earned money is taken away from you within a matter of
seconds? That is a question you all should be thinking about because if your identity is taken
and you dont do anything to get it back then it is gone for good or until the thieves decide they
are done with it. It is always best to act as soon as you see any signs of identity theft happening
to you.
Identity thieves are capable of getting to others personal information in many different
ways. One of the easiest and fastest ways for the thieves to get your personal information
would be through the internet. Identity thieves set out many traps on the internet that they use
to trick people into giving them their personal information. One method they use is called
phishing and what they do is send out emails for different people that look like emails from
trustworthy sources and they try to trick the users into giving out their personal information. To
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defend yourself from this scam, it is best if you pay close attention to what emails you are
opening and viewing. If you notice anything suspicious, like the senders email looks similar to a
personal email, then it is more than likely a person trying to trick you into giving them your
information.
www.creditscore.net, Web. 4 April 2012.
It can be real easy to fall into these traps that I talked about because sometimes it is
hard to spot them. I myself have fell victim to one of these traps and one thing I have to say is,
always be on the lookout for suspicious emails. What had happened was I was having a
problem with a product I bought online and I had contacted the company through an email and
was waiting for a response. I had done this before so I knew that I had to give them my credit
card information. Later on that day I had received an email from what I thought was the
company saying that I was missing some information so they could not help me yet. I sent them
another email with my information on it, but guess what it was not them. I found out this
because minutes later the actual company had responded back. I was a little worried because I
know what I had just did, I had given the thieves all of my cards information. I knew that the
first thing to do was to call my bank and cancel my card. I was in a very serious situation and
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many things could have happened if I did not respond like. I could have lost all of my money in
my bank account or worse. If you are ever in a similar situation just remember to call your bank
to cancel your card so you can stop the thieves dead in their tracks.
Do you keep your personal information in your computer; if you do then you might want
to pay attention to this. There are also ways in which thieves can access your computer without
you even knowing. The ways that they do this is through different computer viruses. There are
some viruses that are used to take control of others computers and many times you get these
by visiting a virus infested website or download. Of course many of you know that the best
defense for viruses would be anti-virus programs for your computer. Now you just cannot
expect to have an anti-virus program and never get a virus because in order to be completely
protected you must always keep you program up to date. The reason you must do this is
because it enables you program to detect newer viruses.
Even though many identity thieves use internet based scams and traps to catch their
victims, it is not the only way they can get others information. They have been many cases
where people have had their personal mail taken and thieves use their mail to get their
personal information. Yes that means you need to keep an eye on your mail too, to make sure
that nothing is missing. It is always best to have your mail canceled if you ever move to a
different location because sometimes your mail can be delivered to your old home without you
knowing and that gives the thieves a chance to easily take your information.
Identity thieves do not really care how they get your identity because some will do
whatever it takes to make some easy money. Do you have any deceased relatives if so then this
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next might surprise you quite a bit. Identity Thieves are now targeting dead people for their
identities, yes you heard right. I know it is disturbing but it is the truth. The thieves use the
deceased persons information to do many things such as opening new credit cards in their
name and ruining the deceased persons credit history. By the time it is over the victim will be
put into unbelievable debt and it will affect many relatives of the deceased person. It is a
horrible thing but it does not have to happen to you. Here are some things you can do to
prevent this from happening. First off make sure that all three credit bureaus know of your
relatives death so they can stop anyone who tries to mess with their credit. Also make sure
that you cancel their drivers license so it cannot be used by someone else.
What are the motives of these thieves? There has to be a reason for doing all of these
things just to get someones identity. In an article I read by Tom Zeller Jr. He talks about an
interview he had with a man named Sharma, who was a thief that got convicted of identity
theft and was sentenced years in prison, about his motives behind his actions. It was said that
throughout Sharmas career he had taken up to $150,000 in stolen items and cash. In the
interview Sharma talked about how much easier it was for him to make all of that money in
such a short amount of time. He said that he could not go back to his old job because it was not
making him anywhere near the amount of money he was making stealing others money. He did
not admit that money was his primary motive for stealing all those peoples money. He said
that through all the years of stealing others money he could not get himself to stop doing it
even if he wanted too. It had become a personal addiction of his which he said he could not
control. He even stated "I get scared that when I get out, I might have a problem and relapse
because it would be so easy to take $300 and turn it into several thousand."
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There is no doubt that majority of identity thieves steal because of the money. There
have been some cases where someone stole anothers identity for personal reasons. There are
some thieves that dont steal peoples identities for the money but they do it to ruin the other
persons life. It sounds like a something that would happen within a movie, but it is al l too real.
If someone has your identity it means they have your full name, credit cards, bank account
numbers, and your social security number. When they have all of that then officially they are
you. Do you know what that means? It means they can do whatever they want with your
identity because after all they are you. If they wanted to they can go out and rob a bank or even
murder someone and they could still get away with it. Now it sounds unreal but it has
happened and I will happen again. This shows you that there are many different motives behind
these criminals other than money.
Who exactly are these criminals targeting? Many of you may think that they target older
people the most because they are more vulnerable, but it is actually quite the opposite.
According to Keith Andersons article older people are less likely to get their identity stolen. The
reason why is because based on his article, today more thieves are targeting people who have
the most credit history. When you see an elderly person you do not see them with five or six
credit cards nor do you see them spending their money left and right, this is why they are not
targeted as much as people might think. Also to go along with that it might be best to say that
the better the credit the higher the risk of getting your identity stolen.
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Dignan, Larry. Consumer Sentinel Network,http://www.zdnet.com/blog/btl/ftc-id-
theft-cases-surge-20-somethings-biggest-percentage-of-complaints/1360, Web. 4 April, 2012.
Of course as you may know the more money you have the bigger of a target you are.
You dont see many lower class citizens getting their identity stolen, because they dont have
much money to be taken and as I said before most thieves are out for your money. If I was a
thief of course I would try to find the richest person to take their money because the more
money they have the more I can take.
Another thing that criminals look for is large families. Yes thats right the more children
you have the more likely it would be to get your identity stolen. In Andersons article is says
that Having more children is associated with more transactions, possibly including transactions
conducted by the children. So that means that it is not you that their targeting but it is your
children because they have less experience when managing finances and young kids are more
likely to fall into their traps. Criminals also look at the amount of adults in a household. If your
household has more adults they are less likely to target you because the more adults in a
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household the more aware they are of identity theft. That means that if you are the only adult
in a household you are a bigger target.
We all know what these criminals are capable of but what are the consequences of their
crimes? Identity theft has grown so much over the years that it is considered one of the
countrys most serious crimes. One of the main offences ofidentity theft is called aggravated
identity theft. It is said that aggravated identity theft is the use of stolen identities to commit
other crimes. If a thief were to get caught and convicted for aggravated identity theft they
would automatically get a two-year sentence in a federal prison. If they were using identity
theft to commit another crime then that crime will also be added to their sentence. For
example, if I were to steal someones identity and use their name to rob a bank, I would get
sentenced for both identity theft and attempted robbery. At least we know that if the thieves
are caught they will get a well-deserved sentence.
Identity theft is a crime that is sometime hard to detect, so what are ways we can stop it
from occurring? First things first always keep an eye out for your wallet or purse and make sure
that it is secure in your pocket or purse. Most people keep personal information such as of
course drivers license and credit cards. It is also best ifyou only keep a small amount of credit
cards in your wallet or purse, so dont carry any un-needed cards.
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Guthrie, Doug. benefitsbuzz.blogspot.com, Web. 4 April 2012.
One of your most important pieces of information would be your social security
number. If it gets stolen you are in big trouble and should do anything to get it back. You should
always keep it in a safe place where only you know where it is and it should never be kept in
your wallet or purse. It is also always best to shred all documents that contain your personal
information. If you were to throw it in the trash then a thief could easily take it out of your
trash. Dont just give your personal information to just anyone make sure you know who it is
and what it is needed for.
Identity theft is something that you need to always be on the watch out for. It is such a
simple crime for some even though it can ruin peoples lives. It is a crime that you may have
never known it had happened before it was too late. Always keep this information in mind just
in case it ever happens to you and make sure you know what to do when your identity is stolen.
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Works Cited
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Journal Of Public Policy & Marketing 25.2 (2006): 160-171. Business Source Complete.
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Angus Marshall and Brian Tompsett. "Identity Theft: Identity Theft In An Online
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And Practice 21.(2005): 128-137. ScienceDirect. Web. 21 Feb. 2012.
Kuykendall, Lavonne. "Service Enables Disaster Victims To Salvage Lost Identifications."
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Percy, Sally. "Catch Me If You Can."Accountancy 139.1364 (2007): 26-27.Business Source
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Tom Zeller, JR. "`You know it was wrong'; Imprisoned identity thief talks about his motives.
"Houston Chronicle (TX) 05 July 2006: 2.NewsBank. Web. 21 Feb. 2012.