incorporating writer’s workshop into the elementary classroom
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Incorporating Writer’s Workshop into the Elementary Classroom
Erik Wittmer5th Grade Teacher
Park Hills Elementary
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Setting The Foundation
What is your definition of Writer’s Workshop?
What is your opinion about Writer's Workshop?
What questions do you have about Writer’s Workshop?
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What is Writer's Workshop according to Erik?
DAILY, structured time Teacher provides explicit instruction Students select their own topics to write
about Students are encouraged to be risk takers as
they develop their own individual writing style
A community to share and learn from one another
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Framework for Writer’s Workshop
The Mini-Lesson•Connection•Teach•Active Engagement•Link•Read aloud mentor texts
(5-10 minutes)
Independent Writing•Writing•Guided Writing•Conversing•Mid-Workshop Share
(20-30 minutes)
Sharing•2-3 Students(5 Minutes)
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Components of Mini-Lessons
Pulling students together Setting the tone “Show and Tell” the objective Get students involved
5 -10 Minutes
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Components of Independent Writing
Initially just write for extended period of time
Free writing Play with writing Reading Staring off into space Drafting a writing project Conversing Publishing 20 -30 Minutes
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Writer’s Stamina with Katie Ray Wood
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Components of Sharing
Simple Response Share Survey Share Focused Share Student-as-teacher share Content Share Craft Share Process Share Progress Share
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Talk Time
Turn to a Partner and Talk about the Different Components in a Writer’s Workshop
Be sure to include the time frames
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Why Writer’s Notebooks
Practice Writing Generate Text Find Ideas Practice grammar Become a stronger writer Portfolio
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Structure of Writer’s Notebooks
Page Numbers Section Title1-3 Table of Contents4-10 Seeds, Writing
Territories, Authorities 11- 13 Writing Terms14-40 Craft Ideas41-65 Editing Ideas65-80 Other Mini –Lessons80 - Playground
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Decorating the Notebook
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Eliminate “I don’t know what to write about”
History of a Name Writing from a list Top 10, Worst 5 Scary Stories I Wonder/Question Daily page Write off Literature Observations
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More Ideas
Topic Blast What Bugs Me Good Ideas/Bad Ideas Snapshots Artifacts Family Mysteries Parents
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Preschooler Talks about his notebook
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Talk Time
Turn to a Partner and Talk Writer’s Notebooks
What are you going to do to promote daily writing?
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More Ideas for Writer’s Notebooks
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Primary Classroom Poster for Ideas
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What’s In? What’s Out?
In the Notebook Daily Entries
Strategies for launching the notebook.
Finding Patterns Rereading and marking patterns in
writing. Collecting Around A Topic
Strategies for thinking about a topic.
Revision Strategies Trying different things for a draft.
Editing, Grammar Notes Class notes on grammar and
editing skills.
Out of the Notebook Drafts
The whole piece is written out on yellow legal-pad paper.
Revisions Revisions the author wants to use
are added or deleted from the piece.
Editing Editing the actual piece before
writing the final copy is done right on the draft.
Final Copy Final copies of writing pieces are
done on white paper or another published format.
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Teachers as Writers
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Goals: What We Hope To See Students Developing Over Time In Their Notebooks…
A sense of self as writers and personal writing processes that work for them.
Ways of reading the world like writers. Collecting ideas with variety, volume and
thoughtfulness. Each student possesses personal writing
processes that work for him/her. Boxes and bullets Stream of consciousness writing T-charts
Katie Wood Ray, Wondrous Words, 215
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Goals, continued…
A sense of thoughtful, deliberate purpose about their work as writers, and a willingness to linger with those purposes. Following an idea through to publication. “Living with” a topic over time.
Katie Wood Ray, Wondrous Words, 215
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Goals, continued…
Becoming members of a responsive, literate community. Working with “editors.”
Family Members Friends Teachers
Katie Wood Ray, Wondrous Words, 213
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Goals, continued…
Ways of reading texts like writers (for both structure and ways with words). Developing a sense of craft, genre and form. Studying a variety of genres. Studying one writer’s body of work.
Author Studies Writer’s Craft Studies
Katie Wood Ray, Wondrous Words, 216
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Goals, continued…
A sense of audience. Understanding of how to prepare writing to
share with the “world.” Learning about publishing opportunities for
young writers. Focusing on what happens during the
publishing process.
Katie Wood Ray, Wondrous Words, 216
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Mini -Lessons
Connection
Teaching
Active Engagement
Link
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Connection
Students learn why today’s lesson is so important and how it relates to their
prior work Opens the mini-lesson Teacher repeats previous day’s teaching point Teacher names today’s teaching point
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Teaching
Children are taught a new skill and strategy
that they can use often when they write: Tell/State the teaching point and explain
when and why a writer might use it Show (method of delivery)Demonstration
(modeled or shared writing) Explicitly tell and show an example Inquiry (notice techniques authors use) Guided practice (scaffolding)
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Active Engagement
Children briefly use the strategy taught while the teacher is there to provide support:
Tell: Repeat the teaching point to get students ready for what they will practice
Coach: (practice)Can be practiced by having students try a quick example in a writing notebook
Can verbally try it with “Turn and Talk” strategy Can practice this strategy using a piece of mentor text
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Link
This is not a closing but a launch! Make the transition from the mini- Lesson to independent writing:
Restate the teaching point into clear language that students will remember
Get students excited to try what they learned, if it applies
Remind students that this teaching point can be used in the future, when needed
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Kindergarten Mini -Lesson
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Talk Time
Turn to a Partner and Talk Mini-Lessons What are the four main parts of these short,
powerful lessons?
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Selecting the Focus of the Lesson
Mini-lesson may be based on: Procedures during Writer’s Workshop Genres Writing process Traits of good writing Resources to assist with planning: PA State Standards Observing students’ work while roaming the
room and conversing Collecting student writing to evaluate
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Independent Writing Time
Students write on their own to:
Practice skills and strategies previously taught
Develop understanding of multiple genres of writing/reading
Gain writing fluency and stamina
Share their experiences through topic choice
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Guided Writing
Students write and attempt to apply what has been previously demonstrated and practiced
Teacher guides, responds, and extends the students’ thinking
Groups of 2-6 students with similar needs based on data and observations
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Conversing
Research
Compliment
Decide and Teach
Link
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Research
Determine what the child is beginning to do well and what you want to teach them to do better by: Observing Reading the student’s work
Asking open-ended questions “How’s it going?” “Can you tell me what you are working on as a writer today?”
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Research Continued
Consider what you already know about the writer using conference notes
Research the same skill and/or strategy until you know the writer can use it independently
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Compliment
React like a reader: “Wow! Your details really helped me to
picture what was happening!” Clearly state the skill and strategy used and
show where they used it Explain why it is important to continue
using it
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Decide and Teach
Of all the things that I could teach this child, what is the one thing likely to make the most difference on this piece and in future pieces?
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Decide and Teach Cont…
“How will I teach this to the child?”State the skill and/or strategy
Explain when and why to use it Show how to successfully use it Coach as they practice it in their own writing Comments and questions to ask:
I have one suggestion to make. Can I show you one thing? Can you try?
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Link
Repeat the teaching point
Name what the child has done
Remind him that this skill and/or strategy can be used in the future, as needed
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Components of Sharing
Based on conferences and guided writing groups, the teacher stops writers to quickly share:
A need of the majority of students
An extension of the mini-lesson, revisit something taught earlier in the year, or a new concept
Something great seen in a student’s piece that she wants to strategically point out
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Sharing Cont.
Points to remember: The share always includes teaching: State the
skill and/or strategy
Explain when and why to use it
Show what it looks like to successfully use the strategy
Use student work as much as possible or a teacher created piece
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Types of Shares
Simple Response Share Survey Share Focused Share Student-as-teacher share Content Share Craft Share Process Share Progress Share
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Other Types of Shares
Fish Bowl Author’s Chair RAGS – Read Around Groups
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1st Grade Class Buddy Sharing
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5th Grade Celebrations = Sharing
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Talk Time
Think about all the different types of shares that were presented. Do you use one that wasn’t mentioned?
How important is this portion of writer’s workshop?
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Ticket Out the Door
3 – New Ideas you can use next year within your writing community
2- Sharing ideas that were new to you 1 – Something you would like to see covered
tomorrow
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Setting Up the Process
Expectations Materials Peer Conferencing Completed Papers Conversations Reflections Writer's Notebook Mini - Lessons Status of the Class
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Status of the Class
Before/After Mini – Lesson Easy way to check in with every student Lets them know you are “watching” each
one of them Can be one of the following:
Clothespins Board 3 x 5 cards Anything that shows the writing process
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Materials
Paper Staplers 3 Hold Punch Colored Pencils Any material that can help to make the
students move papers on
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Peer Conferencing
Student giving advice to Student Not about anything but writing
Effective? Alternative ways?
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Day # 2
Think about all that we covered yesterday. What are you still unclear on or need help
clarifying? Writer’s Notebooks Stages of Writer’s Workshop
Most important part? Conversations instead of conferencing Different type of sharing Units of Study
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Agenda
Mentor Text Sample Lessons using Mentor text with 6 Traits in
Mind Find some of your own Mentor text 6 Traits and How the language can be used Setting up the entire workshop ABCD of writing (Kelly Gallagher and Amy
Tarbell) Graphic Organizers
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Conversation
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Routines and ExpectationsRoutines give students something to count on, a place to hang knowledge, a place to share and
explore every day.
Done through mini – lessons Takes at least three to four weeks May need to repeat lessons Moving from desks to writing areas Moving around during writing Status of the Class Expectations Publishing papers
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Model Lesson on Routines
Moving from mini- lesson to writing When I say, “Go ahead and write” you have 1
minute to get in the zone When you hear this signal, that means it is
time to be writing Let’s try it now. Same goes for when writer’s workshop is over. Play music to key students to wrap it up and
come to the sharing area
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Setting up the Routines
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Why Mentor Text?
Mentor text are pieces of literature that students can relate to
Mentor text are pieces of literature that are studied and imitated
Mentor text provide students with powerful connections
Mentor text help students take risks and try new strategies
Mentor text are the literature that students can relate to and can read independently
Provided by Rose Cappelli and Lynne Dorfman, 6/28/11
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Katie Ray on using Mentor Text
“I often think that when I watch a really good teacher of writing, it’s almost like there are life-size cardboard cutouts of authors all around the room. Jane Olen is standing by the chalkboard and Eloise Greenfield is just by the door to welcome students as they enter… With a room full of authors to help us, teaching writing doesn’t have to be so lonely.”
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Choosing a Mentor Text
1. You must connect with the book and love it1. Subject matter2. Author3. Illustrations 4. Genre
2. How does it serve your student’s needs and connect with your curriculum
1. Can students relate and/or read alone
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Choosing a Mentor Text Continued
1. Balance of genre1. Fiction, nonfiction, memoir, and poetry
2. Just like most things in writer’s workshop, it comes down to a personal decision
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Introducing Mentor Text
First time through complete as read aloud: Appreciate the story and characters Message, rhythm
Second time through using eyes of writer Teach to read like writers when using
mentor text Demonstrate reading-writing connection
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What Do We Learn by Using Mentor Text
Craft of writing They there are places from which writers
gather ideas Help students find ideas Breathe courage into their writing by
helping them take risks
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Your Turn Lesson
Hook Purpose Brainstorm Model Shared/Guided Writing Independent Writing Reflection
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Modeled Lesson
Hook -When I was Five by Author Howard Purpose – Taking Big Idea and Making into one
you KNOW Brainstorm –What can you add to your writing
territories/seeds now that we read this story? Model – Inverted Triangle Shared/Guided Writing – Students try triangle Independent Writing- Continue Reflection - How did this strategy work for you as
a writer?
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Reflection + Talk Time
What was going through your mind as this lesson was being taught?
How do you see yourself using a lesson format like this?
Different and bit longer than mini-lesson Talk to your table about the positives and
negatives you would see doing something like this in our classroom
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Modeled Lesson
Hook –Lily’s Purple Purse by Kevin Henkes Purpose – Adding Details through questioning Brainstorm –Recent things you did at night, on the
weekend Model – Share my list Shared/Guided Writing – Bring two students to front
of room and have a discussion Independent Writing- Question marks in their
writing Reflection – How did this strategy work for you as a
writer?
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Other Ideas for The Writer’s Notebook
Memory Chain using Letter to the Lake
Every Picture Tells a Story = Gallery Walk
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Setting the Stage Reading Like a Writer
1. Notice something about the craft2. Talk about it and make a theory about why
a writer might use this craft3. Give it a name4. Have you seen this craft in other books?5. Try to imagine how you could use this craft
in your own writing
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The Relatives Came by Cynthia Rylant
•Structure = Circle•Ways with Words = • Commas a lot• Puts periods in places that aren’t
sentences• “Funny” words like hugging time
•She uses dashes•She repeats words (hugging, breathing)
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Notice something about the craft
Often general statements i.e – “Puts pictures in my mind
Need to get right on top of either the words, the way the words are put together (including punctuation and marks)
Structure of the text to help envision the craft of their own writing
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Talk about it and make a theory about why a writer might use this craft
A writer’s conversation about why the author might have done what they did.
Specific questions about the craft Think about the why
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Name
Give it a class name Doesn’t need to be from a grammar book As long as students remember it within the
walls of the classroom If the craft has a name, call it by that
particular name Personification
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Other Text
Have you noticed this craft in another text Becomes easier as we understand this
process Try to have set so other text have similar
craft early on
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Envision using the craft
Don’t force it so students must use it Envision it so they can use the technique in
the future What would it sound and look like in a
writing piece “So, if I am writing and I want to ____ , then I
can use this technique.
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Reflections
Very important Used throughout the process Students see themselves as writers Helps develop the revision process Brainstorming Drafting
Memory Chain Inverted Triangle
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Craft Lesson on Talking Bubbles
Hook –Magic Tree House Series by Joanne Cole Purpose – Add discussions into stories Brainstorm –What are some conversations we might
hear at the family dinner table? Model – Draw picture of Aidan and Brielle informing
about their trip to Dutch Wonderland Shared/Guided Writing – Students look at their
stories Independent Writing- Try it out with speech bubble Reflection - How did this strategy work for you as a
writer?
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6 Traits of Writing
Ideas Sentence Fluency Organization Word Choice Voice Conventions Presentation
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The Language of 6 Traits
Take writers where they are and move them forward one step at a time
Matches specific needs and abilities Appropriate scoring guide is key to
successful teaching
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Examples of what students can say during revisions or to start a conversations?
Ideas Does my writing make sense? Does my writing show that I understand my
topic? Is my writing interesting?
Organization Do I start off strong Are all my details in the best possible order? Are similar thoughts grouped together
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Examples of what students can say during revisions or to start a conversations?
Voice Can the reader here me in the writing? Can the reader tell I care about this idea? Is the voice I’ve chosen right for my audience?
Word Choice Do the words I’ve chosen sound and feel just
right? Have I painted a picture with words?
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Examples of what students can say during revisions or to start a conversations?
Sentence Fluency Does my writing sound good when I read it
aloud? Do my words and phrases flow together? Have I included sentences of varying lengths
and with different beginnings?
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Examples of what students can say during editing or to start a conversations?
Conventions Is the punctuation correct and does it guide the
reader through the text? Did I capitalize all the right words? Is my spelling accurate – especially for words I
read and write a lot? Did I follow grammar rules to make my writing
clear and readable? Did I indent paragraphs in all the right places?
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Student Example
What trait are you working on? Focus on just that skill Keeps you grounded in focusing in on one
area rather than the entire paper Universal scoring guides are consistent
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Publishing Projects
How often Everyone Where? Electronically Sticky Notes Rubrics At different times
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Mentor Sentences
“All Students need to become sentence stalkers , finding them in the literature and the world.” Jeff Anderson, pg 17
Short phrases and a quick process within the mini - lesson “What do you notice?” “What do you like about the sentence?”
Wall Charts become the norm
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Express Lane Edits
Short and to the point Use students 1st draft Come up with a list of grammar rules that
have been taught Focus on one or two Students take those and edit their paper Model, Model and Model some more
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ABCD For Writing Prompts
Helps attach a writing prompt Needs to be modeled, guided A = Attach the prompt B- Brainstorm ideas C- Choose the order of the response D – Detect errors
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My Mentor Text
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My Mentor Text Continued