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IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Written by Ngoc Bach Website: www.ngocbach.com Page: https://www.facebook.com/tuhocIelts8.0 Page 1

HNG DN VIT BI DNG OPINION T A -> Z

-PHN I-

-By Ngoc Bach-



LI NI U

Hi, xin cho cc bn. Mnh l Ngc Bch.

Vi mong mun gip cc bn t hc IELTS nh c 1 phng php hc c th v r rng, mnh c

tng l bn cnh cc bi ging trc tuyn trn knh youtube

(https://www.youtube.com/user/ngocbach2014/videos) v cc bi vit trn website:

https://www.ngocbach.com v page: https://www.facebook.com/tuhocIelts8.0 , mnh s vit thm cc

phin bn ebook free v IELTS Writing v cc k nng khc h tr mi ngi t hc.

i tng chnh mnh hng n lun l cc bn khi A hay cc bn c nn tng ting anh cha tt.

Phng php mnh s dng cho c 4 k nng vn l phng n gin, d hiu, d p dng nhng m

bo hiu qu.

C kh nhiu bn khi xem cc bi vit trn knh youtube hay trn page ca mnh khng tin rng vit n

gin c th t im IELTS Writing cao, ch ngh rng t tm 6.0. Thc t, c rt nhiu bn hc sinh n

theo phng php mnh hng dn t im IELTS Writing cao.

y l kt qu ca 1 bn hc sinh lp thng 1/2015 thi vo 18/4/2015. Bn y vit chnh xc nh nhng

g mnh hng dn v t 7.5 Writing (overall: 7.0) vi nn u vo Writing tm 5.0~5.5

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Do vy, mi ngi c th yn tm l vit n gin vn c th t im cao, min l bi vit p ng tt

cc tiu ch chm thi.

Hy vng ebook ny vn s c mi ngi ng h nh cc note trc mnh vit.

Cm n mi ngi rt nhiu !

-Ngc Bch-



MC LC

I. KINH NGHIM CHUNG KHI VIT 1 BI IELTS WRITING TASK 2................................................ 4

II. CHIN THUT CHUNG VIT MT BI TASK 2 DNG OPINION ................................................ 5

III. P DNG L THUYT VIT THI IELTS THC T............................................................ 7

1. HNG DN VIT DNG OPINION THEO QUAN IM "MT PHN" .................................. 7

2. BI PHN TCH CHI TIT ................................................................................................................ 8

3. BI VIT PHIN BN NGN GN ............................................................................................... 12

IV. MT S KINH NGHIM KHI VIT 1 BI DNG OPINION ....................................................... 13

V. MT S P DNG ........................................................................................................................ 14

VI. GII THIU PHN 2 .......................................................................................................................... 15



I. KINH NGHIM CHUNG KHI VIT 1 BI IELTS WRITING TASK 2

y l mt s lu khi vit IELTS Writing task 2 da trn kinh nghim hc v dy ca mnh

1. Khi thi IELTS, gim kho khng quan tm xem cu tr li hay kin ca bn ng hay sai. Quan trng

nht l bn c th a ra cu tr li st vi cu hi bi, h tr bng cc lin quan v trnh by sao cho

bi mch lc, d hiu nht c th

2. Nn lp dn trc khi vit. Thng mnh nn khuyn cc bn hc sinh nn dnh ra 5 pht lp dn ,

phc trc chnh nh vit trong 2 kh thn bi. C th note ra mt s "good vocabulary" lin quan n

ch lc vit p dng cho tin

3. Ch rng vi Task 2 bn ch c 40 pht vit. Nu chia bi vit lm 4 kh, 2 kh thn bi -> mi

kh chi nn vit tm 5~6 cu th mi thi gian.

4. Bn nn tm cc tht r rng, n gin h tr cho cu tr li ca mnh. ng a ra cc "su

sc", "tinh t" qu -> kh m gii thch c

5.Examiners love examples -> c gng a ra cc v d thc t gii thch, h tr thm cho cu tr li

ca bn.

6. Lun nh nguyn tc l a t ideas (thng thng mi paragraph tm 2,3 ideas l ), quan trng l

cc ideas c h tr, gii thch c th. Nu a qu nhiu ideas vo 1 paragraph -> s c nguy c "the

paragraph appears to be unplanned and not all these ideas are explained" (Mt trong nhng li hay gp

tiu ch Task response-hon thnh nhim v- ca phn Task 2)

7. Trong qu trnh luyn tp Writing, nn chun b sn cho mnh mt b t, mt s ideas dng c trong

nhiu bi. Mnh thng thch s dng cc cm t n gin, hiu qu nhng dng c trong nhiu ch

. V d: gain some valuable experience/broaden their knowledge/ give ... countless opportunities

to../build a strong relationship...

8. ng quan tm nhiu n vic phi s dng "complex structures" trong bi vit. Chng thc s khng

kh nh bn tng. C th tham kho phn gii thch chi tit s khc nhau gia simple sentences,

compound sentences and complex sentences ti y: http://www.mediafire.com/view/z68mtaf86ntpb29/Sentences_-

_Simple,_Compound,_and_Complex.pdf . R rng l bnh thng bn vn dng m khng cn phi qu ch

n chng. Do vy, khi vit bi task 2, ng quan tm n vic phi s dng cc cu trc ng php phc

tp. Quan trng nht l a ra cc ideas ph hp, r rng. C gng s dng tht nhiu topic vocabulary

vo bi vit.



II. CHIN THUT CHUNG VIT MT BI TASK 2 DNG OPINION

Vi dng bi Opinion, bn thng c 2 hng tr li l:

+ ng (khng ng ) "MT PHN"

+ ng (khng ng ) "HON TON".

Vic chn vit bi theo hng "HON TON" hay "MT PHN" ty vo idea ca bn. Vit theo

hng no th bn c nhiu idea, nhiu 'topic specific' vocabulary hn ? Nu bn vit tt, hng no

cng c th gip bn t band im ti a.

Cc bn c th c 2 dn bi cho 2 hng vit nh sau:

Dn bi vit theo hng ''HON TON"

M bi Nu ch ca bi vit

Nu quan im ca bn (hoc l ng hoc l khng ng ).

Mt s cm hu dng : I do not agree with the idea of /I do not agree that /I

completely disagree/agree with this idea....

Ch : Phi th hin r quan im ca bn. ng nu quan im ca ngi khc. V d

"some people believe / other people argue..." . Nu nh vy s d nhm sang dng

"discuss both views"

Thn bi 1

First reason gii thch cho gim kho ti sao quan im ca bn ng

Thn bi 2 Second reason gii thch cho gim kho ti sao quan im ca bn ng

Kt lun

Nhc li quan im ca bn (ch paraphrase li ton b cu 2 phn m bi )



Dn bi vit theo hng ''MT PHN"

M bi Nu ch ca bi vit

Nu quan im ca bn l bn c "a balanced view" (tc l bn ng mt phn vi vn

nu bi)

Mt s cm hu dng nu quan im mt phn:

I partly agree, I agree to some extent, Although I accept that ..., I disagree with the

idea that..., While I accept that..., I believe that....,

Ch : Phi th hin r quan im ca bn. ng nu quan im ca ngi khc hay nu

kiu chung chung. V d "While there are benefits to ., there are also good reasons. /

Many people suppose that ., whereas others believe (that)" . Nu nh vy s d nhm

sang dng "discuss both views"

Vi phn thn bi: Mi kh bn s vit v mt "kha cnh" ca argument. Ch l ng trn quan im ca

bn ch khng phi ca ngi khc.

Thn bi 1

Mt mt, bn ng v

Thn bi 2 Mt khc, bn ng v...

Kt lun Nhc li quan im ca bn (ch paraphrase li ton b cu 2 phn m bi )



III. P DNG L THUYT VIT THI IELTS THC T

1. HNG DN VIT DNG OPINION THEO QUAN IM "MT PHN"

BI TP P DNG: THI NGY 18-10-2014

It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as

much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

ANSWER:

It is argued that travelling is not essential when people desire to gain understanding about different

cultures, thanks to a great deal of information in books, films and online. While I accept that the latter has

a number of benefits, I believe that the former could be advantageous to some extent.

On the one hand, learning about culture through books, movies and the internet could bring a wide range

of advantages. Firstly, people could save a great deal of time by doing this. Instead of wasting several

weeks visiting places, they now find it much easier to just stay at home to broaden their knowledge about

different cultures, due to the breakthrough in storing and providing information. Secondly, the amount of

information which is provided via these kinds of media is limitless. It is accessible and easy for people to

discover national cultures, which are usually portrayed in books, films and especially on the internet.

On the other hand, visiting different places could be beneficial in some ways. First, tourists could gain

real and valuable experience through trips. For example, many of the tourists to Thailand go to watch the

shows of transgender models and claim that they could understand the difficulties of these people. As a

result, people would show much more positive attitudes towards transsexual men and women.

Furthermore, travelling gives tourists countless opportunities to make friends from different places.

Tourism could help people to build up valuable relationships because they may have chances to not only

meet but also share feelings with other tourists from an array of countries.

In conclusion, while I support the idea that books, films and the internet could bring benefits to people to

learn about different cultural aspects, actual travelling is by no means unnecessary when tourists want to

discover lifestyles and national customs of different cultures.

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Written by Ngoc Bach



2. BI PHN TCH CHI TIT

Thng qua bi phn tch chi tit cch vit ny, hy vng cc bn s hiu hn v cch a ra cu tr li vi

dng Opinion (theo quan im 1 phn)

Ch : phn dch ch l dch i cho ngi c hiu. Cm n em Tng (hc sinh kho thng 4/2015)

gip vit thm phn ny cc bn trnh ting anh cha tt cng c th hiu d dng.

INTRODUCTION

Mt cu

gii thiu

ch ca

bi vit

It is argued that travelling is not essential when people desire to gain understanding

about different cultures, thanks to a great deal of information in books, films and

online.

Dch i & phn tch:

- "Tranh ci rng du lch khng cn thit khi con ngi c th tm hiu v cc nn vn

ha khc nhau nh vo thng tin sch v, phim hay trc tuyn"

- Ch rng y cu m bi c vit bng cch vit li (paraphrase) cu topic ca

bi. Cc t sau ca bi c paraphrase li:

+ "not necessary" -> "not essential"

+ "learn the culture of other people" -> "gain understanding about different

cultures"

+ "We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet" -> "thanks to a

great deal of information in books, films and online"

Mt cu

a ra cu

tr li ngn

gn cho cu

hi ca bi

vit.

While I accept that the latter has a number of benefits, I believe that the former could

be advantageous to some extent.

Dch i & phn tch:

- "Trong khi ti ng rng vn sau (tm hiu vn ha cc nc qua sch v, phm

nh, trc tuyn) c mt s li ch, ti tin rng vn trc (tm hiu vn ha cc nc

bng cch i du lch) c th thun li mt s kha cnh".

- Ch y mnh s dng cu cu trc "While I accept that..., I believe that..."

nu quan im mt phn ca mnh. (Vi bi vit ny mnh khng nghing hn v mt

quan im no m vit cn bng. Bn c th tham kho bi vit phin bn ngn gn

pha di, mnh nghing v pha nn i du lch thc t)



FIRST

SUPPORTING

PARAGRAPH

(ONE SIDE)

Topic

sentence

On the one hand, learning about culture through books, movies and the internet could

bring a wide range of advantages

Lc dch & phn tch:

- "Mt mt, hc v vn ha thng qua sch, phim nh v internet c th mang li

nhiu thun li"

- Ch l cu ny ngha tng ng vi v 1 ca cu 2 phn m bi -> gii thiu

rng kh ny mnh s dng h tr cho v 1. Cu topic sentence ny nu c

trung tm ca on vn v bm c vo phn m bi

- "On the one hand" dng rt tt trong bi vit quan im mt phn.

- Cu topic sentence nn l cu n gin, ngn gn -> gip ngi c hiu c

chnh ca on vn mt cch r rng

First reason

Firstly, people could save a great deal of time by doing this.

Dch i & phn tch:

- "Th nht, ngi ta c th tit kim nhiu thi gian bng vic lm iu ny"

- Mnh nu h tr th nht bng mt cu n gin, r rng. T ni "Firstly" n gin

nhng gip ngi c d dng nhn bit c u l cu h tr

Explain

why

Instead of wasting several weeks visiting places, they now find it much easier to just

stay at home to broaden their knowledge about different cultures, due to the

breakthrough in storing and providing information

Dch i & phn tch:

- "Thay v lng ph vi tun n thm cc a im, h c th d dng nh m rng

kin thc v cc nn vn ha khc nhau, nh vo nhng pht mnh trong vic lu gi

cung cp thng tin"

- Mt vi good vocabulary c th gy n tng vi gim kho y l: wasting several

weeks/broaden their knowledge/the breakthrough in storing and....

- Cu gii thch gii thch c c th hn cho nu ra "First reason"

Second

reason

Secondly, the amount of information which is provided via these kinds of media is

limitless

Dch i & phn tch:

- "Th hai, lng thng tin cung cp thng qua cc hnh thc ny l v hn"

Explain

why

It is accessible and easy for people to discover national cultures, which are usually

portrayed in books, films and especially on the internet.

Dch i & phn tch:

- "D dng cho ngi ta khm ph vn ha quc gia c miu t qua sch, phim nh,

c bit l internet"

- Mt s bn dng t "visible" y (ngha l c th nhn thy c) s khng tt. V



d nh th ny:

"It is accessible and easy for people to discover national cultures, which are usually

visible in books, films and especially on the internet."

"visible" thng dng vi ngha "it is possible to physically see something". V d:

Tornadoes in the USA are usually visible from a distance of many kilometres

Dng t "portray" trong trng hp ny s thch hp hn. Tham kho cch dng

y:

http://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/definition/english/portray?q=portray

hoc

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/portray

Ngoi ra, cng c th dng "described/outlined"

SECOND

SUPPORTING

PARAGRAPH

(OTHER SIDE)

Topic

sentence

On the other hand, visiting different places could be beneficial in some ways

Dch i & phn tch:

- "Mt khc, n thm cc a im khc nhau c th thun li theo mt s cch"

- Ch dng t "on the other hand" nu v kha cnh cn li ca vn kh th

2.

First reason

First, tourists could gain real and valuable experience through trips

Dch i & phn tch:

- "Th nht, khch du lch c th thu c cc kinh nghim qu bu v thc t thng

qua cc cuc du ngon"

- good vocabulary c th gy n tng vi gim kho y l: gain real and valuable

experience

Example

For example, many of the tourists to Thailand go to watch the shows of transgender

models and claim that they could understand the difficulties of these people. As a

result, people would show much more positive attitudes towards transsexual men and

women

Dch i & phn tch:

- "V d, nhiu khch du lch n Thi lan xem cc show ca cc ngi mu chuyn

gii ni rng h c th hiu v nhng kh khn ca nhng ngi ny. Kt qu l,

ngi ta c th c quan im tch cc hn vi nam n chuyn gii"

- y mnh dng mt v d c th minh ha, gii thch c th hn cho nu ra

"First reason". Ch rng gim kho rt thch cc v d thc t nh vy. Khng ch

gip gii thch h tr cc nu, cn lm cho bi vit th v hn.

- Good vocabulary y l: the shows of transgender models

- C th dng "Consequently,..." thay cho "As a result"



Second

reason

Furthermore, travelling gives tourists countless opportunities to make friends from

different places

Dch i & phn tch:

-"Thm na, vic du lch mang li cho khch du lch nhiu c hi kt bn t nhiu

ni khc nhau"

- Good vocabulary: countless opportunities to.....

Explain

why

Tourism could help people to build up valuable relationships because they may have

chances to not only meet but also share feelings with other tourists from an array of

countries.

Dch i & phn tch:

"Du lch c th gip ngi ta xy dng cc mi quan h gi tr bi v h khng nhng

c th gp m cn c th chia s kin vi nhng khch du lch t nhiu nc khc"

-Good vocabulary: to build up valuable relationships

CONCLUSION

Nhc li

chnh nu

2 phn thn

bi

In conclusion, while I support the idea that books, films and the internet could bring

benefits to people to learn about different cultural aspects, actual travelling is by no

means unnecessary when tourists want to discover lifestyles and national customs of

different cultures.

Dch i & phn tch:

- "Kt lun, trong khi ti ng rng sch, phim nh v internet c th mang li nhiu

thun li cho ngi ta tm hiu v cc kha cnh vn ha khc nhau, du lch thc t

khng phi l khng cn thit"

- Mt trong nhng im kh nht khi vit bi theo quan im mt phn y l phi th

hin quan im MT PHN mt cch thng nht t m bi n kt lun. Ch

y mnh dng cm "while I support the idea that...., ...by no means..." nhc li

quan im 1 phn nu cu 2 m bi v phn thn bi. Mi ngi c th xem gii

ngha ca cm "by no means" trong t in Oxford ti y:

by no means, not by any (manner of) means

not at all

She is by no means an inexperienced teacher.

We haven't won yet, not by any means.



3. BI VIT PHIN BN NGN GN Mi ngi c th tham kho thm phin bn "ngn gn" (278 words) cho bi vit trn (vn da trn bi

vit trn nhng din t ngn gn hn) . Ch l bn ny, mnh nghing theo quan im nn i du lch

tm hiu vn ho v mnh th hin iu r rng c phn m bi, thn bi, kt lun

thi ngy 18-10-2014

It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as

much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

ANSWER:

When people wish to gain an understanding of different cultures, it is now possible to obtain a lot of

information thanks to books, films and the internet. While this is certainly valuable, I believe that nothing

can replace the experience of learning about these cultures at first-hand.

On the one hand, learning about new cultures through books, movies and the internet is definitely useful.

Firstly, people could save a great deal of time and money by doing this. Instead of wasting several weeks

to see a new place for themselves, due to the breakthrough in storing and providing information, it is

much easier to stay at home and still broaden their knowledge about different cultures. Secondly, the

amount of information which is available via these kinds of media is limitless. Most people nowadays are

able to find out about how others live and think through books and the media.

On the other hand, actually visiting different places has many benefits. One of these is to gain valuable

insights through what we experience. For example, many of the tourists to Thailand go to watch the

shows of transgender models and claim that they understand better the difficulties of these people.

Another reason is that travelling to learn about a different culture gives people countless opportunities to

make friends and to share their impressions about what they have seen and done during their trip.

In conclusion, I believe that we can use travel guidebooks, films or the internet to do our homework in

order to decide some of the things and places that we want to experience for ourselves, but we can learn

more by experiencing new cultures through travelling.

278 words



IV. MT S KINH NGHIM KHI VIT 1 BI DNG OPINION

1. Quan trng nht khi vit bi theo quan im ny l phi th hin r rng, thng nht quan im ca bn

t u n cui bi vit l "MT PHN". iu ny khng phi lc no cng d dng. V d mt bn

vit phn m bi th ny

"A lot of job seekers always select their career only based on salary level. In my opinion, I partly agree

with this idea."

Kt lun vit th ny

In conclusion, while I accept that a competitive salary can be beneficial for the staff, I disagree with the

idea that it is the most considerable reason to select a job.

-> They can be seen as different opinions.

2.ng dng cc t nh "suggest" "recommend" nu quan im bn thn -> khng r rng

3.Nhiu bn thc mc nh sau:

+ 2 kiu cu hi "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" and just "Do you agree or disagree?" c

cn phi tr li khc nhau ?

+ Vi kiu hi "Do you agree or disagree?" -> bt buc phi vit theo hng 'HON TON" , cn

kiu "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" mi c vit theo kiu "MT PHN" ???

cu tr li l 2 kiu cu hi ny vit nh nhau, vn vit theo kiu 1 phn v hon ton c. iu ny

c Simon (cu gim kho ielts) tr li trong cc bi vit ca ng.

4. Khng phi bi no cng c th vit theo hng 'HON TON" v "MT PHN". V d:

Families who do not send their children to public schools should not be required to pay taxes that

support universal education.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

-> nn chn theo hng hon ton s d vit hn

C mt s nguyn tc, kinh nghim bn a ra quyt nh vit theo hng 'MT PHN" hay

'HON TON". Mnh s tng kt li v vit book hng dn OPINION phn 2



V. MT S P DNG

Cc bn c th da vo dn bi, c & nghin ngm tht k phn hng dn chi tit cch vit ca mnh.

Lu , c thm cc kinh nghim khi vit bi , sai lm thng gp khi vit opinion -> p dng vit cc

di y. Bi gii mu cho my ny kh ph bin -> mi ngi c th google tm. Lm 5 di

y l qu gip bn nm vng cch vit dng opinion

1. thi 11/10/2014: Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people

are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2. Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the

local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.Do

you agree or disagree?

3. When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or

disagree?

4. thi 17/05/2014: Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children

should watch TV regularly both in school and at home. Do you agree or disagree?

5. thi 31/01/2015: Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the

protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?



VI. GII THIU PHN 2 EBOOK

Ni dung phn 2 ca ebook ny mnh d nh s cp n cc vn sau:

+ Hng dn chi tit cch vit 1 bi Opinion theo hng HON TON

+ Nhng li ph bin khi vit bi Opinion theo hng HON TON

+ Kinh nghim khi no nn chn vit bi theo quan im MT PHN, khi no nn vit theo quan

im HON TON ?. Nh mnh cp trong cc bi vit trc, quan im tht s ca bn vi vn

nh th no khi thi IELTS khng quan trng, quan trng l chn quan im th no c th a ra

cu tr li d dng & h tr cu tr li ca bn bng cc lin quan, dng nhiu topic vocabulary

+ Mt s th hay ho na nhng mnh cha ngh ra :)))

Tt c cc phin bn ebook ny u c son hon ton min ph v s c mnh update lin tc trong

thi gian ti. (Tuy nhin, nu bn hoc ang theo hc 1 thy c no v IELTS Writing m bn thy

tin tng v ph hp -> mnh khuyn bn hy kin tr hc theo phng php ca thy c dy. Trnh

tnh trng thy ti liu g cng down v -> tu ha nhp ma :D)

Nu thy ebook c ch, cc bn c th vo mt trong cc a ch sau v mes mnh vi cu ng vin nh.

Mnh s bit l ti liu mnh son c ch vi cc bn v c ng lc ngi vit nhiu ti liu b ch hn na

(Mi ngi cng vo cc a ch ny update khi c cc phin bn ebook mi nh )

https://www.youtube.com/user/ngocbach2014/videos

https://www.ngocbach.com

https://www.facebook.com/tuhocIelts8.0 ,

Mt ln na, cm n cc bn rt nhiu v b cng c n dng cui cng ny

Chc mi ngi thi IELTS kt qu tht tt ! ^^

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