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http://www.ielts-exam.net/index.php? option=com_content&task=category&sectionid=7&id=20&Itemid=32 IELTS WRITING TASK 1 SAMPLE 1. LINE GRAPH IELTS Writing Task 1 #99 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Test Tip Check the horizontal axis to find whether the graph refers to past, present, future or all three. We use the present simple to describe the graph: The graph shows … , We can see If the graph refers to past period of time, we use the past simple, and if the graph includes future times, we use will or it is predicted that.

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http://www.ielts-exam.net/index.php?option=com_content&task=category&sectionid=7&id=20&Itemid=32IELTS WRITING TASK 1 SAMPLE1. LINE GRAPHIELTS Writing Task 1 #99You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

Test TipCheck the horizontal axis to find whether the graph refers to past, present, future or all three.We use the present simple to describe the graph:The graph shows ,We can seeIf the graph refers to past period of time, we use the past simple, and if the graph includes future times, we usewillorit is predicted that.Look at the line graph and complete the text with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets and the correct prepositions.The graph...........(show) how many people...........(visit) three London museums in the summer of 2013. Most visitors...........(go) to the British museum...........June and September. The number...........(fluctuate) between 500 and 750. By contrast, the Science Museum and the Natural History Museum...........(receive) fewer visitors. The number of people who visited the Science Museum...........(drop) gradually from 400 thousand to 300 from June to August then...........(rise) to 450 thousand...........September. We can...........(see) that the trend for the Natural History Museum...........(be) similar. There was a sharp drop in visitors from June to July. The number...........(remain stable) in August and then...........(increase) steadily in September.ANSWER:The graphshows(show) how many peoplevisited(visit) three London museums in the summer of 2013. Most visitorswent(go) to the British museumbetweenJune and September. The numberfluctuated(fluctuate) between 500 and 750. By contrast, the Science Museum and the Natural History Museumreceived(receive) fewer visitors. The number of people who visited the Science Museumdropped(drop) gradually from 400 thousand to 300 from June to August thenrose(rise) to 450 thousandinSeptember. We cansee(see) that the trend for the Natural History Museumwas(be) similar. There was a sharp drop in visitors from June to July. The numberremained stable(remain stable) in August and thenincreased(increase) steadily in September.

IELTS Writing Task 1 #97You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

Source: http://www.epa.gov/epawaste/facts-text.htm#chart3

Test TipDo not confusetonandtonne. A ton is the same as 1.016 tonnes. In American English a ton is 2000 pounds.Read the following sample answer. Complete the answer by filling the gaps with the correct form of the words in the box. Some words can be used more than once.

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The graph depicts waste recycling rates in the U.S............1960 to 2011, in both percentage and tons.

Between 1960 and 1970, the percentage of garbage being recycled annually remained relatively...........at just over 6%. It then...........slightly over the next 15 years to 10.1% in 1985.On the other hand, the amount of garbage being recycled...........during the same period, from 5.6 million tons in 1960 to 16.7 million tons in 1985. Following this...........increase, the amount of waste material being recycled has risen...........between 1985 and 2011 when it...........at 86.9 million tons.

Similarly, the recycling rate continued to grow...........from 1985 to 1995, and then at a slower rate over the next 15 years until it...........a peak of 34.7% in 2011. However, this figure is still disappointing...........to the total amount of waste being recycled each year.(150 words)ANSWER:The graph depicts waste recycling rates in the U.S.from1960 to 2011, in both percentage and tons.

Between 1960 and 1970, the percentage of garbage being recycled annually remained relativelysteadyat just over 6%. It thenroseslightly over the next 15 years to 10.1% in 1985.

On the other hand, the amount of garbage being recycledtripledduring the same period, from 5.6 million tons in 1960 to 16.7 million tons in 1985. Following thissharpincrease, the amount of waste material being recycled has risensignificantlybetween 1985 and 2011 when itpeakedat 86.9 million tons.

Similarly, the recycling rate continued to growsharplyfrom 1985 to 1995, and then at a slower rate over the next 15 years until itreacheda peak of 34.7% in 2011. However, this figure is still disappointingcomparedto the total amount of waste being recycled each year.

IELTS Writing Task 1 #89You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

The graph shows consumption of energy in the U.S. since 1980 with projections through 2030.

The historical trends show Petrol and Oil as the major sources of fuel, rising from 35 quadrillion (35q) units used in 1980 to 42q in 2012. Despite some fluctuation between 1980 and 1995, there was a steady increase, which is expected to continue, reaching 47q in 2030.

Consumption of energy from natural gas and coal followed a similar pattern over the period. From 20q and 15q respectively in 1980, gas showed an initial fall and coal a gradual increase, with the two fuels equal between 1985 and 1990. Consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24q. Coal consumption is projected to rise to 31q in 2030, whereas after 2014, natural gas is forecast to remain stable at 25q.

In 1980, energy from solar/wind, nuclear, and hydropower was the least-used, with only 4q. Nuclear has risen by 3q, and solar/wind by 2. Since 2005, hydropower has fallen back to the 1980 figure. It is expected to remain approximately constant through 2030, while the others are projected to rise gradually after 2025.

Overall, fossil fuels will remain the chief energy source for the US, with a little bit of hydroelectric, nuclear and a smidgen of renewables like wind and solar.

IELTS Writing Task 1 #82You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

model answer:The total number of all species of turtles in India has been relatively stable over the last two decades, although there were significant drops in numbers between 1987 and 1989 and again in 1992 and 1996. Since 2004 there has been an improvement in numbers of all species, although the graph shows a slight decrease in 2010.

In contrast, the population of Leatherback turtles has suffered a severe decline, particularly in 1988 when numbers fell dramatically. The rate of decline in the population appears to have slowed and it has remained relatively stable since 2009.

There was also a fall in the number of Green turtles of around 30% between 1984 and 2002. The population increased slightly in 2010 but it had dropped again by 2012.

It is only Olive Ridley turtles that have seen a steady increase in population over this period. Their numbers dropped slightly in 2007 and again in 2012 but the overall trend has been a positive one.(162 words)

Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #67You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993and March 1999.

Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.

model answer:According to the results of the labor-force research published recently, the following conclusions can be drawn from it:

In March, 1993, United States had seven percent of their workforce which might not seem disastrous until compared with Japan, where 2.5% were unemployed. However, the unemployment rate in United States began declining slowly since March 1993, and reached 5% mark in the middle of 1996. Japan turned out to be less lucky, as their unemployment rate doubled in three years. From then on, the percentage of unemployed workforce in United States remained roughly the same about 5% until March 99, although there were minor falls and rises in the unemployment rate.

As for Japan, the percentage of unemployed fell rapidly by 0.50.6% after March 1996, but from summer 1996 and onwards it grew steadily and without any falls to reach 5.0% boundary in March 1999.

The major conclusion that Ive drawn using the graph, is that number of unemployed in USA decreased by about 2.0% in the course of six years, while in Japan it actually increased by 2.5% percent. As a result, in March 99, both Japan and US had about 5% of their work force unemployed.(198 words)EXAMINERS EXPLANATIONBand 7

This is a good account of the information presented in the graph, although occasionally the organisation of the data is slightly unusual. The writer grasps all the key points, however, and supports these with figures, before providing a summary of the main points. Sentence structures are more than adequate, although the writer has some problems with the use of tenses and prepositions. There are minor examples of unsuitable register (e.g. turned out, disastrous, and one contracted verb form), but as there are only a few instances of this, the candidate has not been penalised.

Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #65You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.Write at least 150 words.

model answer 1:The graph shows the percentage of audiences over 4 yes old of UK follows the radio and television throughout the day during the period October-December 1992. It has been observed from the graph that less than 10% audiences follows the radio at 6:00 am and the percentage raised to a pick around 30% at 8AM and decline gradually to around 10% during the period 200 to 400 Pm and again raised a bi t to around 12% between 400 to 600 PM. It then again dropped to below 10% at around 10PM. The rate again raised to a bit between 1000 PM to 1200 PM and then dropped slowly by 400 AM. On the other hand, the rate of television audiences raises 0-10% during the period 600 to 800 am and remain steady up to 1 0AM and then gradually goes down by 1200 noon. The percentage raised dramatically to around 15% by 200 noon. The percentage raised dramatically goes down by 1200 noon. The percentage raised dramatically to around 15% by 200 PM which again raised to a pick above 40% between 600-800 PM and then gradually dropped between the period 1200 PM to 400 AM.(197 words)EXAMINERS EXPLANATIONBand 6

The answer has an appropriate introduction which the candidate has attempted to express in his/her own words. There is good coverage of the data and a brief reference to contrasting trends. The answer can be followed although it is rather repetitive and cohesive devices are overused. In order to gain a higher mark for content, the candidate would be expected to select the salient features of the graph and comment primarily on these. Sentences are long but lack complexity. There are some errors in tense, verb form and spelling which interfere slightly with the flow of the answer.model answer 2:The blue graph shows the television audiences throughout the day. It shows that the percentage of audiences is three percent in early morning but it gradually rises unto ten percent at 8:00 am and maintains the same for the next two hours. There is a slight fall in percentage in next two hours however after that it raises sharp unto twenty percent within the next two hours. After this the graph rises very fast and attains its peak at 10 pm which is about forty five percent. The graph gradually falls down and at 2:00 am it is at five percent. The red graph shows the percentage for radio audiences. Unlike the television one the peak percentage of the radio audiences is at 8:00 am which is about 30 percent. Then it gradually falls and it corresponds with the television one at two pm. After that it gradually falls but with a small increase in percentage at 4:30 to 6:00 pm. The percentage of audience then gradually goes down and at four AM it is the lowest which is near 2 percent. These graphs prove the progressive popularity of television.(191 words)EXAMINERS EXPLANATIONBand 7

The answer deals well with both the individual media trends and the overall comparison of these trends. The opening could be more fully developed with the inclusion of information relating to the groups studied and the period of time during which the study took place. There is a good variety of cohesive devices and the message can be followed quite easily although the expression is sometimes a little clumsy. Structures are complex and vocabulary is varied but there are errors in word forms, tense and voice though these do not impede communication.

Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #59You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.Write at least 150 words.

model answer:The three graphs of wheat exports each show a quite different pattern between 1985 and 1990. Exports from Australia declined over the five-year period, while the Canadian market fluctuated considerably, and the European Community showed an increase.

In 1985, Australia exported about 15 millions of tonnes of wheat and the following year the number increased by one million tonnes to 16 million. After that, however, there was a gradual decline until 1989 and 1990 when it stabilised at about 11 million tonnes. Over the same period, the amount of Canadian exports varied greatly. It started at 19 million tonnes in 1985, reached a peak in 1988 of 24 million, dropped dramatically in 1989 to 14 million tonnes and then climbed back to 19 million in 1990. Seventeen million tonnes were exported from the European Community in 1985, but this decreased to 14 million tonnes in 1986 and then rose to 15 million in 1987 and 1988 before increasing once more to 20 million in 1990.(165 words)

Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #32You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.You should write at least 150 words.

model answer:The given line graph illustrates information on the percentage of people who went to the movies in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2010. The people's attendance is divided into four different age groups.

Overall, younger people seemed to, and are predicted to, be more active in movie going than their older counterparts. However, all four age groups showed a gradual increase in attendance numbers during the given period, except for a slight drop between 1995 and 2000.

To be specific, a larger percentage of people between the ages of 24 and 34 went to, and are expected to, go to the cinema than those in any other age group. Approximately 51% of the respondents from this age group are expected to attend movies in 2010 compared with only 38% in 1990. Even in the group that had the smallest number of movie goers, those between the ages of 44 and 54, there was an increase of 6% in their attendance.(161 words)

Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #31The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

model answer:The graph shows the fluctuation in the number of people at a London underground station over the course of a day.

The busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a sharp increase between 06:00 and 08:00, with 400 people using the station at 8 o'clock. After this the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 3 pm the number rises, with a plateau of just under 300 people using the station.

In the afternoon, numbers decline, with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. There is then a rapid rise to a peak of 380 at 6pm. After 7 pm, numbers fall significantly, with only a slight increase again at 8pm, tailing off after 9 pm.

Overall, the graph shows that the station is most crowded in the early morning and early evening periods.

Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #20Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

model answer:The graph shows changes in the amount of fast food consumed in the UK between 1970 and 1990. Several trends are apparent. First, Britons are eating more and more fast food. Secondly, the type of fast food has changed.

In 1970, the most popular fast food was fish and chips. Over 300g were consumed each week. By 1990, however, this had fallen to just over 200g - a 50% drop. Consumption of other fast foods such as pizza and hamburgers increased, however. The amount of pizza eaten shot up from about 20g a week to more than 270g, overtaking fish and chips in the late 1980s. Hamburger consumption also increased, rising from about 80g in 1970 to almost 300g in 1990.

Accompanying this change in the choice of foods was an increase in the amount of fast food consumed. In 1970, British consumers ate about 450g a week of fast food. In 1990, on the other hand, this had more than doubled, to 1000g.alternative answer:The graph shows the amount of fast food eaten between 1970 and 1990 in grams per person per week. Overall, the amount of fast food eaten more than doubled.

The amount of fish and chips eaten declined slightly. In 1970, the consumption was about 300g/week. This fell to 220g/week in 1990.

In contrast, sales of hamburger and pizza rocketed. In 1970, very little pizza was eaten - less than 50g/week. This rose to 280g/week by 1990. In the same period, hamburger sales shot up by more than 500%, from 100g/week in 1970 to 500 grams in 1990.

In conclusion, although there was a big increase in the consumption of pizza and hamburger, sales of fish and chips decreased.

Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #11Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. You should write at least 150 words. Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.model answer:The graph compares the rate of smoking in men and women in Someland between the years 1960 and 2000. It can be clearly seen that the rate of smoking for both men and women is currently declining and that fewer women have smoked throughout the period.

In 1960, 600 men in every 1,000 was smoking. This number decreased gradually to 500 by 1974 and continued to decrease but more steeply to 250 in 2000. In contrast, the rate of smoking in women in 1960 was very low at only 80 in every 1,000. By 1968 this increased to 170, and increased again but more steeply to 320 in 1977. The rate of female smokers then remained stable at 320 until 1984 at which point the figures began to decline and had dropped to 200 by 2000.

In conclusion we can see that the rate of smoking in men dropped throughout the whole period but was always at a higher level than the female figures. The rate of smoking in women increased until 1977 but then decreased for the rest of the period.

Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #5You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)

Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.You should write at least 150 words.

model answer:Anyone who has visited a dentist has been told that eating excessive amounts of sweets risks harming the teeth. This is because sweets lower pH levels in the mouth to dangerous levels.

When the pH level in the mouth is kept above 5.5, acidity is such that teeth are unlikely to be in danger of decay. Sweet foods, however, cause pH in the mouth to drop for a time, and the longer pH levels remain below 5.5, the greater the opportunity for decay to occur.

By comparing fruit sugar, cane sugar and honey, which are all common ingredients of sweet foods, we find that cane sugar lowers pH levels for the longest period, thus producing the greatest risk of the three. Approximately five minutes aftfter consuming cane sugar, pH levels drop to as little as pH 3.5. They then begin to rise slowly, but do not rise above pH 5.5 until at least 30 minutes have elapsed. By contrast, fruit sugar, which causes the mouth's acidity to fall to just above pH 4, poses a danger for a shorter period: tooth decay is unlikely 20 minutes after consumption. Honey appears an even less risky substance. Though acidity falls to about pH 4.75 within five minutes of consumption, it returns to above pH 5.5 in under fifteen minutes.

The implications, then, are that people who insist on eating sweet foods should be aware of the ingredients, and that fruit sugar or honey appear preferable to cane sugar.(242 words)

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