ielts essay corrected 2

3
IeltsWritingTask.net Hi Ben This is my essay. Can you help me to correct it, please? Dear Anna, I am really sorry to hear that you are disrupted by the noise from my flat. I was very shocked when I received your letter. I am attempting to repair the tap in the bathroom in the evenings. Because I come to my workplace all the days, thus, I just fix in when I come home. Although I try to repair the tap, however water sill leak out whatever the tap is locked. Unfortunately, this issue becomes more serious, the tap is broken unexpectedly. Therefore, I must close the water system in my flat, this result makes me disappointed . Since the water system is closed, and the problem is out of my control. I have decided to call a professional plumber who will repair and solve completely this issue in this weekend. I promise that the plumber will attempt to finish his work in daytime, and then you will not hear any annoyed noise again I hope you will accept my apologies. Thomas Hi ThiThi88 There are two copies, the first highlights lines where are errors are present. Red = error, Orange = OK but could be better. I would like you to have a look at the first copy, try and spot your errors first, this will help you in the exam. Then, finally have a look at the fully corrected essay. See you Ben Dear Anna, I am really sorry to hear that you are disrupted by the noise from my flat. I was very shocked when I received your letter. I am attempting to repair the tap in the bathroom in the evenings. Because I come to my workplace all the days, thus, I just fix in when I come home.  Although I try to repair the tap, however water sill leak out whatever the tap is locked. Unfortunately, this issue becomes more serious, (WHEN) the tap is broken unexpectedly. Therefore, I must close the water system in my flat, this result makes me disappointed. Since the water system is closed, and the problem is out of my control. I have decided to call a professional plumber who will repair and solve completely this issue in this weekend. I promise that the plumber will attempt to finish his work in daytime, and then you will not hear any annoyed noise again

Upload: benworthington

Post on 07-Apr-2018

228 views

Category:

Documents


0 download

TRANSCRIPT

8/6/2019 IELTS Essay corrected 2

http://slidepdf.com/reader/full/ielts-essay-corrected-2 1/3

8/6/2019 IELTS Essay corrected 2

http://slidepdf.com/reader/full/ielts-essay-corrected-2 3/3