how to write a good (math biology) paper
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How to write a good (math Biology) paper
Eric N. CytrynbaumUniversity of British Columbia
English Editing Service: EssayStar.com
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Guiding framework
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Guiding framework
¥Who will be interested in the results? What journal is appropriate? This sets the basic context for writing.
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Guiding framework
¥Who will be interested in the results? What journal is appropriate? This sets the basic context for writing.
¥Scan recent papers in that journal(s) to get a sense of style, format. Journals generally have a distinct culture.
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Guiding framework
¥Who will be interested in the results? What journal is appropriate? This sets the basic context for writing.
¥Scan recent papers in that journal(s) to get a sense of style, format. Journals generally have a distinct culture.
¥Here, IÕll assume youÕre writing for a broad (non-math, biological) audience.
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Some shoulds and should nots
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Some shoulds and should nots
A good paper should
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Some shoulds and should nots
A good paper should
¥read like a newspaper article, not a mystery novel,
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Some shoulds and should nots
A good paper should
¥read like a newspaper article, not a mystery novel,
¥be a guided journey through an idea, not a laundry list of loosely related thoughts,
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Some shoulds and should nots
A good paper should
¥read like a newspaper article, not a mystery novel,
¥be a guided journey through an idea, not a laundry list of loosely related thoughts,
¥ tell the story the way you wish you had discovered it, not the way you actually did.
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Building the paper
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ÒBottom line (single message) should be repeated (abstract, intro results, discussion). Everything else, say it once.Ó -- A. Mogilner
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ÒBottom line (single message) should be repeated (abstract, intro results, discussion). Everything else, say it once.Ó -- A. Mogilner
ÒUse signposting to help people Ôpeel the onionÕ Ð get as deep into the paper as they want, but no deeper. Technical sections should be prefaced by an explanation of what and who itÕs for, so itÕs easy for a reader to tell
if they should read it, skim it, or skip it for now.Ó -- S. Ellner
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Results (1)
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Model (2)
Results (1)
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Model (2)
Results (1)
Discussion (3)
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Intro (4)
Model (2)
Results (1)
Discussion (3)
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Abstract (5)
Intro (4)
Model (2)
Results (1)
Discussion (3)
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Title (6)
Abstract (5)
Intro (4)
Model (2)
Results (1)
Discussion (3)
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Title (6)
Abstract (5)
Intro (4)
Model (2)
Results (1)
Òcut, cut, cutÓ -- A. Mogilner
Discussion (3)
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The content
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The content¥ Results
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The content¥ Results
- The core of the paper. Experts will likely read this section only.
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The content¥ Results
- The core of the paper. Experts will likely read this section only.
- Figures and captions should tell much of the story. Lay these out Þrst. Build ßow of ideas around these. ÒChronologicalÓ or most-to-least important.
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The content¥ Results
- The core of the paper. Experts will likely read this section only.
- Figures and captions should tell much of the story. Lay these out Þrst. Build ßow of ideas around these. ÒChronologicalÓ or most-to-least important.
- Must be readable to a non-mathematician. If your results are biologically relevant, they should be communicable without heavy math.
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The content¥ Results
- The core of the paper. Experts will likely read this section only.
- Figures and captions should tell much of the story. Lay these out Þrst. Build ßow of ideas around these. ÒChronologicalÓ or most-to-least important.
- Must be readable to a non-mathematician. If your results are biologically relevant, they should be communicable without heavy math.
- ÒResultsÓ are unambiguous; no interpretation here except for logical transitions between sections.
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The content
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The content¥ Model
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The content¥ Model
- Describe in words Þrst, stating assumptions clearly, then equations but only the necessary ones.
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The content¥ Model
- Describe in words Þrst, stating assumptions clearly, then equations but only the necessary ones.
- Provide enough detail that results can be properly understood and reproduced.
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The content¥ Model
- Describe in words Þrst, stating assumptions clearly, then equations but only the necessary ones.
- Provide enough detail that results can be properly understood and reproduced.
- DonÕt cloud the issue with variants irrelevant to Results. Asides interesting to you are distracting to the reader.
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The content
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The content¥ Discussion
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The content¥ Discussion
- Short summary of results (answers to questions and your supporting evidence).
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The content¥ Discussion
- Short summary of results (answers to questions and your supporting evidence).
- Interpretation goes here - tell them what you think the results mean.
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The content¥ Discussion
- Short summary of results (answers to questions and your supporting evidence).
- Interpretation goes here - tell them what you think the results mean.
- Discuss impact of results (donÕt repeat results), point out remaining mysteries, highlight non-trivial predictions and broad impact.
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The content
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The content
¥ Introduction
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The content
¥ Introduction
- Review the relevant history (cite!!) building up to the big remaining unknowns (the topic of your work).
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The content
¥ Introduction
- Review the relevant history (cite!!) building up to the big remaining unknowns (the topic of your work).
Everest
K2 - your ÒresultsÓ
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The content
¥ Introduction
- Review the relevant history (cite!!) building up to the big remaining unknowns (the topic of your work).
Everest
K2 - your ÒresultsÓ
Intro
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The content
¥ Introduction
- Review the relevant history (cite!!) building up to the big remaining unknowns (the topic of your work).
- State what youÕve done - leave no mysteries. This section should make the structure of the paper transparent but not explicit (In section 2...).
Everest
K2 - your ÒresultsÓ
Intro
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The content
¥ Introduction
- Review the relevant history (cite!!) building up to the big remaining unknowns (the topic of your work).
- State what youÕve done - leave no mysteries. This section should make the structure of the paper transparent but not explicit (In section 2...).
Everest
K2 - your ÒresultsÓ
Intro
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But what about the cool math?
¥To a biology audience, the guts of the analysis are for the reviewers.
¥Equations necessary for the ßow of ideas can be included.
¥All else should be appendisized (if necessary to support Results), supplementalized (if helpful in understanding Results) or published elsewhere.
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The marketing
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The marketing¥ Title
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The marketing¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
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The marketing¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
- use easily parsed keywords,
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The marketing¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
- use easily parsed keywords,
- as Òbig pictureÓ as possible without overstating.
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The marketing
On the Origin of Species
¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
- use easily parsed keywords,
- as Òbig pictureÓ as possible without overstating.
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The marketing
On the Origin of Species
Selective survival of fitter genetic variants leads to gradual changes in populations
¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
- use easily parsed keywords,
- as Òbig pictureÓ as possible without overstating.
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The marketing
¥ Abstract
¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
- use easily parsed keywords,
- as Òbig pictureÓ as possible without overstating.
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The marketing
¥ Abstract
- whatÕs the question (1-2 sentences),
¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
- use easily parsed keywords,
- as Òbig pictureÓ as possible without overstating.
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The marketing
¥ Abstract
- whatÕs the question (1-2 sentences),
- whatÕs known already (1-2),
¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
- use easily parsed keywords,
- as Òbig pictureÓ as possible without overstating.
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The marketing
¥ Abstract
- whatÕs the question (1-2 sentences),
- whatÕs known already (1-2),
- what did you Þnd (2-4) - single message only!!
¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
- use easily parsed keywords,
- as Òbig pictureÓ as possible without overstating.
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The marketing
¥ Abstract
- whatÕs the question (1-2 sentences),
- whatÕs known already (1-2),
- what did you Þnd (2-4) - single message only!!
- whatÕs the broad impact (1)?
¥ Title
- be speciÞc,
- use easily parsed keywords,
- as Òbig pictureÓ as possible without overstating.
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Try it yourself
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Try it yourself
¥Pick a well-known idea and pretend youÕre writing the paper in which it Þrst appeared.
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Try it yourself
¥Pick a well-known idea and pretend youÕre writing the paper in which it Þrst appeared.
¥Choose a title and write an abstract (<250 words).
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Try it yourself
¥Pick a well-known idea and pretend youÕre writing the paper in which it Þrst appeared.
¥Choose a title and write an abstract (<250 words).
¥e.g. Safe and efÞcient ßow of trafÞc through the use of red, yellow and green lights.
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The point of this exercise - to write well you have to think about who and how your work will be read, not just what you want to say. Read papers to learn about form, not just about the science.
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Points raised in discussion(BIRS IGTC summit, Sept 20, 2008)
¥ Avoiding ÒIÓ - too much ÒIÓ sounds like a personal diary but using passive voice to avoid ÒIÓ is stilted and should be avoided.
¥ Explicit signposting - some like them, others not. They should not replace careful thinking about presentation.
¥ Referencing and acknowledgments - ideas are not a zero-sum game. Omitting these can be a serious issue.
¥ Use simple language.
¥ Authorship: (1) alphabetical - egalitarian but low information content, typical in pure math, (2) descending order of contribution, typical in applied math, (3) descending order of contribution from top, ascending PI contribution from the bottom up, typical in life science.
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References and Acknowledgments
¥ Alex Mogilner (personal exchanges)
¥ Simon Peyton Jones (web resource)
¥ Steve Ellner (web posting)
¥ Sand-Jensen, K. (2007). How to write consistently boring scientific literature. Oikos 116:723-727.
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Title: Hey, you, youÕre interested in reading this!
Abstract: This is why you really donÕt want to miss reading this. We found out really cool stuff.
Intro: If (and only if) you say it later, give background and set it up here.
Model: Ideas over equations. Those that donÕt like reading math should still be able to decipher your assumptions.
Results: Organize ÒchronologicallyÓ or most-to-least-important. No ßuff. Just the data.
Discussion: This is what we did. This is how it Þts in with everything else. This is what it all means. Fluff acceptable here.
Summary
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Title: Hey, you, youÕre interested in reading this!
Abstract: This is why you really donÕt want to miss reading this. We found out really cool stuff.
Intro: If (and only if) you say it later, give background and set it up here.
Model: Ideas over equations. Those that donÕt like reading math should still be able to decipher your assumptions.
Results: Organize ÒchronologicallyÓ or most-to-least-important. No ßuff. Just the data.
Discussion: This is what we did. This is how it Þts in with everything else. This is what it all means. Fluff acceptable here.
Summary
IÕm done.