how to fix a broken story
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What can you do when a story you are writing is not working? This slide share looks at things a writer can do to improve their story.TRANSCRIPT
How to Fix a Broken Story
Presented by© Jeni Mawter
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What is a story?
Story = what characters do
(action)
+ in a place (setting)
+ at some time (event).
What must a story have?
A character (s)
A plot
A broken story
How is this story broken? Think about …1) character2) opening3) action or plot4) ending
Characters can be people or animals. What story has a character like this?
Other Types of Characters Anthropomorphic
Mythological
Other Types of Characters Science Fiction
Fantasy
We have to care about characters Characters have human thoughts,
wants and feelings.What character don’t you care about?
Why?
Characters must want something
What might these characters want?
Characters go on a journeyCharacters change through the course
of the story. Does the character have to change?
Yes!
Change means:Emotional Psychological Physical Intellectual
Plot
Plot is the action of the story.
Things happen.
Things must go wrong.
Plot continued …What complications can arise?
Stories have beginnings, middles and endings
Beginnings must hook the reader.
Middles cannot be boring.
Endings cannot be predictable.
How can we fix character?
What does the
character
want the
most?
Character ProfileName:Age:Family: Friends: Personality:Likes and
dislikes: Fears:Secret:
How can we fix the opening?Start with action or a problem.
Unusual or interesting.
No clichés or expected openings.
Opening Sentence Hook your reader. Write an interesting opening sentence.
How can we fix the plot?What does the character want?What is stopping him/her from
getting it?
See ‘What if?’ in Activity Pack
How can we fix the ending?No clichés.
The ending must make sense with
the story.
Summary: To fix a broken storyCharacter - Care? - Want something?
Opening- Hook?- Start with action or problem?
Summary: To fix a broken storyPlot- Boring?- What stops the character?
Ending- Clichéd or predictable?- Not relevant to the story.
Questions
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