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How are Song Lyrics POETRY? The Killers ”When You Were Young” Refrain: when you were young… Theme? Diction: burning down the skyline, hurricane = destruction Conno/deno: burning down the skyline Gnarls Barkley CrazyAllusions: Inkblot Personality Tests Irony: I remember when I lost my mind Theme: Self Identity, What is crazy? Black Eyed Peas I Got a Feelin

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How are Song Lyrics POETRY?

The Killers – ”When You Were Young”

•Refrain: when you were young… Theme?

•Diction: burning down the skyline, hurricane =

destruction

•Conno/deno: burning down the skyline

Gnarls Barkley – ”Crazy”

•Allusions: Inkblot Personality Tests

•Irony: I remember when I lost my mind

•Theme: Self Identity, What is crazy?

Black Eyed Peas –”I Got a Feelin”

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How are Song Lyrics POETRY?

The Beatles – “Come Together”

•Level of Language: slang, he got, he just do, etc.

•Diction/Sound: nonsensical phrases, such as joo-joo eyeball,

monkey finger, Who is “he” in the storyline?

•Deno/Conno: Holy Roller

•Allusion: to Yoko Ono (John Lennon’s wife)

Gorillaz – “Feel Good Inc.”

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EseL_19Cqbc

•Sound Devices: hahaha, shake, shop

•Figurative Language: on a camel’s back, take it all in your stride

•Diction: ephemeral style, melancholy town

•Level of Language: they don’t know whack, they gotta kiss it ‘cause

I don’t get sleep

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1.ANNOTATE your lyrics.

2. Read Billy Collins’ poem,

“Introduction to Poetry,” and respond

to the questions at the bottom of the

page.

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Choose 3 Songs

with Substantial Lyrics, such as … “Summersong” - The Decemberists

“Crooked Teeth” - Death Cab for Cutie

“It’s All Understood” - Jack Johnson

“Belief” - John Mayer

“Seven Nation Army” - The White

Stripes

“Be Here to Love Me” - Norah Jones

“Twisted Logic” – Coldplay

“Speeding Cars” - Imogen Heap

“Teardrop” - Massive Attack

“Lazarus” - Porcupine Tree

“Glory Box” - Portishead

“Silhouettes” - Postal Service

“Black Dirt” - Sea Wolf

“I Sing I Swim” - Sea Bear

“Angel Dust” – Aaron

“Cystalised” - The XX

“This Ain’t A Scene, It’s An Arms Race”

- Fall Out Boy

“Fixing a Hole” – The Beatles

“Come Together” - The Beatles

“Run-Around” - Blues Traveler

“Fortunate Son” - CreedenceClearwater

“Crash Into Me” - Dave Matthews Band

“Bohemian Rhapsody” – Queen

“Kings and Queens” - Aerosmith

“Wires” - Athlete

“Falling Out of Trees” – Barcelona

“Silent Sea” - KT Tunstall

“Diamonds” - A Sides

“Everybody Loves a Loser” - Morcheeba

“Spring and By Summer Fall” - Blonde

Redhead

“Ocean Breathes Salty” - Modest Mouse

“Kidz with Guns” - Gorillaz

“Kill the Messenger” - Jack’s Mannequin

“Map of the Problematique” - Muse

“Chocolate” - Snow Patrol

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Poetry

“It is difficult

to get the news from poems

yet men die miserably every day

for lack

of what is found there.”

--William Carlos Williams

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DIRECTIONS: Look at the following four reasons to study poetry. These

are ways to begin to appreciate poetry. Put these notes (and example

lines or phrases from the accompanying poems) in your study guide, under

the title “What is Poetry?”

The Essential Questions (on the same page) are our goals for the poetry

unit.

Poetry is important,

beautiful,

silly,

sexy,

and sometimes

dangerous.

You can use it in your life!

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1. Pleasure One reason to study poetry is for

the pleasure of it. Poetry

intoxicates – it awakens and

appeals to the senses.

Emily Dickinson said:

“If I feel physically as if

the top of my head

were taken off,

I know

that this

is poetry.”

“Song of Smoke” Kevin Young

To watch you walk

cross the room in your black

corduroys is to see

civilization start –

the wish –

whish-whisk

of your strut is flint

striking rock – the spark

of a length of cord

rubbed till

smoke starts – you stir

me like coal

and for days smoulder.

I am no more

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a Boy Scout and, besides,

could never

put you out – you

keep me on

all day like an iron, out

of habit –

you threaten, brick –

house, to burn

all this down. You leave me

only a chimney.

1. Pleasure “BURN” DICTION: smoke, flint, spark, rubbed, stirred like coal, smoulder, iron, burn, chimney

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1. Pleasure

Sound devices are

pleasurable to hear and to

speak. Read sentences with

sound devices in them out

loud or mouth them to feel the

words…the poet intends it.

Get ready. Read clearly,

positively, and happily. Get

into the sounds; ham it up.

Hint: pause a little at the ends

of the lines and a little more

where there is white space

between groups of lines. How

does that effect the meaning

of the poem?

“The Word Plum” by Helen Chasin

the word plum is delicious

pout and push, luxury of

self-love, and savoring murmur

full in the mouth and falling

like fruit

taut skin

pierced, bitten, provoked into

juice, and tart flesh

question

and reply, lip and tongue

or pleasure

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2. Truth • Another reason to read poetry is

because it is in touch with the

world in a way no other art form

is.

• You can…

– learn the truth of people’s lives.

– Get in touch with your own self-

knowledge.

• When life is joyful, poetry is there

to say it.

• When life is beyond words, poetry

is there to say it. For example:

“Coal has entered their skin.

A fine black salt drifts

back into their meals.

Every day the mills are fed

tiny wafers of their flesh.”

- from “The Miners of Revloc,”

Ed Ochester

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2. Truth

Buffalo Bill’s defunct

who used to

ride a watersmooth-silver

stallion

and break onetwothreefourfive pigeonsjustlikethat

Jesus

he was a handsome man

and what I want to know is

how do you like your blueeyed boy

Mister Death

- e.e.cummings

• When life is joyful, poetry is there

to say it.

• When life is beyond words, poetry

is there to say it. For example:

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2. Truth

“Butcher’s Son” by Joe Heithaus

Nothing to do with blood. Nineteen,

I cut off my left pinky and he laughed, held

my bleeding hand over the chopping block

beside four sides of beef on hooks.

He’s a butcher today he must have thought, his own

missing pointer scratching his head. He smiled,

walked me to the sink, the light at the door

was gray, the cat pawed a kidney behind the screen.

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Looking into other people’s

lives this intimately can be

very hard. This bears the

stamp of experience. The

best poetry doesn’t turn away

from life but looks it straight

in the face. In “Butcher’s

Son” notice how the little

details carry a great deal of

weight:

• Amy stares down at her

dress

• The speaker stares at the

theater across the street

• The details hurt: the cat

pawing the kidney, the

cooler of meat

• Without it all being said

directly, you know what is

meant.

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I thought of all this at my wedding when he held up my hand after the mass – four fingers and stump, the gold ring, Amy staring down at her dress. It was ‘69, Vietnam, Nixon president , we drove away in a big black Electra and talked about my buddies overseas who couldn’t be there, his insistence we bring a cooler of steaks on the honeymoon. When I remember those days, I hate him. That fucking back room, the sawdust I’ve swept every day since I turned sixteen. Joey, help Mrs. Benson, sharpen this knife, and she’d whisper, What a sweet man your father is. I’d fake a smile, look out the window at the theatre across the street. We’re closed today, I’m putting my black suit back on, scrubbing the stains from my hands.

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3. Poetry Can Help You

It’s a possibility!

• Help you see your life more clearly

• Help you compare your outlook or experiences to others’

• Help comfort you.

– Solace.

– Kinship.

– People have formed communities, taken action, or decided to take part all based on what they have found in poems.

Mid-term Break by Seamus Heaney

I sat all morning in the college sick bay Counting bells knelling classes to a close, At two o'clock our neighbors drove me home. In the porch I met my father crying-- He had always taken funerals in his stride-- And Big Jim Evans saying it was a hard blow. The baby cooed and laughed and rocked the pram When I came in, and I was embarrassed By old men standing up to shake my hand And tell me they were "sorry for my trouble," Whispers informed strangers I was the eldest, Away at school, as my mother held my hand

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3. Poetry Can Help You

In hers and coughed out angry tearless sighs. At ten o'clock the ambulance arrived With the corpse, stanched and bandaged by the nurses. Next morning I went up into the room. Snowdrops And candles soothed the bedside; I saw him For the first time in six weeks. Paler now, Wearing a poppy bruise on the left temple, He lay in the four foot box as in a cot. No gaudy scars, the bumper knocked him clear. A four foot box, a foot for every year.

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3. Poetry Can Help You O CAPTAIN! my Captain! our fearful trip is done;

The ship has weather’d every rack, the prize we sought is won;

The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,

While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring:

But O heart! heart! heart!

O the bleeding drops of red,

Where on the deck my Captain lies,

Fallen cold and dead.

Walt Whitman wrote this poem

after the assassination of

Abraham Lincoln. He saw

America as a ship without a

Captain, a ship that doesn’t

know where to go.

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3. Poetry Can Help You

O Captain! my Captain! rise up and hear the bells; Rise up--for you the flag is flung--for you the bugle trills,

For you bouquets and ribboned wreaths--for you the shores a-crowding,

For you they call, the swaying mass, their eager faces turning; Here Captain! dear father!

This arm beneath your head! It is some dream that on the deck

You've fallen cold and dead.

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3. Poetry Can Help You

My Captain does not answer, his lips are pale and still, My father does not feel my arm, he has no pulse nor will.

The ship is anchored safe and sound, its voyage closed and done, From fearful trip the victor ship comes in with object won;

Exult O shores, and ring O bells! But I, with mournful tread,

Walk the deck my Captain lies, Fallen cold and dead.

Abraham Lincoln and son Tad Lincoln in Union uniform,

son of President Abraham Lincoln

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4. Poetry is a Way of Paying Attention

• A way of being involved.

• Of bridging your own hopes and designs with those of all humanity.

• Makes yours a fuller life.

• It gives you pleasure, truth, help, and a reason to speak.

“I am alive

and kick my heels at the stars.”

-Elizabeth Socolow

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4. A way of paying attention, of seeing your

own life more clearly

“Getting Through” by

Deborah Pope

Like a car stuck in gear,

a chicken too stupid to tell

its head is gone,

or sound ratcheting on

long after the film

has jumped the reel,

or a phone

ringing and ringing

in the house they have all

moved away from,

through rooms where dust

is a deepening skin,

and the locks unneeded,

so I go on loving you,

my heart blundering on,

a muscle spilling out

what is no longer wanted,

and my words hurtling past,

like a train off its track,

toward a boarded-up station,

closed for years,

like some last speaker

of a beautiful language

no one else can hear.

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4. Poetry is a Way of Paying Attention

From “On the Pulse of the Morning”

Maya Angelou, 1993

Bill Clinton’s Inauguration

…Lift up your eyes upon

The day breaking for you.

Give birth again

To the dream.

Women, children, men,

Take it into the palms of your hands.

Mold it into the shape of your most

Private need. Sculpt it into

The image of your most public self.

Lift up your hearts

Each new hour holds new chances

For new beginnings…

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Poetry Workout 1. Choose one of the poems from this tutorial. They

are laid out in the lab. Note: if you choose the shorter poems, you will work with all three of them. Directly on the poem sheet and the back of the sheet, interact with the poem in the following ways. Attach another sheet if necessary.

A. Annotate the poem, writing in the margin what you think is happening in the story of the poem, marking figurative phrases and what they mean, identifying key words, marking shifts in tone, explaining the importance of images or motifs. Ultimately what does the poem mean? What is the theme? How did the poet achieve it? And anything more.

B. Draw an image that illustrates an aspect of the poem or symbolizes something in the poem.

C. Then, write your personal responses to the poem. Write about why you like it, what words or images struck you, which of the four “reasons to study poetry” do you feel it represents.

2. BONUS: Take it home and share it with a parent, older relative, neighbor, co-worker, etc. Have them write their own reactions to the poem, right on the sheet or a separate one. Have them sign it. It will be interesting to see how their experience is the same or different from yours, so don’t tell them what to think about it.

3. Due tomorrow.