gamon - updated draft 2

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GAMON

Gary Hartmann

Written by

Gary Hartmann


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Actor List

(The following list is only a draft and will be changed and

updated along the way)

Leads

Gamon: abcdawgTrade Prince Donais: Rob McGirr

Old Man: TD

Wanderer: River Kanoff

Additional Characters

Orc Father: TD

Orc Child: TD

Orc Stone Guard: TD

Torturer: Rob McGirr

Oaf Minion: Anthony Benedict

Assassin 1: Rob McGirr
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Resume

An expedition crew discovers an ancient Tolvir tomb containing amysterious coffer. Their ship is attacked midway and the coffer

sinks with the crew. Sixty years later the coffer washes onto the

shores of Kezan and into the hands of a young goblin Trade Prince

named Donais. After many unsuccessful attempts at opening the

spell-bound coffer he sends out a group of assassins to find the

missing key. Meanwhile on the shores of the Barrens, Tazan, a

primitive troll, catches the key whilst out fishing. Being

overwhelmed by his discovery he immediately declares himself king

of the barrens and spreads the rumour of his wealth far and wide.

Donais men quickly track down Tazan and in a haze of panic he

gives the key to an old Archaeologist passing by. The old man

unknowingly returns to Orgrimmar and is crossing The Drag when

jumped by Donais men. The robbery is interrupted by Gamon, a

simple Tauren worker on his way home. The assassins are fought

off, but the old man is fatally injured. The key is passed onto

Gamon.

The next day Donais men go after Gamon and torture him for

hours. Gamon is a proud Tauren and doesnt give in to the pain. An

Orgrimmar Grunt interrupts Donais torturer and drags him off tojail, - as he is hauled away he says: You might have gotten me,

but not the man who was sent to your house. Gamon finds his

family murdered and the grief sends him into a spiral of agony and

alcohol.

Twenty years later Gamon is nothing but the city drunk, a mere

punching bag. A lost soul without a path and the citizens of

Orgrimmar despise him. Under the usual haze of alcohol he one

night takes it too far when he flirts with a Stone Guards wife. As

he falls to the ground from taking a punch, he receives a vision

of a black stag standing in a field of giants. He wakes up the

next day and stumbles home. As he reaches his front door, he hears

the familiar voice of one of Donais men. As he turns to face him,

an oaf knocks him out from behind. He wakes up in a cell on the

lost isles being held captive by Donais. After continues hours of

failed attempts to force the location of the key out of Gamon he

is brought to Donais himself who tries to make a deal with him.

Gamon tells him that Donais took away everything he ever cared for

and that nothing he could do would make him reveal the location of

the key. Annoyed and stubborn Donais throws Gamon back to his cell


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where Gamon immediately passes out. While passed out Gamon once

again sees the black stag and when he wakes up, a mysterious man

is sitting in his cell telling him that he travelled there from

the dark realm to end Gamons pain. Gamon thinks hes there to

kill him and wants to know what they key unlocks since it was

worth killing his family for. The mysterious man tells him the

story of how the coffer ended up in Donais possession. He

explains Gamon how he cant let Donais ever find the key. The

contents of the coffer are too strong for any mortal to control

and releasing it would cause Azeroths demise. Before the

mysterious man disappears he leaves a glowing axe on the floor of

the prison cell telling Gamon its the axe of Ogoun, the Loa of

war. Touching it heals Gamon and gives him incredible renewed

strength. He makes his way to Donais Room, fights off his men(First stealthy, then brutally) and ends up standing in front of

Donais who has tried to cowardly sneak away. Im not going to

kill you Gamon says while walking slowly away. Aha! I knew you

were a reasonable business man! Donais says relieved Now, about

that trade! he continues while walking towards his desk(?).

Nothing I could ever do, would be punishment enough for what

youve done Gamon says in a dark voice. I, uh.. Waa? Donais

mumbles. Himon other hand, I think would do a sufficient job he

says breaking the chains Donais oaf guard. As Donais walks away

you can see the shadow of the oaf ripping Donais apart.

Scene fades in with Gamon sitting in an inn (Game of Thrones

style) as the camera slowly pans away.

The voice of the mysterious man says Gamon, you have found your

path. You hold the weapon of a god and you must use it to defend

your home. No one shall feel the pain you have suffered

(Still working on ending)


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0: Cinematic intro of Orgrimmar with head titles.

1: A tauren is sitting in an inn with his head tilted downwards, -

title: GAMON

2: Gamon walks down the street; a boy asks his father

"Father, whats wrong with that tauren? why does he look

like that?"

Orc father shushes him Be quiet son!

Orc Child: I dont understand, whatswrong with him?

Orc Father: Hes a no, good, drunk.

3: Gamon is drinking in front of an inn and starts hitting on

girls walking by.

Gamon: "Hey. You work out gorgeous?"

Gamon: Hey lady! If I told you, you have a beautiful

body, would you hold it against me?

An Orc Stone Guard stops up and says "What did you say to

my wife, peasant?!" Gamon mumbles and looks down "STAND

UP!" the Stone Guard yells.

Gamon stands up "I said, would you repeat that youpathetic, worthless drunk?!" the Stone Guard says. Gamon

says: How about I repeat this! and takes a swing at the

man but misses. He gets knocked out by the stone guard.

As he falls to the ground he sees a vision of a black stag with

green eyes standing in a dark field. Fade out.

4: Fade in: Flashback where Gamon intercepts thieves

trying to rob old man and fights them off, Gamon: Hey! Shouldnt

you be hitting on someone your own age? - the old man dies and

the key is passed on to gamon.

Old man: I thank you kind stranger... Although I'm afraid your

trouble was wasted- "The .. key..". Gamon returns to his home

(and family) hides the key and goes to bed.

Gamon goes to work the next morning as a common miner(?) - On the

way home he is knocked unconscious. He wakes up sitting in a

chair, facing an unknown man with glasses.

(Unknown location, close to home) The man interrogates

Gamon with torture;


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Torturer: What did you do with the key?Gamon doesnt

answer What.. Did you do .. With the key!? he says

annoyed - In the confusion Gamon doesn't remember the

Key.

The torture is interrupted by an Orgrimmar Grunt/guard.

Guard: Hey, you there! Youre not allowed in Orgrimmar!

The torturer is captured and says: "You might have gotten

me... but not the man that was sent to your house..."

Gamon realizes that his wife and daughter (baby) is still at home

Gamon: "By the earth mother, no!! - He runs home, - he

enters to find his wife and daughter slaughtered on the

floor.

As he discovers this, flashes of the actual murder appears on the

screen for dramatic effect. He falls to his knees and starts

crying/screaming. It flashes away and receives another sight of

the 'spirit world - giants walking across the field' the sound of

his cries echoes throughout the dark fields.

5: He wakes up the sound of a rooster the next morning, birds

peeping, sun glaring. He 'grumbles' and starts walking home.

As he walks up to his front door you hear the voice of

one of the assassins who mugged the old man "Oi, old

man!" - Gamon turns to face the assassin; - an oaf behind

him knocks him out.

6: He wakes up in a cell on the lost isles; - he has been

kidnapped by Trade prince Donais. The glasses of the

torturer glares in the dark "Remember me?" he says.

Gamons sight returns (starts out dark and blurry). The

torturer walks towards him with a burning spike in hishand. "This one is for 20 years in hell" - zoom from

outside the cell while screams continue.

7: Gamon gets dragged to the Trade Prince by two brutes (of

unknown origin)

8: As he is forced into a chair, music starts playing and

footsteps are heard. Donais walks in the room, slowly and turns to

Gamon.


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Donais: "You have proven to be quite a thorn in my side"

he says. Gamon looks up. "And yet, you still have

something that I need...he continues.

Gamon yells: "I will break you for what you did!"

Donais: "Hey, hey, hey, let's not forgot who messed with

who here!" - "You took something I held dear and I took

something... you held dear, - its only fair!"

Gamon snarls, dangerous sound with a face of fury.

Donais: "Now, how about you just hand over the key andyou'll be out of here in no time! Hmm? (Like a

questioning sound)"

Gamon: "You took away the only thing I ever cared for...

You will never have your key"

Donais: "Come on, we're both reasonable businessmen here!

How about a trade? What do you want the most in the

whole, wide world?"

Gamon: "Your head... rotting on a spike"

Donais: "Okay, there's really no way to reach you is

there? ...Fine" He turns to the oaf behind him "Take him

back to his cell you big lump of meat, - chop chop!" the

oaf growls annoyed.

As donais walks out of the room he says: "I didnt steal

you from your smelly mother for you to turn out so lazy!

- The oaf walks towards Gamon and the scene fades out.

9: Dream scene with dark elk a little closer, flock of crows flies

in the background, abstract music and giants in the background

suddenly turns towards the camera. Whisper: "Wake up"

10: Gamon wakes up and sees a mysterious "man" sitting in

the corner of his cell. Gamon says "you can hurt me all

you like, Imnot going to give you scum anything..."


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"I'm not here to hurt you" the man responds. Gamons sight

becomes clear and he asks, "Then why are you here?" -

"Your sorrow echoed throughout the entire dark realm...

I'm here to relieve you of your pain"

"I'm not ready to die... not yet" gamon responds. "You're

not going to die at this time, nor in this place" says

the man. "What does the key unlock?" Gamon asks, nearly

about to pass out from dehydration and pain.

11: Flashback of villain plot:

"A hundred years ago an Argent Dawn expedition stumbled

upon an ancient Tol'vir tomb. While the crew was

spellbound by the gold and artifacts the captain

discovered something much more valuable.

Knowing the potential threat of the contents, the captain

smuggled the coffer on board their ship unseen in order

to avoid risking the lives of himself and his crew.

Despite his efforts, the ship barely made it half way

across the great sea before it drew unwanted attention

from the depths below. The crew sunk alongside the cargo.

Sixty years later the coffer drifts ashore on the isle of

Kezan and is discovered by a young Trade Prince named

Donais.

Being a trade prince, Donais had of course heard tales of

a coffer like this. Nights upon nights he attempted to

break open the coffer, but the lock was bound by powerful

magic. Greedy and obsessed as he had become, he ordered

his puppets to track down any known leads concerning a

key of tol'virean origin. Meanwhile on the shores of the

barrens a troll named Tazan had caught something rather

unusual during his daily fishing routine. Ecstatic from

finding such a shiny piece of metal He immediately

claimed himself king of the barrens, - spreading the

rumour of his wealth far and wide.


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Having connections all over Azeroth it only took a few

weeks for the word to reach Donais who immediately

requested Tazan killed and the key retrieved.

After several close encounters with Donais assassins,Tazan realized the key was dangerous to be around but he

wasn't willing to let go of his reputation. An old

archaeologist from Orgrimmar was passing by and Tazan saw

his chance. He promised the old man riches beyond his

dreams if he agreed to bring his key back to Orgrimmar

and hold on to it until he came to retrieve it. Being a

struggeling archaeologist the old man agreed and took it

with him. It didn't take long for Donais' torturer to get

Tazan to reveal the location of the key andthats where

YOU came into the story, Gamon"

12: Flashback ends. Gamon is now sitting up, still covered in

blood, still weak.

Gamon: "My family died... because of a treasure?" he

asks. The man answers Not just a treasure Gamon. The

coffer contains powers uncontrollable by any mortal

being. Releasing it would cause the demise of Azeroth as

we know it, including millions of families just like your

own.

Gamon: There is nothing I can do Im old, weak

pathetic

The man backs away and an axe appears in front of him.

This is the axe of Ogoun, - the Loa of War. With this,

you will have a chance he says and disappears.

Gamon stands up, shaking as he walks towards the axe. As he

touches the handle his wounds are healed. He feels the wrath ofOgoun inside him and pulls it out of the ground.

13: Gamon fights off guards and makes his way to the room he had

been questioned in. It is filled with Donais goons. Gamon

whistles whistle-soundto lure a beast (hound perhaps) to his

location around a corner, - the sound of the beast dying attracts

two additional guards who as they run around the corner (from

Donais point of view) comes flying across the room as a result of

powerful kicks from Gamon. This alerts the rest of the room and


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Gamon fights each mob without too much of a hassle. Left Is only

the torturer, Donais and his oaf guard standing in chains.

Donais yells: Kill him! Kill him now!The Torturer makes the first attack that actually hits

and damages Gamon, - he is thrown back (Magic damage,

perhaps? Fire) but gets back on his feet, spits out

blood. The torturer says: Ha! Bring it! I do this on a

daily basis! - As Gamon and the torturer is fighting,

Donais can be seen trying to sneak away in the

background. Gamon gets up and close to the torturer,

picks him up and says The only difference is, - your

subject cant normally fight back! and throws him onto

something sharp (chandelier? Beast head on the wall?) and

makes a leap alike warriors heroic leap to block Donais

way out. Donais backs up shocked and scared, turns to his

oaf guard and yells Protect me you blundering imbecile!

I am your master, I own you! I command you to kill him!!

(With a trembling, desperate voice).

Im not going to kill you Gamon says while walking

slowly away. Aha! I knew you were a reasonable business

man! Donais says relieved Now, about that trade! hecontinues while walking towards his desk(?).Nothing I

could ever do,would be punishment enough for what youve

done Gamon says in a dark voice. I, uh..Waa? Donais

mumbles. Him on other hand, I think would do a

sufficient job he says breaking the chains Donais oaf

guard. As Gamon walks away you can see the shadow of the

oaf ripping Donais apart. SCENE FADES OUT

Scene fades in with Gamon sitting in an inn (Game of Thronesstyle) as the camera slowly pans away.

The voice of the mysterious man says slowly, narrative Gamon, you

have found your path. You hold the weapon of a god and you must

use it to defend your home. No one shall feel the pain you have

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Individual Lines

Gamon: abcdawg

heavily intoxicated tries to hit on girls walking byHey! You

work out gorgeous?

heavily intoxicatedHey lady! If I told you, you have a beautiful

body, would you hold it against me?

heavily intoxicated How about I repeat this!?as he throws a

punch.

AnnoyedHey! Shouldnt you be hitting on someone your own age?

Confusedhuh?

ConfusedI.. uh, I dont what youre talking about

Startled, panicked"By the earth mother, no!!

*Crying sounds*as he finds his family dead

Broken, destroyed he screamsAAAARGGGGHHH!! (One long scream)

While being tortured*screams of pain* (several medium screams)

yells"I will break you for what you did!"

snarls, growl with mouth closed*dangerous sound*

Rough "You took away the only thing I ever cared for... You will

never have your key"

Resentful Your head... rotting on a spike

Weak, tired, exhausted"you can hurtme all you like, Im not

going to give you scum anything..."
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Weak, tired, exhaustedThen why are you here?

Weak, tired, exhausted"I'm not ready to die... not yet"

Weak, tired, exhausted"What does the key unlock?"

Weak, resentful"My family died... because of a treasure?"

Weak, giving upThere is nothing I can do Im old, weak

pathetic

Being infused with mighty power*HNNGGGG* (2-3 seconds)

Gamon whistles whistle-sound

Gamon fights off Donais villainsUgh! Ah! Huargh! (5-8 Fighting

sounds, throwing punches, getting hit etc.)

Picks up torturerThe only difference is, - your subjects cant

normally fight back!

CalmlyIm not going to kill you

Calmly, resentfulNothing I could ever do, would be punishment

enough for what youve done

Calmly, resentful Himon other hand, I think would do a

sufficient job

Trade Prince Donais: Rob McGirr

Calmly, sinister, dark tone "You have proven to be quite a thorn

in my side"

Calmly, sinister"And yet, you still have something that I

need...

Sinister"Hey, hey, hey, let's not forgot who messed with who

here!"

Sinister, smug"You took something I held dear and I took

something... you held dear, - its only fair!"


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Tries to reason with Gamon "Now, how about you just hand over the

key and you'll be out of here in no time! Hmm? (Like a questioning

sound)"

"Come on, we're both reasonable businessmen here! How about a

trade? What do you want the most in the whole, wide world?"

Annoyed"Okay, there's really no way to reach you is there?

...Fine"

Degrading"Take him back to his cell you big lump of meat, - chop

chop!"

Degrading"I didnt steal you fromyour smelly mother for you to

turn out so lazy!

Panicked, adrenaline-infusedKill him! Kill him now!

Desperate, degrading talking to his oafProtect me you blundering

imbecile! I am your master, I own you! I command you to kill

him!!

Relieved, still startledAha! I knew you were a reasonablebusiness man!

Now, about that trade!

ConfusedI, uh.. Waa?

Realizing hes about to be ripped apart, panicking, desperate

huh? Wh-what are you doing you moron?! Let me down!! I command

you to let,me, go!! NOO!


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Wanderer: ---

Whisper"Wake up"

Friendly, slow, deep"I'm not here to hurt you"

Friendly, slow, deep "Your sorrow echoed throughout my entire home

world I'm here to relieve you of your pain"

Friendly, slow, deep"You're not going to die at this time, nor inthis place"

Friendly, slow, deep "A hundred years ago an Argent Dawn

expedition stumbled upon an ancient Tol'vir tomb. While the crew

was spellbound by the gold and artifacts the captain discovered

something much more valuable.

Knowing the potential threat of the contents, the captain smuggled

the coffer on board their ship unseen in order to avoid risking

the lives of himself and his crew. Despite his efforts, the ship

barely made it half way across the great sea before it drew

unwanted attention from the depths below. The crew sunk alongside

the cargo. Sixty years later the coffer drifts ashore on the isle

of Kezan and is discovered by a young Trade Prince named Donais.

Being a trade prince, Donais had of course heard tales of a coffer

like this. Nights upon nights he attempted to break open the

coffer, but the lock was bound by powerful magic. Greedy and

obsessed as he had become, he ordered his puppets to track down

any known leads concerning a key of tol'virean origin. Meanwhileon the shores of the barrens a troll named Tazan had caught

something rather unusual during his daily fishing routine.

Ecstatic from finding such a shiny piece of metal He immediately

claimed himself king of the barrens, - spreading the rumour of his

wealth far and wide.

Having connections all over Azeroth it only took a few weeks for

the word to reach Donais who immediately requested Tazan killed

and the key retrieved.


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After several close encounters with Donais assassins, Tazan

realized the key was dangerous to be around but he wasn't willing

to let go of his reputation. An old archaeologist from Orgrimmar

was passing by and Tazan saw his chance. He promised the old man

riches beyond his dreams if he agreed to bring his key back to

Orgrimmar and hold on to it until he came to retrieve it. Being a

struggeling archaeologist the old man agreed and took it with him.

It didn't take long for Donais' torturer to get Tazan to reveal

the location of the keyand thats where YOU came into the story,

Gamon"

Serious, slow, deep Not just a treasure Gamon. The coffer

contains powers uncontrollable by any mortal being. Releasing it

would cause the demise of Azeroth as we know it, including

millions of families just like your own.

Slow, deep, seriousThis is the axe of Ogoun, (small pause)- the

Loa of War. With this (small pause) you will have a chance

Slow, deep, seriousGamon, you have found your path. You hold the

weapon of a god and you must use it to defend your home. No one

shall feel the pain you have suffered

Old Man: TD

Confused, startled, scaredOh! You startled me!

Yells, being attackedHelp! Leave me alone!-- Im not looking

for trouble!

Whispering, near deathI thank you kind stranger... Although I'm

afraid your trouble was wasted

Whispering, with last dying breath "The .. key.."

Orc Father: TD

Shh! Being quiet son!


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Slow, resentfulHes a no gooddrunk

Orc Child: TD or Geist Darkseed

Questioning, trying to understand the broken, drunk Gamon"Father,

whats wrong with that tauren? why does he look like that?"

I dont understand----whats wrong with him?

Orc Stone Guard: TD

Annoyed, deep, pissed off"What did you say to my wife, peasant?!"

"STAND UP!"

"I said, would you repeat that you pathetic, worthless drunk!?"

Hey! Whats going on over there!?

Youre coming with me!

Torturer: Rob McGirr

Calmly, intimidatingWhat did you do with the key?

Breaking character, intimidatingWhat.. Did you do .. With the

key!?

Fighting soundsUgh, huah, hng etc. etc. (about 10 of these)

Exhausted from fighting, smug, sinister "You might have gotten

me... but not the man that was sent to your house..."

Vengeful, sinister"Remember me?"

Vengeful, sinister"This one is for 20 years in hell

Smug, sinisterHa! Bring it! I do this on a daily basis!


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Sound of him dying, impaled on something sharpUGH!

Assassin 1: Rob McGirr

Sinister, as if about to ask a questionExcuse me...

Sinister,while walking intimidating towards old manThat REALLY

wasnt my intention

Sinister, English accentHow about someoneyour own size?

Sinister, English accent, cockyOi, old man!

Bonus Role 1: Troll Tradesman(if youre interested in this small bonus role, send us a

message!)

Yelling as if advertising his products on the street of orgrimmar.

Jamaican dialect Cheapest and best quality Trinkets In all of

Kalimdor!

Nonsense mon! You couldnt sell the eye of Onyxia if you had the

chance!

Bonus Role 2: Orc Tradesman(if youre interested in this small bonus role, send us a

message!)

In response to the troll tradesman, also advertising. Orc voice,

deepYou must be crazy! The best prices in Orgrimmar? Right here

baby!

Oaf Minion: Unknown Actor.

Sheyra: No Actor


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