from a child's point of view
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Julie Lauritzen Book 2TRANSCRIPT
The following section presents life through the eyes of
a child
The protagonist is a young boy
Innocence and inexperience go hand in hand
Curiosity dictates action
Familiarity tickling my senses
The taste of the air, sharp
Everything unchanged
I remember the others, smiling
Running off as I hear their voices
Excitement rushing
Breathing fast, I find them sitting together
Breath stops
She smiles, stands up, embraces me
Breathing resumed, death postponed
He bumps my fist, nodding
Calm like turbulence, I say Hi
Fear abating as they answer nonchalantly
Oblivious to my presumption
Our story is resumed
They came from nowhere
They came from everywhere
Attacking us without mercy
We already lost two men
Shoulder to shoulder
Holding the fort that we built with our own hands and
tools
A sudden overwhelming silence
I sense great danger
I yell out over to Tom
Explaining how our last man just got dragged over the
wall
What a huge creature it must have been
I feel fear creeping in
Vindictive as ever, Tom yells out as he charges the wall
My fear dissipates
On the double, I am running
We flow through the field like shadows entwined
A mad grin on his face
I find it very contagious
We laugh out loud, grimly
Like wild beings
I wish to speak
Enticed by her air
Drawn in
Yet unmoving
Caught looking, warmth explodes
Judgment expected, smile received
Her eyes lingering
A soft laugh
Skin on skin, different from before
Drawn in, moved at last
Her breath, warm
Another soft laugh, another smile
Gaze everlasting
She embraces me
Serenity
I wonder
How someone gathered all this fire-
wood
It must have taken years
Stacked so high
I can’t even climb to the top!
Do you think it will last forever?
Probably
The forest is alive, breathing
Thick with hidden treasures
Sunlight steals through
Footsteps crunching
Giants in the world of ants
A thundering earthquake as we
run
Magic booming all around
Somewhere close, somewhere near
I rip it loose, our trophy
Our journey continues
Deeper into the forest
Ever full of riches
For those who can see
Our quest takes us far and wide
Our eyes see wastelands
Our minds perceive mountains, rivers of
lava
Our hearts beat fast, our breaths drawn
short
Our bodies itching with excitement
Touch it and you die
No question about it, a fact
We share a look, the three of us
A challenge then
We run, we jump
We scream as exhilaration consumes us
Never before have I seen something so grand
A village for us to explore
Culmination of excitement
A playground surrounded by a wall of
wilderness
Free of judgment and
Weight of external expectations
Freedom to revel in the world we create
This is the climax
Our journey fulfilled