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Page 1: Foucault essay feedback

Assign 3: Foucault Essay

Teacher feedback

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Grades

• Lowest: U• Highest: C3/C2

• Average: D3

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Teacher comments/targets• A lot of people didn’t give context for the prison• Most didn’t give context for the texts the chose • Give specific examples from chosen texts• Catfish, I’m a celeb, big brother, social media sites common and good

choices – can you think of others?• Not 1 person explained how their texts were postmodern (pomo

features – intertexutuality, hybridity, etc)• More comparisons (similarities & differences) between texts • Try to relate to audience theory (audience

reaction/dependency/control etc – then relate this to audience theory (mccail, effects, reception etc)

• More effort in quantity of writing – should be at least 2 full pages minimum!

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Model essay 1

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Model essay 1

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Model 1 marks?

• EAA = ___• EG = ___• T = ___

• TOTAL SUBGRADE: _____

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Model essay 1

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Model essay 2

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Model 1 marks?

• EAA = ___• EG = ___• T = ___

• TOTAL SUBGRADE: _____

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Model essay 2