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Video reference Duration (seconds)

Shot Type Good/Bad Comment

DSC_0834.MOV 0.1 Close up Bad We was playing with the settings on the

camera and we accidently pressed

recordDSC_0835.MOV 0.17 Close up Bad The shot was not

focused, as we were too close to the subject.

DSC_0836.MOV 0.6 Medium close up

Bad The actress was covered up too much by the blanket


Bad The actresses face was covered by the blanket

DSC_0838.MOV 0.8 Close up Good The clip had a good composition and was focused. However we did not use this clip as we had a similar clip which flowed better

DSC_0839.MOV 0.10 Close up Bad The actress was out of focus and she moved out of the composition.

DSC_0840MOV 0.9 Close up Good The actress was in focus and the composition worked well however we did not use this clip as we felt that it would not be needed as nothing happened and it didn’t show what we wanted it to show

DSC_0841.MOV 0.13 Close up Bad The actress looks like she is smiling therefore this does not fit in with the genre of the film

DSC_0842.MOV 0.11 Close up Bad As the actress moves she becomes out of focus

DSC_0843.MOV 0.6 Medium Bad As the actress moves the blanket the shot becomes blurred and also the fact that you can see more of her, this draws the attention away from her face.

DSC_0844.MOV 0.4 Medium Good The composition is good and it is focused however the fact that you can see more of her, this draws the audiences attention away from her face.

DSC_0845.MOV 0.9 Medium Bad There is a flicker of light during the shot which we felt ruined the atmosphere we was trying to create

DSC_0846.MOV 0.11 Close up Bad The actresses hair covers her face as she moves

DSC_08347.MOV

0.11 Extreme close up

Bad Due to the shot being an extreme close up, the shot was too dark and also appears fuzzy.

DSC_0848.MOV 0.9 Extreme close up

Bad As the actress moves her hair covers her face and also the shot this blurry and too dark

DSC_0849.MOV 0.9 Zoom out Bad At the beginning of the shot, it is out of focus as we were so close to the actress. Also the zoom does not run smoothly and at the end of the clip the actress comes out of character.

DSC_0850.MOV 0.6 Zoom out Bad At the beginning of the shot, it is out of focus as we were so close to the actress. Also the zoom does not run smoothly

DSC_0851.MOV 0.3 Zoom out Bad The beginning of the shot is out of focus and the zoom out is too fast

DSC_0852.MOV 0.2 Zoom out Bad The shot was stopped to quickly therefore the whole zoom out was not recorded.


Good The shot is focused as clear and the lighting is much better than other clips previously. We used this shot first as we felt that it would fit

well when starting the opening and it also successfully showed what we wanted it to show.


Good The shot was in focus and the lighting was good. The composition of the shot was, as we wanted it. Also as the actresses moves she stays within the composition therefore it was able to flow into the next shot.


Good The shot was in focus and the lighting was good. The composition of the shot was, as we wanted it. This shot was able to flow directly from the previous shot, which is what we wanted to keep continuity within our opening to avoid it looking like a trailer.

DSC_0856.MOV 0.8 Medium Bad Although the shot was in focus, as the actress moves, everything else in the shot such as the pillows moves out of position.

DSC_0857.MOV 0.9 Medium Bad As the actress moves over towards the camera, she becomes out of the composition

DSC_0858.MOV 0.12 Medium Bad We felt that the actress moved too much and it didn’t look realistic as she was meant to be sleeping.

DSC_0859.MOV 0.10 Medium Long shot

Bad Someone in our group can be seen in the mirror during the clip

DSC_0860.MOV 0.17 Medium long shot

Bad Someone in our group can be seen in the mirror during the clip

DSC_0861.MOV 0.12 Medium Bad Someone in our group

can be seen in the mirror during the clip

DSC_0862.MOV 0.18 Medium Good The composition works well with this shot and it is in focus. The actress starts to become distressed in this clip, which is what we wanted. It also flows well into the next clip we want to use

DSC_0863.MOV 0.6 Medium Bad Someone in our group can be seen in the mirror at then end of the clip

DSC_0864.MOV 0.7 Medium Good The composition works well with this shot and it is in focus. The shot flows well with the shots, which would be before and after this, which will keep continuity within the opening.

DSC_0865.MOV 0.10 Medium Bad As a group we decided that we didn’t like the angle at which the show had been taken and also it was different from all the shot therefore this would not flow.

DSC_0866.MOV 0.10 Medium Bad As a group we decided that we didn’t like the angle at which the show had been taken and also it was different from all the shot therefore this would not flow.

DSC_0867.MOV 0.4 Medium Good We liked the composition of this shot and we thought that it would flow well with the next shot

DSC_0868.MOV 0.5 Medium Bad In this shot the actress struggles to open the book.

DSC_0869.MOV 0.4 Medium Bad The shot was out of focus and we didn’t feel it would add a positive

effect to our opening.DSC_0870.MOV 0.10 Medium Bad This shot was out of

focus and also we felt that it was not necessary to see the whole of the actress and the book was more important at this stage in the clip.

DSC_0871.MOV 0.10 Medium Bad This shot was out of focus and also we felt that it was not necessary to see the whole of the actress and the book was more important at this stage in the clip.

DSC_0872.MOV 0.9 Close up Good We thought that the composition of this clip was good and we liked the way the shot look as the camera was in line with the book. This we thought made the book the main subject opposed to the actress.

DSC_0873.MOV 0.11 Close up Bad This shot was out of focus

DSC_0874.MOV 0.11 Close up Bad This shot was out of focus

DSC_0876.MOV 0.5 Extreme close up

Good This shot easily established the actress drawing the question mark therefore the audience can understand what is going on

DSC_912.MOV 0.5 Establishing shot

Good This shot clearly established where the opening was going to be set and the lighting and composition worked well.

DSC_913.MOV 0.5 Establishing shot and zoom in

Bad The zoom didn’t go as planned as it was not smooth and as it got closer to the window we was zooming into, the shot become un-

sharp.DSC_914.MOV 0.5 Establishing

shot and zoom in

Bad The zoom didn’t go as planned as it was not smooth and as it got closer to the window we was zooming into, the shot become un-Sharp.

DSC_915.MOV 0.6 Establishing shot

Bad You can see a motor bike on the neighbors drive

DSC_916.MOV 0.3 Zoom in Bad The zoom does not run smoothly and it becomes blurring the more zoomed in it was.

DSC_917.MOV 0.4 Zoom in Bad The zoom does not run smoothly and it becomes blurring the more zoomed in it was.

DSC_918.MOV 0.3 Zoom in Bad The camera doesn’t zoom into where we wanted it to and also at the beginning of the clip the bottom part of the house is not in the composition.

DSC_919.MOV 0.6 Zoom in Bad The camera doesn’t zoom into where we wanted it.

DSC_920.MOV 0.30 Dolly Bad One of our group members was in the shot towards the end

DSC_921.MOV 0.18 Dolly Bad One of our group members was in the shot towards the end

DSC_922.MOV 0.10 Dolly Bad The shot does not run smoothly and also at the end, the actress comes out of character.

DSC_923.MOV 0.12 Dolly Good This dolly shot ran smoothly and the composition was good. We liked the low angle that was used in this shot.

DSC_925.MOV 0.12 Dolly Bad We had the dolly at a high angle however we thought that it didn’t work as you could see

too much of the room which would have taken the audiences attention away from the actress. Also it did not run smoothly.

DSC_0878.MOV 0.19 Extreme long shot

Good The composition od good and both of the characters are easily established as they can both be seen

DSC_0878.MOV 0.33 Long shot Good With this shot we was able to use different section of it to show the girls on the swing and also it has a good composition.

DSC_0878.MOV 0.14 Long shot Good This shot has a good composition and we liked the way the two girls were laughing as it adds to the atmosphere than we wanted to create.


Bad In this shot, the girls costumes are blowing everywhere due to the wind and also they was laughing through some of it.

DSC_0885.MOV 0.9 Medium shot

Bad In this shot, the actress is out of character at the beginning

DSC_0886.MOV 0.14 Medium close-up

Good This shot is in focus and it clearly show the girls on the swing

DSC_0887.MOV 0.15 Tilt Bad Due to it being so windy, the swing goes out of the composition.

DSC_0888.MOV 0.13 Tilt Bad The actresses dress is blowing everywhere


Good This shot is in focus and it clearly show the girl on the sing, we especially liked her facial expressions

DSC_0890.MOV 0.11 Tilt Bad This shot didn’t work as it was too windy and you could see her dress

going everywhere.DSC_0891.MOV 0.6 Medium

close upBad The actress comes out

of the compositionDSC_0892.MOV 0.15 Tilt Bad In this shot the swing

covers one of the actresses face


Bad This shot was out of focus

DSC_0894.MOV 0.9 Tilt Bad The swing was moving to much in this shot

DSC_0895.MOV 0.9 Long shot Bad The camera moves at the beginning of the shot

DSC_0896.MOV 0.6 Long shot Bad At the end of the shot some of our group are in the shot.

DSC_0897.MOV 0.11 Long shot Good We liked the composition of this shot, the lighting and how the shot looks overall

DSC_0898.MOV 0.19 Long shot Bad One of our group members are in this shot

DSC_0899.MOV 0.4 Pan Bad We felt that too much was shown in this shot

DSC_0900.MOV 0.5 Pan Bad We felt that too much was shown in this shot

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