Print Advert Amendments

This was my First draft of my Print Advert. Since then I have been given feedback based on the advert and I have

now added improvements to advert.

To improve the font issue on the information on the right I decided to add a box over the text. By doing this it has colour which has been faded. This allows you to see the

text fine.

I have also decided to add reviews from magazines on the left. This helps show to people what ratings the

album has. I have used white for the stars as I believe it stands out better against the background.

This is my final Print Advert.