Feedback on First Draft Front Cover

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Instead of having black writing make the colour of the font related to the school colour which is green. Also change the font as the font looks boring; this will not attract readers as the masterhead does not draw them into the magazine. Also make sure that the white isn’t in the background of the text boxes, if they are edited out it will make the magazine more presentable.

Make sure that on the heading either side of the magazine have subheadings so the readers no what to except to read in the magazine and where in the magazine the articles or information we be. Make the subheading look more attractive so the reader is more interested to read the article.

Make sure that the image is edited by the saturation and contrast of the image is more attractive to the reader and makes the magazine look more presentable to buy as this means more people will buy the magazine. This will also make the font stand out more as it will compliment the green of the font.