W H A T H A V E Y O U L E A R N E D F R O M A U D I E N C E F E E D B A C K ?

EVALUATION QUESTION 3

The comments which I have received for my music video, Print advert and Digi-pak has helped me improving drastically. The initial idea for the music video involved a narrative of friends having tension with one another. However receiving the feedback has enabled me to change the concept of the music video, my narrative now covers the topic of the artist being looked for everywhere by his biggest fan, however the fan is not successful in his search.

So the video shows his struggles as he goes

from asking one person to another in order to

find the artist. By changing the narrative it

makes it much more enjoyable storyline to

discuss as while recording we get to meet a

variation of different people and also recieve

feedback from them as well as comments

and improvements in which we could make.

The original narrative of the music video confused many people and some stated that they didn't even have a clue on what the video was about. The narrative was meant to portray a group of friends having tension with one another but yet no seems to want to admit to their faces. However we could think of many decent shots relating to that certain plot and although our mis-en-scene in general was great it did reflect upon the plot of the music video.