Evaluation(feedback)When we pitched our treatment for our video in class we didn’t get a lot of feedbacks but the few

that we received include:• One student said that he liked the Idea of the video he said that it goes well

with the song and its theme (sad and remorse).• Our teacher suggested that we used white bed spread on the bed when

filming.• Another student said that he liked that the roles of in the video has been

reversed, instead of the boy begging the girl to come back, it’s the girl doing so. He said that we challenged the stereotypical view of men always messing up a / their relationship.

• Another student suggested that we must make the room very clean

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vm_xjDx1Wb0&feature=youtu.be Music Video Ideas: Brandy - Take Me Back

Feedback on video (rough cut)When we showed our video to a group of btec students they gave us feedbacks on what they think about the video so far and some of the things we can improve on. Some of the feedbacks include:

• Most of them liked the video, they said that the storyline goes well with the song.

• One girl said that the text at the front of the video is too bright so my partner and I planned to change the colour to grey or black anyone that work better.

• We are planning to shot the two scenes with the phone over again because our teacher said it was too blurry so we are going to do that on Thursday.

• Also when my partner was shooting the scene with the boy in the restaurant through the window we are able to see her reflection so we are also planning to replace that scene with something else.

Feedback on our CD packageWhen my partner and I presented the ideas for our cd cover to the class everyone liked it.

• One person said that the images goes well with the genre of the song• They also suggested that we used white and black as our colour scheme.• we are also planning to use a photo from the scene of the room in which

we filmed our music video on the front of the cd package

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y08RCqXtf9Y&feature=youtu.be Feedback on CD cover