Some suggestions on improving essay writng

Essay 1 : 身在香港 Insufficient knowledge and vocabulary

Ref : Accessing Chinese Book 3: Unit 8 香港遊

Task & stimuli:What are the tourist attractions in your place?Where and how can you get there?What can you do there?Which one do you like most? And why?

Essay 2: An essay to introduce yourself

Concentrate on 1 topic area only:

Family - family members, relationship, culture,family activities …

Festival - favourite festivals, significance, cultural activities, food & functions…Hobbies & interests - What are they?

How and why did you get involved?What are the good (or bad) points?...

Essay 3 : My schoolInsufficient knowledge : do some research on No. of teachers and

students, school facilities etc.

Need extension of the facts: e.g. 設備完善 的電腦室 , 我們可以上網或做功課 … 我喜歡我的學校因為 ( 我 ) 可以 ( 認識 ) 不同國籍

的朋友 …

Essay 4: Introduce myself

The no. of required characters should be 100 – 150

The essay is more like Q & A .

Can expand the description of family

members:

e.g. 弟弟今年十歲 , 讀小學四年級… 我最喜歡妹妹 , 我們常常一起 …

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