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Ian James 2009 / 00
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I’m writting to apply the post of executive director in your company.
I’m writting to apply the post of executive director in your company.
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I’m writting to apply the post of executive director in your companyI’m writting to apply the post of executive director in your company
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I’m writing to apply for the post of executive director in your company.
I’m writing to apply for the post of executive director in your company.
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In my opinion is very important to have car these days.In my opinion is very important to have car these days.
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In my opinion is very important to have car these days.In my opinion is very important to have car these days.
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In my opinion it is very important to have car these days.In my opinion it is very important to have car these days.
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Most of doctors agree that eat fruit is very important if you want to stay healthy.
Most of doctors agree that eat fruit is very important if you want to stay healthy.
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Most of doctors agree that eat fruit is very important if you want to stay healthy.
Most of doctors agree that eat fruit is very important if you want to stay healthy.
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Most doctors agree that eating fruit is very important if you want to stay healthy.
Most doctors agree that eating fruit is very important if you want to stay healthy.
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My brother has a friends that they own a house in Menorca.My brother has a friends that they own a house in Menorca.
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My brother has a friends that they own a house in Menorca.My brother has a friends that they own a house in Menorca.
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My brother has (some) friends that own a house in Menorca.My brother has (some) friends that own a house in Menorca.
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My parents are thinking to sell your house because it’s too much big for them.
My parents are thinking to sell your house because it’s too much big for them.
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My parents are thinking to sell your house because it’s too much big for them.
My parents are thinking to sell your house because it’s too much big for them.
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My parents are thinking about selling their house because it’s too big for them.
My parents are thinking about selling their house because it’s too big for them.
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In this moment, I’m working like a secretary in a textile company.In this moment, I’m working like a secretary in a textile company.
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In this moment, I’m working like a secretary in a textile company.In this moment, I’m working like a secretary in a textile company.
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At the/this moment, I’m working as a secretary in a textile company.At the/this moment, I’m working as a secretary in a textile company.
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We decided stay at home despite it was a beautiful sunny day.We decided stay at home despite it was a beautiful sunny day.
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We decided stay at home despite it was a beautiful sunny day.We decided stay at home despite it was a beautiful sunny day.
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We decided to stay at home although it was a beautiful sunny day. (OR despite the fact that ...)
We decided to stay at home although it was a beautiful sunny day. (OR despite the fact that ...)
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I knew Bob in Madrid about ten years ago. I like visit him as often as I can.
I knew Bob in Madrid about ten years ago. I like visit him as often as I can.
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I knew Bob in Madrid about ten years ago. I like visit him as often as I can.
I knew Bob in Madrid about ten years ago. I like visit him as often as I can.
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I met Bob in Madrid about ten years ago. I like visiting him as often as I can.
I met Bob in Madrid about ten years ago. I like visiting him as often as I can.
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He visited our company for to try and sell us his products.He visited our company for to try and sell us his products.
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He visited our company for to try and sell us his products.He visited our company for to try and sell us his products.
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He visited our company (in order) to try and sell us his products.He visited our company (in order) to try and sell us his products.
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My hobbies include read, play the guitar and collect stamps. My hobbies include read, play the guitar and collect stamps.
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My hobbies include read, play the guitar and collect stamps. My hobbies include read, play the guitar and collect stamps.
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My hobbies include reading, playing the guitar and collecting stamps.
My hobbies include reading, playing the guitar and collecting stamps.
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He ran this morning along the river slowly.He ran this morning along the river slowly.
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He ran this morning along the river slowly.He ran this morning along the river slowly.
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He ran slowly along the river this morning.He ran slowly along the river this morning.
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