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Error Analysis. Tying It All Together. The Plan. Find the errors Identify whats wrong (in 252 vocabulary & concept) Then fix the errors preserving the authors original intent as much as possible. Proofing Error (Ill do this one). - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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  • Error AnalysisTying It All Together

  • The PlanFind the errorsIdentify whats wrong (in 252 vocabulary & concept)Then fix the errors preserving the authors original intent as much as possible.

  • Proofing Error (Ill do this one)As I read the article by Julia P. Stanley on Homosexual Slang, a lot of things came as a surprise, however somethings were familiar because of my relationship with homosexual peers.#2: Explain it in 252 Vocab: Possessive morpheme instead of plural #3: Fix it: some things#1: Find the Error

  • Sentence TypeThe babys mother is a king.

    1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • Sentence TypeShe slept a baby in the crib. Hint: Vi doesnt take an object1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • Sentence TypeAt night, the babys nurses always speak very quiet.

    Hints: Type IADV complement 1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • Sentence TypeWicked is prototypically an adjective. Knowing that it is an adjective automatically informs that it is describing something.

    Hints: Type V (Transitive Verb)Vt requires an object1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • Sentence TypeIf we bless someone, the chance that we will be blessed in return is very likely.

    Hints: The problem is inside a clauseSomething violates Type II patternType II = BE + Adv of Time/Place1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • Think about the TenseAfter this we research for more information to go with what we already knew

    Any errors? Any suggestions for revision?

  • Verb StructureAs time passes by, English speaking persons have become accustom to using the word like as a conjunction.

    Hint: Become acts like the passive BE here1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • Verb/Conjunction Combo A Chinese woman looks at a street art installation on display in Beijing, China, Thursday, Oct. 5, 2006. China's art scene is becoming popular among foreign art collectors push prices ever higher.

  • Verb StructureThe Picture Exchange Communication System is useful to start language skills as well as providing those students who not talk a way of communication.

    Hint: Think Auxillary1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • No Error: Identify the ClausesFor instance if I were to say that was wicked awesome, wicked in this case helps explain how awesome that was.

  • Now Identify these Clauses:

  • PunctuationThe adjectival usage has now been changed to mean something good;and this trend perhaps follows that of the slang word "wicked" which means "very or extremelySince the word wicked has so many different meanings it can be used in any part of speech.1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • You Tell MeThey are trying to make their mark. Just like there are select words that only certain people you know say.

    Hint: Coordinating Conjunction1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • MYTH: Always write in complete sentences.You might wince at the use of fragments as a literary device, but it can be done well. Really.

  • MYTH: Never begin a sentence with a conjunction.And why is that a rule? It isnt. The device can be overused, sure. But it should not be banned.

  • You Tell MeAnimal rights modern movement can be tracked to the 1970s, which was created by philosophers.

    Hint: Adjectivals typically modify close referents1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • You Tell MeThe boy showed his interest in American sports though he was unable to bring his baseball glove to the concentration camp, a sport that had not yet reached Japan. Hint: Homeless Appositive1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • Bad Grammar in the NewsThis undated image from a public relations film on Florida State University provided by the school shows a young Jim Morrison years before his more recognized role as lead singer for The Doors. The state of Florida has found and restored what it believes to be the earliest film of Morrison, shot in the early 60s when he attended Florida State University, 34 years after his death. (AP Photo/Florida State University via State Archives of Florida)

  • This sign is at the bottom of a steep incline in downtown Beijing. It means Caution: Slippery when wet.

  • Compare TheseRoppolo could not find any conclusive evidence to the first usage of the word blue with this meaning. We do not know from where it comes.The word wicked usually has different meanings because of where we come from.Focus on final preposition

  • MYTH: Never end a sentence with a preposition.The company of which he was the president The company he was president of. Dance with the partner you came with Dance with the partner with whom you came

  • You Tell MeIn this sense the word smack is an onomatopoeia. Hint: Count vs. non-count1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • You Tell MeThree words frequently use as slang are cool, bad, and sweet.

    Hint: A verb is being used as an adjective, but hasnt been modified yet 1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • You Tell MeMothers are often told to let their children listen to classical music to improve his future learning, so it seems like a possible benefit for those learning a new language.

    Hint: Its NOT just the sexist style 1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • You Tell Me

    In this ever changing world in which we live inPaul McCartney1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • You Tell MeAll contact center technicians work together in a single room, with most of the workspaces around the perimeter.

    Hint: To comma or not to commaConfession:This is an error from one of my papers 1. Find the Error2. Explain it3. Fix it

  • DIY ExerciseDo It Yourself (or with a friend)

    1. Find the Error(s)2. Explain it/them using 252 Vocab3. Fix it/them