english writing review
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ENGLISH WRITINGD a t e . A P R I L . 0 8 . 2 0 1 5
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PARAGRAPH
SUPPORTINGSENTENCE
TOPICSENTENCE
CONCLUDINGSENTENCE
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PARAGRAPH
TOPIC SENTENCE
The first sentence in a pargraph is a sentence that names the topic and tells what the paragraph will explain about the topic.
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PARAGRAPH
SUPPORTING SEN-TENCE
The middle sentences in a paragraph are called the supporting sentences. Supporting sentences give examples or other details about the topic.
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PARAGRAPH
CONCLUDING SENTENCE
The last sentences in a paragraph of-ten repeats the topic sentence in dif -ferent words or summarizes the main points.
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Main topic: Sejong University
BuildingDepartmentEstablishment yearFestivalLocationEtc.
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MANY SEN-TENCES
SU’s location is comfortable for commu-nity.SU has many interesting names for its buildings.SU has many places to visit.SU has a museum.SU was founded in 1945.SU has many annual events that are held by the students.SU has many qualities for students.SU has its own subway station.SU is famous for school food.In SU, there are a lot of foreign students.SU has many buildings.
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INTERESTING SENTENCES
SU’s location is comfortable for commu-nity.SU has many interesting names for its buildings.SU has many places to visit.SU has a museum.SU was founded in 1945.SU has many annual events that are held by the students.SU has many qualities for students.SU has its own subway station.SU is famous for school food.In SU, there are a lot of foreign students.SU has many buildings.
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SU has its own subway station.
But the name of station is Children Grand Park
WHY THE SENTENCES ARE BORING?
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SU is famous for school food.
But our cousin almost don’t visit to SU to eat school food.
WHY THE SENTENCES ARE BORING?
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SU has many buildings.
But every university has many buildings too.
WHY THE SENTENCES ARE BORING?
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THE END
Now, let’s talk about Sejong University!
T h a n k ’ s f o r l i s t e n i n g