ENG 101 Thesis, Title Lead Exercise

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The necessity of a leash on school grounds Law requires that a public food place should meet certain requirements before that distribution of its food. It is good to know that our school has passed that examination but I think that its cafeteria also could use some delightful changes. When lunchtime comes, the ring of the bell becomes the signal for a stampede of furious bulls rushing across the halls towards the lunchroom. Constantly, I am enraged, and revolted by how much time I spend waiting, of which, I mostly spend watching people cut line in front of me. Aside from the chaos, the foods they serve lunch aren’t that good nor are the disgusting tables in which we were condemned to eat. Our cafeteria would be greatly improved if one or more teachers were issued during lunchtime to enforce regulations and keep order in lunch lines and insist on students to pick up after their own trash, and the food would vary daily by delicious culinary delicacies. 160 Words. Grade 12 reading level. Facts, Description. 5.

All in a days work With a valiant smile and imagination above the clouds, I marched to my first day of work like any usual day. However, unlike any other day, the stars cried over me making rivers where I walked while enraged dragons roamed the gloomy sky tumbling the ground with their winds and expressing their hate in bolts of lightening. Just a mere minute had passed before the cold barrel of a gun grudged against the back of my skull in the public streets. As I stood frozen my hands up in the air, all I could hear were the beats against my chest of my heart trying to lash out of my body. I could see a hand going through my pockets, but my body was too numb to feel any sensation. But who could’ve thought that before I even took my guard duty, my first night as a security guard could’ve turned one to be one of the most frightening experiences of my life. 163 Words. Grade 10.7 reading level. Description, Imagery. 7.

Inventions that shook the world In the mid 20th century, one of the greatest inventions was the internet. With it, an enormous amount of useful information was available to be accessed and used by anyone, which in time also became one of the most frequent sources used for commercialism. However, this incredibly useful method for acquiring one’s requisite without much effort could not have been successful without the invention of the personal computer, which unlike the original prototype, was unbelievably wieldy to fit one’s home and later in the

century, one’s income. Lastly was the television, which like the internet also became a great source for commercialism and information but brought entertainment to daily lives. Amongst countless of the inventions produced in the twentieth century, the internet, computer, and the airplane dramatically changed the lives of all Americans. 133 Words. Grade 12 reading level. Facts, Description. 9.

In it for the money As taught in economics classes, all big businesses entrepreneurs are completely in

for the profits, while for some companies, revenue is all the matters even if some of their products produce deadly effects. In achieving such profits, these companies focus on the people’s interest, whether it involves personal pleasures, addiction habits, or a form to release stress. As any could see in our daily lives, most of these advertisers target young people with the marketing of cigarettes, alcohol, and adult movies, which today are some of most profitable markets.

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Commodity of the simple store Everyday I ran around mom and pop’s store with my childish manners, screaming and jumping, hoping to get attention from pops. I was only 8 years old then and I had always thought that mom and pop’s store were the best in the whole wide world without even knowing the reason. It could have been because of their sweet homemade cotton candy that they made, but I knew that was not it. Ever since a child, I used to watch foreigners come in and greet my parents with their usual jovial expressions and hand gestures, and from time to time, these strangers would give me a piece of candy for no reason at all. It has been 7 years since then, but now I finally understand that it is because of that everyday friendly, jovial, and warm environment that makes independent “mom and pop” stores so superior to larger chain stores. 151 Words. Grade 12 reading level. Description, Anecdote.