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    Grammar PortfolioYour essay is 9 pages in length. Create a complete MLA

    Works Cited Page using sources listed on Weebly. – interview in person with Robert Akins, November 19, 2010

     – Website article by Dr. Joshua Smith entitled The Many Uses ofPencils. It was published March 22, 2010 and viewed August3, 2012. The URL is www.articlesonline.smith/pencils.html

     – Pens vs. Pencils written by Henry Goldman and ElizabethHoward. Published by Gold House in Philadelphia in 1989.

     – The Beauty of Mechanical Pencils by Alexander Morrow,published by Westing Forge in Denver, CO in 2011.

     – Short video called The Ink of Mystery , directed by BernardHoward and starring Kurt Sherman, distributed by PublicVideo in November 2009.

     – Encyclopedia of Style article, “Writing Utensils,” by JohnGruber, published in 2008, 5th edition

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    • Review MLA activity

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    Eng 102BC

    Summarizing

    ParaphrasingQuoting

    Quotation marks

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    How to write a summary

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    Summarize the following sonnet:Let me not to the marriage of true minds

    Admit impediments. Love is not love

    Which alters when it alteration finds,

    Or bends with the remover to remove:

    O no! it is an ever-fixed mark

    That looks on tempests and is never shaken;

    It is the star to every wandering bark,Whose worth’s unknown, although his height be taken.

    Love’s not Time’s fool, though rosy lips and cheeks

    Within his bending sickle’s compass come:

    Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,But bears it out even to the edge of doom.

    If this be error and upon me proved,

    I never writ, nor no man ever loved.

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    Summarize the following sonnet:My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun;

    Coral is far more red than her lips red;

    If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;

    If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.

    I have seen roses damask’d, red and white,

    But no such roses see I in her cheeks;

    And in some perfumes there is more delightThan in the breath that from my mistress reeks.

    I love to hear her speak, yet well I know

    That music hath a far more pleasing sound;

    I grant I never saw a goddess go;My mistress, when she walks, treads on ground.

    And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare

    As any she belied with false compare.

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    Paraphrase

    Before summarizing, what must sometimes be

    done first?

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    What is a paraphrase? Is it longer, the

    same length, or shorter than an

    original passage?

    • Puts passage into own words

    • Same length or longer than an original

    passage

     – Might be longer when attempting to clarify

    difficult language or text

    WATCH OUT FOR PATCHWRITING!!!

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    Is a summary longer, the same length,

    or shorter than an original passage?

    • Shorter than an original passage

    • Sometimes must paraphrase before writing a

    summary in order to understand passage

    WATCH OUT FOR PATCHWRITING!!!

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    Quotation Marks

    What is a direct quotation?

    • Exactly repeats what someone said or wrote

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    Quotation MarksWhen are quotation marks used?

    Use quotation marks around direct quotationsLina asked, “Do you think we should ask aquestion?” 

     – Quotation marks always appear in pairs

    • Use quotation marks around titles of poems, songtitles, short stories, magazine or newspaperarticles, essays, speeches, chapter titles, andepisodes of TV or radio shows

    “Just Like a Woman,” by Bob Dylan

    • ITALICIZE/UNDERLINE titles of magazines, novels,books, newspapers…

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    Quotation Marks

    How is a quotation within a quotationpunctuated?

    • With single quotation marks

    The man said, “I’m sorry, officer, but did I hear youcorrectly when you said, ‘Drive into that ditch’?” 

    What is an indirect quotation?• Restates what someone said or wrote, but not

    word for word

    Rachel told the security guard that sheneeded to enter the building for officialbusiness.

    • DO NOT USE QUOTATION MARKS FOR INDIRECTQUOTATIONS!!!

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    Quotation Marks

    Punctuation & Quotation marks

    •Place periods and commas inside

    The name of the short story is “Hills Like WhiteElephants.” 

    Put question marks and exclamation pointsinside quotation marks unless they apply to thewhole sentence

    Bedtime at my house is marked by “Mommy, can I

    tell you a story now?” 

    Have you heard the old proverb “Do not climb thehill until you reach it”? 

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    Quotation Marks

    Punctuation & Quotation marks

    • Put colons and semicolons outsideHarold wrote, “I regret that I am unable to

    attend the fundraiser for AIDS research”; his

    letter, however, came with a substantialcontribution

    • Do not use quotation marks to draw

    attention to familiar slang, to disown triteexpressions, or to justify an attempt athumor

    It was a “ballpark figure.” 

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    Using quotations in research

    • Use sparingly

    • Too many quotes causes a loss of ownership

    Also makes readers question your knowledgeof the topic

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    When should quotes be used in

    research-based essays?

    • Quoting memorable language

     – Worded so eloquently or powerfully that

    summarizing/paraphrasing would sacrifice

    impact and meaning

    • Quoting clear and concise language

     – To summarize/paraphrase would make it too

    wordy• Quoting authoritative language

     – Lends authority and credibility to your essay

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    What techniques can be used to

    incorporate sources into your sentences?

    • Quote only part of sentence or paragraph

    needed.

     – “Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,

    but bears it out even to the edge of doom.”

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    What techniques can be used to

    incorporate sources into your sentences?

    • Avoid freestanding quotations

     – Use attributive tags

    • Shakespeare insists that “Love alters not with his brief

    hours and weeks, but bears it out even to the edge ofdoom.”

    • “Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,”

    Shakespeare insists, “but bears it out even to the edge of

    doom.”• Shakespeare insists that true lovers are persistent: “Love

    alters not with his brief hours and weeks, but bears it out

    even to the edge of doom.”

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    What techniques can be used to

    incorporate sources into your sentences?

    • Incorporate the quotation into the flow of

    your own sentence

     – In Sonnet 116, true lovers “[bear] it out even to

    the edge of doom.”

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    What do you do when you want to quote

    the beginning and end of a passage?

    • Use...ellipses...

     – Shakespeare’s description of true love argues

    that “love is not love which alters when it

    alteration finds...but bears it out even to theedge of doom.”

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    Grammar Portfolio

    4. Break each quotation mark rule (there are 8

    typed in green)

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    For Tuesday…Read Chapter 8 (pgs. 241-242, 253-256)