... In my ideal world, there wouldn’t be people suffering...

... In this dream world, people would be free...

...free from any discrimination based on race, color, religion or any other kind...

... There be no violence and no thieves...

... And so, this is what my ideal world would be like... How about yours?

THE ENDAuthor: Guilherme SilvaEditorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. MouraIllustrator: JuliusTanPublisher: www.storybird.comDate: II Semester - Summer 2014

A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”

CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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