In my ideal world, there will be peace...

... And everyone will be kings and queens.

In my world, everyone puts their problem aside to have fun..

Also, there is no internet, mobile phones or technology for peope to be like they are today... Today people don’t have time for each other, they only have time for technology...

And this is my ideal world... All those who want to be free can live here. Also, those who want to be in a different society and live as a bird or live as you like are welcome to live here!

THE ENDAuthor: AndréEditorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. MouraIllustrator: JchanartPublisher: www.storybird.comDate: II Semester - Summer 2014

A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”

CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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