... There is peace, because Jesus is theLord...

... There is truefriendship ...

... There are happyfamilies...

... There is joy amongthe animals in nature...

... There isn’tdarkness, but...

... There is plenty ofclarity and light...

... There is safety in being alone...

... There is thepreservation ofnature.

Finally, in my ideal world it rains thelove of God.

THE ENDAuthor: Irene Gomes Pereira

Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura

Illustrator: Zuzol

Publisher: www.storybird.com

Period: II Semester - Summer 2014

A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”

CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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