How to make our sentences better in writing?
Designer: Li Yu
Warming-up:The good voice of Class Four Grade Three:
1. 这项实验表明：适量的运动如果有规律地进行，能够改善我们的健康。
2. 镇上的大多数人都强烈拥护为孩子们建一个运动场的计划。
The experiment shows that proper amounts of exercise, if _____ out regularly, can improve our health.
The majority of people in the town strongly support the plan _____ a playground for children.
carried
to build
• 3. 将近 1000 人在这里定居，他们中的许多人都背井离乡去城市追求更美好的生活。
4. 她酷爱的芭比玩具在她的童年期间给她带来了如此多的快乐。
The settlement is home to nearly 1,000 people, many of _____ left their village homes for a better life in the city.
The Barbie toys she was quite fond of _____ her so much pleasure during her childhood.
whom
brought
Pre-writing: task1: endless 'love'
1.My son ________ ( 酷爱 )playing the piano.
2.Many football fans ______( 痴迷 ) Beckham.
is fond of
are crazy about
to like something, especially something you have liked for a long time
liking someone very much, or very interested in something:
3. 他热衷于摇滚音乐。He has a ________ for rock music.
great enthusiasm
4.He lay in the sofa, ____ ______( 沉浸于 ) the book.
absorbed in
a strong feeling of interest and enjoyment about something and an eagerness to be involved in it
to interest someone so much that they do not pay attention to other things:
I love reading ！
1. 学生忙于学习，长期忽视阅读。Students are busy with their study and don`t pay attention ___ reading.
_____ with their daily study, many students tend to put books_____, _______ them untouched for months.Many students , occupied with their daily study, often ______ to realize the importance of reading.
While-writing task2: on reading
Busy aside
leaving
fail
to
busy doing something
to not succeed in achieving something
2. 读书使人快乐，忘记烦恼。 ______ can make people _______ and make people forget worries.
Those ___ like reading are more likely to live a happy life _____ from worries.
who
free
happy Reading
3. 对文学一无所知的人不可能真正理解生活和爱的意义。
If a man doesn`t know anything about literature, he can`t really understand the meaning of ___ and _____.
Man knowing _______ about literature can`t really understand the meaning of life and love.
nothing
life love
4.Reading can change a person`s whole life.
Only by reading _____we take hold of our fortune and make a _______ to it.
The habit of reading ______ at an early age is bound to( 注定 ) make a ________ to one`s whole life.
can
difference
differenceformed
5. 读书非常重要，要坚持读书。
Reading is very _______. We should keep reading.
Reading is to us what water is to _____. It is necessary that we _______ read more books in our daily lives.
fish
important
should
6. 所读书籍应难度适中；
We should choose books ______ are ______ too difficult nor too easy for you to read.
neither
The books we choose should be neither too ____ nor too _____ .
difficulteasy
which
A tadpole transforms into a frog.
As a tadpole changes into a frog, its tail is gradually absorbed. a small creature that has a l
ong tail, lives in water, and grows into a frog .have a frog in your throat
= to have difficulty in speaking, especially because of a sore throat
7 ．要读自己感兴趣的书，但更要读对自己有益的书。
• Read books that not only ______you but also _______ you. benefit
interest
Post-writing
Task3: Look at the picture carefully and tell the class how you understand it.
As we can see in the picture, a girl is getting stuck( 卡 ) in a bottle. Regardless of this situation, she looks optimistic, _____on a pile of books she has read and _____ in reading the one in her hands.
sitting
absorbed
• That is because she believes that the books can serve __ a ladder leading up to the opening of the bottle. The ____ books she reads, the sooner she will get out of the bottle.
asmore
• This picture ____ me of the famous saying: Knowledge is power. And the books are the sources of knowledge. Books, _____ can give us power to conquer difficulties, are the best friends of us.
which
reminds
• When we come across problems in our daily life, we can always refer to books, _____ can help us find out solutions. Just like the girl in the picture, despite the fact ____ she is stuck in the bottle, she could ____ get out of it by reading as many books as possible.
which
eventuallythat
• As for us students, by reading books, we can accumulate( 积累 ) adequate(enough) knowledge to face the challenge in the future. ___ let's read more and success will be ahead of us.
So
• Solutions to making a better sentence:• 1. think about the different expressions in words
and phrases • 2. focus on the different patterns in sentences• 3. try to accumulate some better sentences you lik
e according to the various topics
• REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR ATTENTION AND COOPERATION!
Homework: read the passage again and again ,then try to recite it as quickly as you can.
