diagnostic test dr. lam, tecm 5195. original the union of concerned scientists have developed plans...
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Diagnostic Test
Dr. Lam, TECM 5195
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Original
The Union of Concerned Scientists have developed plans for a sport utility vehicle (SUV), that is friendlier to the environment than SUVs on the market.
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Sub-Verb agreement and restrictive clause
The Union of Concerned Scientists HAS developed plans for a sport utility vehicle
(SUV), that is friendlier to the environment than SUVs on the market.
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The UCS Exemplar, is equivalent to the Ford Explorer in nearly every way.
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Simple sentence
The UCS Exemplar, is equivalent to the Ford Explorer in nearly every way.
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Original
The real difference lays in it’s higher efficiency, and lower emission of pollutants.
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Lays/lies, It’s/its and compound predicate
The real difference lies in it’s higher efficiency, and lower emission of pollutants.
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The Exemplar uses technologies to protect the planet; engine advances, transmission improvements, drag-reduction techniques, improved exhaust-control equipment and weight-saving technology.
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Colon, series comma
The Exemplar uses technologies to protect
the planet: engine advances, transmission improvements, drag-reduction techniques, improved exhaust-control equipment, and weight-saving technology.
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Original
Changes to the engine improve control over air and fuel, reduce engine losses, and minimizing energy waste during idling.
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Parallelism
Changes to the engine improve control over air and fuel, reduce engine losses, and minimize energy waste during idling.
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The vehicle’s streamlined body lowered aerodynamic drag and low-resistance tires provide further gains.
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Compound sentence with coordinating conjunction
The vehicle’s streamlined body lowered
aerodynamic drag, and low-resistance tires provide further gains.
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By using high-strength lightweight steel, 15 percent of the total vehicle weight was eliminated.
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Dangling modifier
By using high-strength lightweight steel, designers eliminated 15 percent of the total vehicle weight.
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These technologies would save 2,900 to 3,900 gallons of gasoline over their lifetime. Therefore cutting emissions of global-warming gases by 37 to 50 tons.
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Fragment
These technologies would save 2,900 to 3,900 gallons of gasoline over their
lifetime, therefore cutting emissions of global-warming gases by 37 to 50 tons.
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Original
Performance actually increases with these changes, the Exemplar shaves 1.7 seconds off the Explorer’s acceleration speed of 12.4 seconds to go from 0 to 60 miles per hour.
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Comma splice
Performance actually increases with these
changes: the Exemplar shaves 1.7 seconds off the Explorer’s acceleration speed of 12.4 seconds to go from 0 to 60 miles per hour.
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Original
Engineers met safety requirements by adopting technologies, which have undergone a crash analysis by the American Iron and Steel Institute.
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Restrictive
Engineers met safety requirements by adopting technologies that have undergone a crash analysis by the American Iron and Steel Institute.
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Original
The lighter weight avoids crashes because the driver can maneuver and stop easily.
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Faulty Predication
The lighter weight helps drivers avoid crashes because the driver can maneuver and stop easily.
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Original
Its a big step to move a concept from the drawing board to the driveway.
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It’s/its
It’s a big step to move a concept from the drawing board to the driveway.
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Original
Exemplar-type vehicles are well within Detroits capability, however, getting them into production will require prodding from policymakers.
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Possessive, compound sentence
Exemplar-type vehicles are well within
Detroit’s capability; however, getting them into production will require prodding from policymakers.
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Original
Consumers would save money driving the Exemplar. Although the sticker price might be a few hundred dollars higher than the price for the Explorer.
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Fragment
Consumers would save money driving the
Exemplar, although the sticker price might be a few hundred dollars higher than the price for the Explorer.
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Original
The technology improvements which would pay for themselves after two years of lower fuel bills would slash United States emissions by over 240 million tons annually.
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Nonrestrictive clause
The technology improvements, which would pay for themselves after two years of
lower fuel bills, would slash United States emissions by over 240 million tons annually.
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Original
We can put America back on the road to reducing environmental damage caused by driving with stronger policies.
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Misplaced Modifier
With stronger policies, we can put America back on the road to reducing environmental damage caused by driving.
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2 examples of each
Coordinating conjunction:
Subordinating conjunction:
Relative pronoun:
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2 examples of each
Coordinating conjunction: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so (FANBOYS)
Subordinating conjunction: because, although, since, before, while, etc.
Relative pronoun: who, which, that, whomever, whichever